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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3.


Next morning,ETF office.
Everybody reach the office.they were sitting in the conference room,finishing the last case's paperworks.
Suddenly,a man came up and ran towards the conference room.
Rathod looked quizically at him.
Rathod: Kya hua,Raman? Itna haaph kyun rahe ho?
Raman:Sir,Commissioner Sir aaye hai.
Rathod: WHAT??? Are you sure?
Raman:Yes,Sir.Even,Ma'am is here,as well.
Arjun: Ma'am... U mean...Hamari saas?
Raman: Yes Sir.
Arjun: Ok,you go.
Raman: Yes sir.
Arjun:Riya,tumhe isske baare mein pata tha?
Riya: Na baba na...mujhe kuch pata nahi thha.I guess,Sir,aise hi surprise visit kar rahe honge.
Rathod: Absolutely.
After a while,Commisioner and his wife come inside the conference room.
Everybody stood up and gave a crisp salute to them.
Rathod: Papa...I mean... Sir... Aap yahaan??? Yahaan aane ki kasht kyun ki aapne,Sir?Humein bula lete office pe,Hum wahaan aajate.
Commissioner: Aisa kuch nahi hai,Sameer.I am not in my working mode now.I am on leave.
Arjun: Kya hua,Sir?
Commissioner: Waise,I was taking your Mom in an official trip to Japan.Humare saath kuch senior officers aur unke spouses ja rahe hai,toh socha,ki main bata du.Aur,haan,maine DIG sahab se baat ki hai.Kuch dino keliye,ETF koi case nahi legi.You all will go on a holiday.Aur,maine suna hai ki,parso,tumhare college,St.Xaviers ka Reunion hai.Toh tum sab wahaan ja rahe ho.No arguments on it.Have i made myself clear,Officers?
Everybody: YES SIR...
Commissioner: Good.Aur jo kuch pending cases hai,woh maine Mumbai ke Crime Branch mein shift karwa diye hai,so dont worry.Enjoy ur day.Aur,haan,Apni zindagi ke har pal ko khushnuma banao,ke,baad mein na pachtana pare,kyun,kya pata,Kal Ho Na Ho,ok.
Bye.
Everybody: Yes Sir.
Commissioner and his wife leaves.
All start enjoying..
Precap: Reunion in St.Xaviers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Thanks for all the valuable comments.
I am really touched.
As i post my stories from cell and comment also,it becomes quite slow for me.
It becomes quite impossible for me to reply to individual comments.
I hope everybody understands me.
Sincere apologies to everyone.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
fantastic update :) loved it
loved shree's dialogue "kal bara dhamaka hone wala hai uss Samjhhe ya Samjhhau and uss Damn It ke life main." 😆
finally they are going to the reunion :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice update... cant wait the celebration to start!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
lovely update..!!!
finally they are goin to reunion..!!!
cant wait fr the next part..!!
continue soon..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great part
can't wait 4 the reunion to start
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Holidayyy...!!!!!!!!!!
yiippiieee...


ACP pati-ss... ab kaha jaoge hume ignore karke...

maza aa gaya..
specially jab dono saas-sasuma se dar gaye... lol... 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ankita2804

Holidayyy...!!!!!!!!!!

yiippiieee...


ACP pati-ss... ab kaha jaoge hume ignore karke...

maza aa gaya..
specially jab dono saas-sasuma se dar gaye... lol... 🤣



haha... U said it ryt,Anki.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Part 4.

Everybody in excitement mode.
Shree: Ri,yaar,parso Reunion hai aur humare paas naye kapre nahi hai.Chal,shopping karke aate hai.
Riya:Shree,tum ne toh meri muh ki baat chhinli.Chal.Arjun,hum log shopping jarahe hai.
Arjun:Thik hai.Mere liye bhi kuch le ana,thik hai.
Riya: Ok,love.
Except Arjun and Rathod,everybody leaves for shopping.
Chotu driving the car.
Ankita:Humara plan kam kar gaya.Yay...
Riya:Haan,sach mein.Mujhe toh abhi bhi vishwas nahi horaha hai ki humara plan kam kar gaya.
Chotu:Baat toh saach hai.Par,Ri,mujhe yeh bata,ki,Commissioner sir kaise maan gaye?
Riya:Mere baba jo thhere.Maine hi unko yeh sab kahaa thha ke aap mumma ko lekar ETF office pohucho.Papa ki baat yeh dono maane ya na maane,par,Mumma ke samne undono ki bolti bandh ho jati hai,aab Samjhhe ya Samjhao?
Chotu: Kya bariya planning ki hai,Ri.Ekdum dhasu.
Shree:Hum mall pohuch gaye,Chalo,utro gari se.
All four went inside the shopping mall.

