Arisha SS: Pyar ka dard hai updated pg 7 chap 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone I know
This topic is quite filmy
This is my first story and my lovely sis Saba - ramisa is also helping me I know m weak in story bt she is very clever
Hope hope u all like our work


The story start
Same characters as in the show

Chap 1

ETF office at night


Chotu- Aaj to bohot paperwork kar Liya

Shree- ha chotu Hume break Milana chahiye

Aisha ( now chotu shree are friends)- ha guys aaj bohot mehenat ki hai

Rathore- you all can leave now

Aisha - sir mujhe kal leave chahiye personal kam hai

Rathore- ok sure u can

Shree - ye rathore sir bhi na humesha Aisha ko hi leave dete hai kabhi hum are bare me Socha hai?

Chotu- nahi re

Rathore. - tum dono kitna bolte ho
Kam pe bhi dhyan do...


Shree - lagata hai sun liye

Chotu- ab chup reh

So hws was it
I know arjun nahi hai kyu wo baad me hero ke tarah aayega
Pls batao ki me continue Karoo ya nahi

Pls c n comment my first story
Thank you

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Luna92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its nice dear.. do continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank god kisi ko to acha laga
Thxxx😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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one more new writer...wow... so happy I am... sounds interesting dear...

do continue yaar... 😊
update soon haan... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its nice dear...cont soon...
Arjun ka heroic entry dekhni hai!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey... great work honey..!!
Please continue... love to read Arisha!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye honey murbarka ji🤗jaldi se continue karo,i'm waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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honey congrats for first ever attempting.
aisha,chotu & shree trio sounds cool. waiting to see our hero to enter.
do continue soon dear 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc start dear 😊 shree nd chotu as usual :p do continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice honey lol but half se bhi kam tha

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