Arakshi FF:Tum Dena Saath Mera [Note-45]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys,

Okay this is my first story... And i m quite nervous😕..!!
Please bear me along.. And of course u can post tomatoes and potatoes..!!
Bola toh FF hai, par SS bhi ho sakta hai..!!
Well today i will only give a few flashes (dialogues). And if possible the CS...
And i would require ur help in some places.. Like : -
I need a good pair for Rathod.. i m not able to come up on my own.. please give me options ALONG WITH HER PIC (if possible.. or tell me her name i will try to google out and find her pic)...😉

All those who wish to be PMed, please send me ur buddy request... Only my buddies will be PMed on my update..(They will have to bear with me.. Poor them😆)..

OK! the CS will be given below..!Along with the flashes!!

Hope u like it.. If not, please bear... First timer hu, thoda toh encouragement banta hai..!!!

(P.S. This is a story I came up on my own, if it any resemblance with other story I am sorry, but it was not on purpose)

INDEX :-
CS+Promo - Pg 1

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3380284&TPN=8">Note - (Pic of Ankita)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3380284&TPN=9">Part 2- Pg 9

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3380284&TPN=14">Part 3 - Pg 14



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tum Dena Saath Mera

Character Sketch:-

1) Arjun Suryakant Rawte - Our hero, who needs no introduction. Has a beautiful past with Roshni, which is horrifying at present. And will be till Sikander is dead.

2) Sakshi Anand - A sexy, strict cop. She has recently joined the ETF. Whose heart seems to be made of stone. But her other side will be revealed in our later parts and also the reasons behind it.

3) Sameer Damsingh Rathod - The chief of ETF. He also doesn't need any introduction, except that he has a beautiful, caring and loving wife.

4) Ankita Sameer Rathod - The beautiful wife of Sameer. She is a strong personality with a heart of gold. She gets what she wants. That's why she has THE Rathod behind her, ALWAYS. She is total fun-loving. Pata nahi Sameer ko kese pataya.

5) Shreekant Sen - The Techie of ETF. Wanna decode anyone's secret, ask him.

6) Chotu - Ofo! I don't think any of u can NOT know him. Dont go by his size. His big size is to accommodate his big golden heart

7) Roshni Rawte ' Our hero's wife and love of life. Who was killed brutally by Sikander.

The character are almost the same as in the show. There might be a few SHOCKING revelations that might shock u all, so please wear rubber slippers for your safety.

Other Characters will come along with the story. I will mention in this post where the new characters are being introduced. U can open the link, read their CS and visualize them in the story through the Picture of them.

Every main Character will have their Picture so that u can visualize them. And the others' please manage, warna mein agar har ek character ke liye pic dhundne bethungi, toh stoy toh kabhi likh hi nahi paungi.

Flashes

"I LOVE YOU ARJUNNN" The girl screamed out her lungs. Arjun smiled at her antics.

"Mein Sikander ka namo nishan mita dunga. Kuch bhi baki nahi rahega uska. Kuch Bhi Nahi. Uska ek anch tak nahi!" Arjun promised with the anger turning his eyes red.

"Bharosha aur vishwas, tumhare muh se aache nahi lagte, Rawte." Rathod told Arjun, with full hatred in his voice.

Edited by ...Mithuz... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well.. Interesting.. Continue Soon.. All The Best 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@All - Thank u very much... I am working on it... Will Update u all real soon.!!

@Princess07 - U will have to buddy me, dear. for a pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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all the best👍🏼nice...looking frwd to it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aliya_begh

all the best👍🏼nice...looking frwd to it...


Thanks!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice CS and flashes...
loved that pic of Roshni...beautiful!
waiting for the story to unfold!
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Seems interesting. Excited to read the first part. Plz update soon. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mithu : the story looks interesting so go ahead, we are ready to bear with you. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ All - Thank you guys so much for all your comments... these are really precious to me...😊
Par yeh sab padh ke darr bhi lag raha hai...😕...
If i m not able to live upto ur expectation..!!
Anyways i will try my best...!!

Ur comments help to the write the story faster n better... !!

So please keep encouraging me..!!!😊

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