Scene shifts to ETF Office.
Rathod:Rj,college ke din bhi kitni haseen thhe...Uss dinko toh main kabhi bhi nahi bhulunga jab tune aur maine ek saath sabke samne Riya aur Ankita ko propose kya thha.
Arjun:Haan,Sam.Hum chhe ke chhe toh college ke top favorites mein thhe.Infact,uss kanjoos Princi ki hitlist mein bhi thhe.
Par,jo bhi ho,aaj hum jo hai,uss college ki badaulat hi hai.Agar hum St.Xaviers mein na milte,toh hum chhe ke chhe ek saath,ek hi chhad ke niche kam nahi kar rahe hote. St.Xaviers ki baat hi alag hai.
Accha,aab ghar chalte hai.
Rathod:Haan,chal.Waise bhi,aaj koi case nahi hai.Chal,tujhe ghar drop kardeta hu.

After the convo,Rathod and Arjun left for their homes,whereas,the others finished their shoppings and left for their homes.



2 days later,Reunion wala day.
In the evening.
Rathod: Anki,jaldi karo.humein late ho rahi hai.maine sabse promise kiya thha ki hum sab ek saath hi chalenge.Sab log aagaye hai.
Ankita: Yes,Sam. I am done.

Ankita comes out wearing a knee length backless white gown.Rathod was looking at her from top to bottom.She was looking really hot.
Rathod went near her and grabbed her by her waist.
Ankita felt his gaze,and hid her face in Rathod's arms,while blushing.
Rathod:Aaj kisiko marne ka plan hai kya?
Ankita:Haan,woh toh hai.Aab jaldi chalo.Sab humara wait kar rahe hai.Sab party main pata chalega.
Rathod:Haan,chalo.Ek minute,tumne sindoor nahi lagaya?
Ankita: Haawww... Hey Bhagwaan...Main kaise bhul gayi yeh????
Sam,tum laga do na,please.
Rathod:Sure.
Rathod takes a pinch of sindoor and applies it on her forehead parting.She was now complete.
Ankita:Chalein?
Rathod:Yes sure.

Yahaan,Rathod ke ghar k drawing room mein,Arjun,Riya,Shree aur Chhotu undono ka intezar kar rahe hai.Tabhi Rathod aur Ankita bahar aate hai.
Chotu:Wah,Ankita.Ekdum dhasu lag rahi ho.
Shree:Super top.
Ankita:Thanks,Shree aur Chotu.Waise,tum dono bhi kaafi hot lagrahe ho.
Rathod raises an eyebrow on that comment and asked Ankita.
Rathod:Agar woh dono ho lagrahe hai,toh main kya lagraha hu?
Ankita:Aap toh super hot lagrahe ho.Bikul Jean Claude Van Damne ki tarha.
Rathod:Thanks,Love.Waise tum toh meri Katrina Kaif lagrahi ho,bilkul hot and sexy.
Ankita blushes at that.
Arjun:Waise,Sam,tu bohut handsome dikh raha hai.Riya,tum toh Kylie Minogue ki tarha,beautiful,hot,sexy and happening lag rahi ho.Ankita,tum bohut hi sundar lagrahi ho.
Ankita:Thanks,Arjun.
Riya:Thanks,Jaan.Ab chalein.Partt keliye der ho rahi hai.
Within 5 minutes,they leave.
After an hour,the reach St.Xaviers.
When they stepped inside the college,all the beautiful memories were clouding in their mind. The principal greeted them.After the greetings,all went inside to PARTY...


LIGHTS,MUSIC,DANCING WAS ON...
Background mein gana bajraha thha,
"Teri aakhiyo ka vaar,
Jaise sher ka shikar,
tera husn dhuedaar,
jaise jalta cigar,
tere pyaar ka nasha,
kabhi aar kabhi paar,
tera pyaar pyaar pyaar HOOKAH BAR."
Arjun-Riya and Rathod-Ankita,danced on this song,burning the dance floor with Riya and Ankita's jaanleva aadayein and katilana nazar and their sexy dance steps.
Arjun aur Rathod unndono ko dekh haeraan ho jaate hai and say,
Arjun:Sam,Ankita aur Riya itna accha dance karti hai,malum na thha.Chal,usse pehle koi aur indono ke saath dance kaare,hum log chalte hai dance karne,unke saath.
Rathod:Haan,chal.
As Arjun and Rathod hit the dance floor,music changed.
BG mein ek bohut hi mashhur gana baj raha thha.
"Waiting for tonight,
Oh... O... O...
I dreamt of this world for so long..."
As the song started,the two couples started to dance in teach other's embrace,as if they were really,"WAITING FOR TONIGHT",to only enjoy each other's company and to forget everything.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...!!!
loved it..!!!
loved their bonding...!!!

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