Arakshi FF:Tum Dena Saath Mera [Note-45] - Page 13

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Akangkshya,

That is really a very pretty name, and a classical one.

Now, do listen for a moment to what I have to say. When I tell you that your Shree is excellent, you can take it that it is so. I am a very sound judge of writing. You obviously have a flair for this kind of comic passages that you were not aware of. You do this comic part very much better than the usual stuff, and far better than anyone else that I have read here.

Given this, it is pointless to abandon what you do very well in favour of things over which your grasp is not yet sound. This does not mean that you stop writing about Rathod or Arjun or Ayesha, but just that you keep on with the Shree parts, coupled with Chotu. That way, you will be improving your comic timing with practice,and at the same time you will be providing some light relief for your readers.

So do not say that "I have planned a very different angle of this story, and I doubt I will be able to continue with the trend", there is a good girl! You should have no problems incorporating a comic track in a serious story. That is what they do in the TV episodes and the audience enjoys it. The main point is that you should cultivate your very real talent for this genre (not gene), and not let it slide. It is not everyone who has this flair; don't let it go to waste.

As for the crime genre, my dear, how can you write an ETF story without crime? And to solve a crime, one needs clues and deduction. I know it might be difficult for you at present, but there is nothing that cannot be achieved with effort and practice. So do not throw in the towel,but do keep trying your hand at it. You can read the best authors of crime fiction to pick up tips.

As for your studies, now that should always be your top priority. All these FFs and so on are only for your leisure hours, and never at the expense of your studies,

Wishing you the best of luck with your exams,

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: chand1234

gr8 upd👏

My dear Akangkshya,

That is a good girl! For the next 2 months, shelve all this an focus on your board exams, and we can see then how it goes with this FF. Once again, all the best for your exams.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Thank u so much Shyamala Aunty. U make me feel confident. Thank u for your encouragement. I promise i will try my best to live up to your hopes.

Well I will try that after 2 months from now. My boards wont allow me to spend time in writing. I hope I m able to make u feel proud after 2 months gap.

Thank you. (Also for liking my name)

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Akangkshya,

That is really a very pretty name, and a classical one.

Now, do listen for a moment to what I have to say. When I tell you that your Shree is excellent, you can take it that it is so. I am a very sound judge of writing. You obviously have a flair for this kind of comic passages that you were not aware of. You do this comic part very much better than the usual stuff, and far better than anyone else that I have read here.

Given this, it is pointless to abandon what you do very well in favour of things over which your grasp is not yet sound. This does not mean that you stop writing about Rathod or Arjun or Ayesha, but just that you keep on with the Shree parts, coupled with Chotu. That way, you will be improving your comic timing with practice,and at the same time you will be providing some light relief for your readers.

So do not say that "I have planned a very different angle of this story, and I doubt I will be able to continue with the trend", there is a good girl! You should have no problems incorporating a comic track in a serious story. That is what they do in the TV episodes and the audience enjoys it. The main point is that you should cultivate your very real talent for this genre (not gene), and not let it slide. It is not everyone who has this flair; don't let it go to waste.

As for the crime genre, my dear, how can you write an ETF story without crime? And to solve a crime, one needs clues and deduction. I know it might be difficult for you at present, but there is nothing that cannot be achieved with effort and practice. So do not throw in the towel,but do keep trying your hand at it. You can read the best authors of crime fiction to pick up tips.

As for your studies, now that should always be your top priority. All these FFs and so on are only for your leisure hours, and never at the expense of your studies,

Wishing you the best of luck with your exams,

Shyamala Aunty

nice part pls pls update fast..

hey buddy where are u?

Originally posted by: polly_03

mithu :

superb update yaar ..i was rofling in the first part of the update during the Arisha scenes 🤣..poor shree had to bear the brunt of being the " matured one "😆 ! never expected it to take such a serious turn the next moment ..the entire track turned out to be a mess created out of a love triangle. but why did rathore get so furious on aakash post his confession 😕? seems like there is a strong connection between arjun, sameer and aisha in the past which is threatening to surface now with this case and about which our adorable duo , shree and chottu is completely unaware of. what is it😕 ? why is arjun raute scared of sameer rathore😕 ? there are so many questions ..update soon.

Originally posted by: shurtiekta

nice part pls pls update fast..

Originally posted by: 123pritha

hey buddy where are u?

missing the uodates yar

plzz update na

loved it plz update soon