OS: Waiting For Tonight. *FINISHED*

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Riya and Ankita were thinking about going to a club with their,"not-so-interested-in-entertainment akdu ACP husbands".
Riya was thinking hard and was spinning the pen,just like Arjun does.
Ankita(slightly irritated): What the hell are you doing,Riya? Kaise hum chaaro jaye uss club mein party karne keliye? Kuch socho...
Riya: Soch toh rahi hu...
Kuch der baad,Riya,in an exciting tone,shouted,"EUREKA"...
Ankita: kya????? Tujhe idea mila??? Kya?????
Riya: Haan,mila na... Parso hi toh hai,woh????
Ankita(confused): Kya hai parso???
Riya: Tujhe malum nahi kya hai parso?
Ankita: Naa,go.Ami jani porshu ki.(Naa,baba.I dont know what is happening day after tomorrow).
Riya: Hey Maa Durga.Ei meye ke niye ami koi jabo???(Hey,Maa Durga...Iss larki ko main kahaan jau?)
Riya: Parso,humara college,St.Xaviers ka reunion hai.
Ankita: KYA?????? Sacchi?
Riya: Haan... Aab khel mein aayega asli mazaa.Arjun aur Rathod sir apne college se bohut hi pyaar karte hai.woh dono kabhi bhi mana nahi karenge.Par,phir bhi...Inn dono ko kaise manana hai,yeh mujhe malum hai. Baba ko phone lagao.Aur,Shree aur Chotu ko bhi iss baat ka khulasa karo,kyunki,woh dono bhi iss college ke ex-students rahe hai,hum charo ki tarha...



Arjun and Rathod comes from a crime scene...
Rathod: Arey wah,Arjun. Inhe dekh to zara.Kya baat kar rahi hogi yeh dono?? Kuch toh zaroor chut raha hai?
Arjun: Haan,Sam... Kuch toh zaroor chh... Arey,tune meri line kyun churayi????
Rathod: Hehe... Something is better than nothing...
Waise,iss line ko kisi film ke andaar dialogue ke roop main hota,toh,yeh line zaroor superhit hota...Ekdum Dhasu,jaisa Chotu bolta hai...
Arjun: KYA?????? mere mooh se sunne mein tujhe accha nahi lagta hai,kya?
Rathod: Arey yaar,tu khamakha gussa ho raha hai.I was joking..Chal unki baatein sunte hai.
Arjun:Chal...
Rathod and Arjun enter ACP Ankita's cabin.
Ankita: Sam,aapko knock karna nahi aata hai?
Rathod: Haan,aata toh hai.
Tum dono kya baatein kar rahi thhi?
Arjun:Haan,meri ACP sahiba.kya baatein ho rahi thhi?
Riya: For your kind info,ACP Arjun Rawte,yeh aapki ACP sahiba aur Rathod sir ki ACP sahiba ki beech ki baat hai. Waise hum ek hint de sakte hai.
Rathod: Kaisa hint?
Arjun: Hint kya hai?
Ankita: Arjun,parso,humare college mein ek reunion party hai.
Invitation cards aaye hai.hum sab keliye.
Arjun: Wow... Yeh toh baari khush khabri di hai tumne,Ankita.Thanks... Hum waha jayenge,Rathod.Kyun?
Rathod:Haan,zaroor.

After thinking a while...
Arjun: Par hum kaise jayenge????Woh case ka kya?
Rathod:Haan,Arjun... Aab hum kya karein????

Riya's Mindvoice(MV): yeh hi hona baki thha...Aab aaplog dekhiye hum kya karte hai.Aaplog toh zaroor aaoge iss party mein,by hook or by crook...Samjhhe ya samjhau?



Next part tomorrow.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆Loved it😳
Ankita aur riya and RR ki bonding😳
Woowww planning chal rahhi hai...hmm🤔
Riya..Acp..wow!😎
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lola123

<font color="#990099">😆Loved it😳</font>

<font color="#990099">Ankita aur riya and RR ki bonding😳</font>
<font color="#990099">Woowww planning chal rahhi hai...hmm🤔</font>
<font color="#990099">Riya..Acp..wow!😎</font>
<font color="#990099">Continue soon</font>




hmmm...
Thora intezar karna...intezar ka phal meetha hota hai...
planning toh hogi,zabardast planning,woh bhi kiske saath,Arjun aur Rathod ke saasur ke saath,yani,Riya aur Ankita ke papa,Mumbai Police ke commissioner ke saath.Aur iss planning mein Commissioner uncle,Shree and Chotu Riya aur Ankita ka saath denge.
Aab ayega maza.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it... rathod n rawte seems really close!!!

