Big dhamal in chotu packet/JrETF n action page 25 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi tani🤗 first of all congratulation for such a brillint story...
Big dhamal in chotu packet/JrETF n action is an amazing title ...4 kids n akeli riya😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 kitna darr gayi thi wo... purva is so cute yaar kya mast bola papa ki shirt par kuch girr gaya tha wo clean kar rahi hogi😉😉😉😉😉😉...arjun ki teaching hai purva ko👏👏👏👏👏...kids were amazing yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an awesome update :)
all the kids are too adorable especially cutie purva :)
ariya part was really nice especially the bathroom part...
loved purva's dialogue " papa ki shirt par kuch gir gaya hoga to mumma clean karne gayi pagal" she is so cute just like her parents...
awww how sweet of riya she made banana milkshake for them and also ordered pizza and cake for them 😃
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
@purvi nopes yaar prava did not disturb us but uski wajahse toh yeh dhamakedaar baccha party wali update mili 😆

@Prava thanks re,aise hi tang kar usse,taki woh aur likhe 😉 akhir haq banta hai tang karna 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anki ko to Rathod ke siva kuch dikhta hi nahi , sach kaha Arjun dono romatic hai.
And Purva ,
Kushal:"Waise tere mummy papa 1 saath andar kyun" Purva:"papa ki shirt par kuch gir gaya hoga 'to mumma clean karne gayi pagal" Inside ria was shocked at her words,she said:"Yeh isko kisne bola" Arjun patted his shoulders in pride. Ria opened d door n went outside saying:"U r impossible arjun'kya sikha diya usko '..jaldi packing finish karo 'Remember u have flight in n hour" Arjun:"Kya usko actual reason batata??" Ria(loudly) "Shut up ..arjun"
Tere Papa tujhe kya kya sikhate hai.😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb awsum update as usual..!!!👏⭐️
ariya bathrum scene n kids convo ws awsum...!!!🤣
bechari riya is scared because of dat dream..!!!😆
riya doin masti wid kids ws amazing..!!
lvd this os..!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all love u so much for continuing this one!!!!!!

it was so good!!!
i mean uska sapna sach ho raha tha!!!!
Naughty Kushal...and Purva
loved it wen they said :"Waise tere mummy papa 1 saath andar kyun" Purva:"papa ki shirt par kuch gir gaya hoga 'to mumma clean karne gayi pagal"
hehe...so cute!!
sweet arjun...sab ke liye chocolates lane wala hai..
mujhe bhi chahiye yaar!!!!!
aww...loved rathod and ankita!!!!
and arjun rathod talk...!!!

loved the soft side of riya!!! wow...!!!
ab shree ke sath kya karne wale hai yeh bache!!! bichara shree...!!!
and poor riya!!!
akhir uska sapna sach ho hi gaya!!!!

just loved it yaar!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!!
Amazing update...
I just loved the kids..
Riya ko kese ungli ne nachaya..!!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
niccc😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg the dream,Arjun and Riya bathroom scene how cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha...ha...ha :D:D riya's dreams cums true... Bechara shree... Uska halath kyse hoga?????

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