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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Thanks for such a cute update..

Mazaa aagaya!!

Here kids in d room. Aniket:"Dekha maggi k liye no keh diya" Purva:"I have a plan" after 2 min 'she explains her plan. Kushal:"mere papa ko pata chala na'he will punish me '" Purva:"kuch nahi hoga'tension na le'.samjhe ya samjhyun!!!" Aniket :"Copy cat kahin ki'.apne papa ka dialo karti hain"

Purva:"mere papa '.main kuch bhi karun "Mohan:"Dun fite'.Waise plan hain to interesting ..aur phir sorry bol denge na maasi ko..in d end"

Purva toh jaan hai iss update mein...

Yeh ek paragraph padke me ROLFing!🤣

yeh bachhe toh dhamaal hai..

they were really cute...specially Purva..princess..😊

Rathore and Anki ki romance beach mein hi rukh gaya..

Arjun clever...he finished his romance and disturbed his seniors...Not Good for Him😆😆

Loved the Hide and Seek and party with kids...😊

Ab aur tang nahin karoongi tujhe...😛😆

I will accept it as END😭

Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago

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ankita2804

@ankita2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: tani23
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Hey dearries,🤗

thank u so much every1 ...who have laughed while reading dis work
A special thanks to Anika for amazing idea

HUGS for all ...

n i thot of writing a second part to it basically because prava's request... so go n scold prava bec of her u all have to face d torture again

i dun know whether i have done justice to d comedy part but i tried experimenting wid it...

Hope u people will like it just like previous chapter...n even if u dun like
den also no problem...
i will say better luch next tym to myself😉

Nautanki kahinki

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ankita2804

@ankita2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

res

aaila... mai to bhul hi gayi thi ki maine pahele v res kia tha 😆

sorry BB😆

Edited by ankita2804 - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Its okay BB no problem ..kitne bhi res laga..mainu ki farak😉

Aur nautanki mein maze aate hain isliye

NOTE: Tum logon ko story samajh mein aayi ki nahi...ya mera popat

hey bhagwaan...ab Mujhe humor bhi explain karna padega kya...last waala

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

WOW...amazing dear

"Kushal:"Waise tere mummy papa 1 saath andar kyun" Purva:"papa ki shirt par kuch gir gaya hoga 'to mumma clean karne gayi pagal" Inside ria was shocked at her words,she said:"Yeh isko kisne bola" Arjun patted his shoulders in pride"

I liked this too much! kids na...are impossible...naughty! loved them!

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Di me truly rofling.!!!...
arjun ria use sach btata...!!!~~~!!!
ria dream made her so scared lol
she made banana shake...
order cake n pizza..play wid kids..
rathod winter hmm...
kids super duper naughty di...
claps di..
shree par try krenge!!!!! rofl di..
ria ko samajh aa gya hoga sum dreams mean to becum to be true rofling di..
pls aise hi likhte rehna pls..
loved it di..!!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

cool update... loved it... Ariya part was sweet... Riya hvn fun wth kids😎... bt poor Riya nw gt it dreams do cum true at times...

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

super duper!!

just imagine Riya running behind kids!!

lovely!!

ab Shree uncle se kya karwani hai??

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Sequel was mast purvi 👍🏼 kushal is a detective" tere mummy papa ek saath andar kyun??" 😆 😆 Arjun say the truth nah 🤣

so they were planning to feed her salty & chilly juice aur riya ne toh kya kya soch liya 🤣

thanks prava for making purvi write the 2nd part & purvi tera main aur kitna tareef karoon,main thak gayi 😊

love you purvi ❤️

Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: prava55663
Thanks for such a cute update..

Mazaa aagaya!!

Here kids in d room. Aniket:"Dekha maggi k liye no keh diya" Purva:"I have a plan" after 2 min 'she explains her plan. Kushal:"mere papa ko pata chala na'he will punish me '" Purva:"kuch nahi hoga'tension na le'.samjhe ya samjhyun!!!" Aniket :"Copy cat kahin ki'.apne papa ka dialo karti hain"
Purva:"mere papa '.main kuch bhi karun "Mohan:"Dun fite'.Waise plan hain to interesting ..aur phir sorry bol denge na maasi ko..in d end"

Purva toh jaan hai iss update mein...
Yeh ek paragraph padke me ROLFing!🤣

yeh bachhe toh dhamaal hai..

they were really cute...specially Purva..princess..😊

Rathore and Anki ki romance beach mein hi rukh gaya..
Arjun clever...he finished his romance and disturbed his seniors...Not Good for Him😆😆

Loved the Hide and Seek and party with kids...😊

Ab aur tang nahin karoongi tujhe...😛😆
I will accept it as END😭