update soon... wanna see sahiba's crook..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
great start :) loved it
loved riya and ankita's conversation...
arjun and rathore's bonding is so cute :)
so they are married :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatima15

great start :) loved it

loved riya and ankita's conversation...
arjun and rathore's bonding is so cute :)
so they are married :)
continue soon






thanks a lot...
Yes...
Rathod is married to Ankita,and,our Arjun is married to Riya.
In this OS,all of them are friends.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum os..!!!!
ankita n riya wanting to take rathore n arjun to party..!!! nyc..!!!!
loved their bonding..!!!
riya acp wow..!!!!
continue soon..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Even I'm waiting for tonight wen ull update!! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note: people,
in this part,there will be some Bengali conversations,as well.So,to help with that,I will put the Hindi translation of the bengali convo in brackets.


Part 2.
Riya: Anki,baba ke phone dao.(Anki,baba ko phone lagao).
Ankita: Thik achhe.(Thik hai).

Ankita calls her father...Her father picks up the call...
Commissioner:Ankita...kemon achish,Maa? (Ankita,kaisi ho,meri beti)?
Ankita: Baba,ami bhalo achi. Tumi kemon acho?(Baba,main acchi hu.Aap kaise ho)?
Commissioner: Main accha hu,beta...Bolo,kya baat hai?
Riya kahaan hai?
Ankita:Baba,Riya aapse baat karna chahti hai.Yahaan hai.Lijiye,baat kijiye.

Ankita hands over the phone to Riya.
Riya: Haan,Baba.Kemon acho?(Haan,Baba.Kaise hai aap)?
Commissioner: Ami bhalo achi.Bol,ki bolte chash?(Main thik hu.Bata,kya baat hai)?
Riya: Baba,parso,humara college,St.Xaviers ka reunion party hai.Hum dono jayenge,par,aapke do honest ACPs' nahi jayenge.Aab aap hi kuch kijiye.Kal aap ETF office aake kuch kariye.Aur,iss plan mein Shree aur Chotu bhi shamil honge aap ke saath,thik hai.
Commissioner: Hmm... Baat bohut gambhir lagta hai.Thik hai,main kal aaunga ETF,thik hai,my ACP daughters'?
Riya and Ankita: YES SIR...
Riya: Accha,Baba.Ekhon rakhi.Tumi planning shuru koro aar edik theke ami aar Anki o planning kori,thik acche?(Accha,Baba.Main aab phone rakhti hu.Aap wahaan se apna planning start kijiye,aur,yahaan se,main aur Anki planning shuru karte hai,thik hai)?
Commissioner: Thik hai.Give my ACP damaads my love and blessings,ok.
Riya and Ankita: Ok. Bye baba.Love you.
Commissioner: Love you too,both,beta.

Riya(with an evil smirk to Ankita):Ab ayega khel mein asli mazaa...Samjhhe ya Samjhhau?
Ankita: Un dono ka shakal toh dekhne layak hoga.
Riya: Haan,woh toh hai. Aakhir kar,unka pala unke biwi o se parha hai.Kehte hai na,ghayal sher aur bhi zyada khatarnaak hota hai.
Ankita: Hmm... Baat toh tune sahi ki hai.
Shree: Arey wah... Kya baatein ho rahi hai tum dono ke beech?
Chotu: Ditto,Shree.
Riya: Parso humare college,St.Xaviers mein reunion hai.Hum sab chal rahein hai,sivai,Rathod sir aur Arjun.
Agar inn dono ko lena hai,toh humein kuch karna hoga.Maine planning ki hai.Suno sab.



Shree and Chotu hear the plan and gave a thumbs up.
Shree: Yeh plan toh zarur work karega.I mean,kal bara dhamaka hone wala hai uss Samjhhe ya Samjhhau and uss Damn It ke life main.
Riya and Ankita shot a murderous glare at Shree.
Shree: Sorry,Ri and Anki.
Riya: Hmm...
Aab ayega khel mein mazaa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice😊...riya and ankita ke saamne hi samjhe ya samjhau aur dammit...!!!! bechara shree... 😛

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