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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey tani... give us some more jhatkas from these young ETF!!!
Cant wait to see more of their action!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Hey tani... give us some more jhatkas from these young ETF!!!

Cant wait to see more of their action!!!!


OMG u want more...

i m super happy

i will try writing ...not pakka...but will try posting sumthing soon😊

Thank u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tani23


OMG u want more...

i m super happy

i will try writing ...not pakka...but will try posting sumthing soon😊

Thank u so much


Yes of course.!
This is a superb story..!!
I would definitely love to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG !!! 😲😲😲

What a Two-Shot Tani partner!!


These little evil minds..I tell you! (VB style 🤣)

Planning and plotting to kill their parents...that too by poisoning them..hey bhagwaan! 🤣

But , the reasons were fair enough!
Maggi nahi dete, scold karte hain, picnic pe nahi le jaate, pareshan karte hain!!


Loved all the Kiddos!! 😆
Kushal, ahh another rathore in making!! 😆
And ankita...ahem ahem!!
Sahi baat hain...woh hain hi itne hot! 😉

Purva Rawte 😆...mummy se itni nafrat??

Aniket...ahem itne bade fan Arjun ke...kahin papa se inspire toh nahi ho gaya! 😛

Mohan...mom is okay...dad ko utha lo! 🤣

It was damn hilarious to watch riya making every effort to save her self!! 🤣
Milk shake, pizza, cake, painting competition,movie!!

Bribing haan...Way to go!! 🤣



But sadly every attempt went in vain..did she actually passed out after drinking the juice??
Oh boy!


Poor shree next target!! 🤣

Awesome one Tani! 😉
You know what...you are really good in writing such genre!! 👍🏼 👏
Dhasu thi!!🤣

Keep writing more! 🤗

P.S- Can I get a tinie minnie role too..!!
Aap hi meri aakhri hope ho!! 😆😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
Post edited @ pg.2 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
loved the whole part
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sinner.gurl

OMG !!! 😲😲😲

What a Two-Shot Tani partner!!


These little evil minds..I tell you! (VB style 🤣)

Planning and plotting to kill their parents...that too by poisoning them..hey bhagwaan! 🤣

But , the reasons were fair enough!
Maggi nahi dete, scold karte hain, picnic pe nahi le jaate, pareshan karte hain!!


Loved all the Kiddos!! 😆
Kushal, ahh another rathore in making!! 😆
And ankita...ahem ahem!!
Sahi baat hain...woh hain hi itne hot! 😉

Purva Rawte 😆...mummy se itni nafrat??

Aniket...ahem itne bade fan Arjun ke...kahin papa se inspire toh nahi ho gaya! 😛

Mohan...mom is okay...dad ko utha lo! 🤣

It was damn hilarious to watch riya making every effort to save her self!! 🤣
Milk shake, pizza, cake, painting competition,movie!!

Bribing haan...Way to go!! 🤣



But sadly every attempt went in vain..did she actually passed out after drinking the juice??
Oh boy!


Poor shree next target!! 🤣

Awesome one Tani! 😉
You know what...you are really good in writing such genre!! 👍🏼 👏
Dhasu thi!!🤣

Keep writing more! 🤗

P.S- Can I get a tinie minnie role too..!!
Aap hi meri aakhri hope ho!! 😆😛


OMG i m rofling after reading ur comment Dishu ..

n dat too tere monkey emo k saath

i mentioned na ...d drink just had Salt n chilly powder in t

nothing else

bache hai...relaity mein rat poson thode hi add karte 😆

..

abt d ROLE: chal tujhe bhi bacha bana denge 😉...if i m going to write a 3 Shot to d story ...

n thank u for d appreciation😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -sree13-

@purvi nopes yaar prava did not disturb us but uski wajahse toh yeh dhamakedaar baccha party wali update mili 😆

@Prava thanks re,aise hi tang kar usse,taki woh aur likhe 😉 akhir haq banta hai tang karna 😆


Thank u sree di for liking d second part ..

i m happy u liked it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

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Yayy!! Me first!!

Dhingra 🤗
You were saying acha nahi hai?? 😡
Yeh toh bohot acha hai!!! 😃😳

First, Ariya ka mini romance! 😳 Hayyee! ❤️
And then bacho ka aana aur Ariya ko disturb karna nd mini Purva's reply!! 😆 Loved it! 😆
Moreover Arjun's dialogue on Riya's comment.. 😆😆
"Aur kya sach batadu?" 😆

Next comes bacho ki shararat.. Hahaha.. It was awesome!!
I was rofling all the time on Riya's condition! 🤣
Poor girl was soo scared!!
Sara sapna hakikat hote hue nazar aa raha tha 🤣
Per madam ne sab sambhal liya bacho ke saath khel kar.. Unhe achi achi cheeze khila kar.. Smart! 😆

And that juice.. Becharo ne jaake jaake kya milaya.. mirchi 🤣

Overall, An amazing os!! 😃
Looking foward for some more like this! 😃

Thnx for the pm! 🤗


PU 🤗

thank u for d super amazing comment 😊

saara sapna sach ho gaya ...

mujhe yeh seriously initially acha nahi laga tha ...phir i changed thoda sa dialog etc ...

Luking fwd for more ...dat s a big torture..not for me...forum wasis k liye🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
tani it was too funny update yaar
riya be na kitana dar rahi ti🤣
she enjoyed full day with them
and shithan bacche alaga plan ke liye
ready ho gaye hai...
iss chakkar mai hi sahi riya ti enjoy ki na
i loved it
and tani dear sorry for the late comment

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