Arakshi FF:Tum Dena Saath Mera [Note-45]

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

mithu :

the start has been brilliant👏, and i mean it. the heat waves, the hatred, mockings, ridicules and everything between arjun and aisha.. i'm loving it😉. but the best part of all is definitely shree's helplessness😆 :

He gulped. 'Kya kiya Shree tune? Ab yeh Shreni tera raita banna ke kha jayegi. Trip par aachi thi toh kya hua? Ab toh tu gaya. Hey Bhagwan mujhe utha lijiye. Mein waha aakar aapko help karna chahta hu. Mere paas latest technologies bhi hai aur unhe use karne ka idea bhi. Aapke bohot kaam aaunga.'🤣🤣

uparse rathore ki partiality towards aisha😆, no wonder arjun is furious with both aur in sab ke beech mein humara shree aur chottu bali ka bakra banta jaa raha hai😆. waise, why and how did this hatred built up between arjun and aisha ? update soon.😊

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846182

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: pink_fairy123
Oh teri! That was the first thing that popped out from my mouth. Are u sure u r writing for the firts tym kyuki itna lamba part wo b first tymer..not bad..😆

Mindblowing start👏👏👏
Shree's ILU for Arjun 🤣
Arjun and Roshni's argument was awesome. Shree and Chotu are ryt..there shud b popcorn..😆 even I want popcorn..😆

Awesome dialogues..😃
Ending was simply out of the world...🤣

U r an awesome writer. Wonder why u didnt write earlier. Chalo der aaue durust aaye...

I am dying to read the next part...Plz continue soon.😊

Thank u so much!!!🤗...

I was quite nervous while posting it... but ur comments have given me some confidence...

I m ready with the plot of Part 2... i just need to pen it down in a proper manner...!!

BUt thank u so much for liking it...!!!

Hope u like my coming parts also!!!😃

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

grt update dear
loved it..
cont soon..!

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846182

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: polly_03
mithu :

the start has been brilliant👏, and i mean it. the heat waves, the hatred, mockings, ridicules and everything between arjun and aisha.. i'm loving it😉. but the best part of all is definitely shree's helplessness😆 :

He gulped. 'Kya kiya Shree tune? Ab yeh Shreni tera raita banna ke kha jayegi. Trip par aachi thi toh kya hua? Ab toh tu gaya. Hey Bhagwan mujhe utha lijiye. Mein waha aakar aapko help karna chahta hu. Mere paas latest technologies bhi hai aur unhe use karne ka idea bhi. Aapke bohot kaam aaunga.'🤣🤣

uparse rathore ki partiality towards aisha😆, no wonder arjun is furious with both aur in sab ke beech mein humara shree aur chottu bali ka bakra banta jaa raha hai😆. waise, why and how did this hatred built up between arjun and aisha ? update soon.😊

Thank u so much!!!🤗

It was tough to introduce a little funny part because this is more a serious story!!! 😆 but i tried... i m very glad that u liked it..!!!

I dont know if i will be able to keep up the fun but i promise i will try my LEVEL BEST..!!!😊

Well, 1 thing i can guarantee u for sure that the revelations will blow ur mind!!!

The truth behind the Hatred is the root and most precious part of the entire story!!!😉

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846182

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Payal_156
grt update dear
loved it..
cont soon..!

Thank u!!🤗

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I loved the last bit the most...all leaving behind Arjun to solve the case...lol

i was laughing out loud at that

coming back...awesome part...their nhok jhok was full on fire...too good dear

post soon!

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846182

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
I loved the last bit the most...all leaving behind Arjun to solve the case...lol
i was laughing out loud at that

coming back...awesome part...their nhok jhok was full on fire...too good dear

post soon!

Thank you so much Vidya Didi!!!🤗

I was eagerly waiting for ur comment!!! Thank u for liking it!!!

I will try to come up with the next part very soon!!