Ariya ss: Tum Jo Phir Miley Part9pg22 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc concept..!!!
continue soon..!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1
A girl is peacefully sleeping on a bed with many machines around her.a beep by machine break the scilence of the room. the nurse sitting on the couch imidiatly come towards the bed and let out a sight of satisfaction.
nurse: i think she is gaining concious i should tell the doctor dixit
she come out of that isolated quater and move towards the watch man
nurse to watch man:i m going to dr dixit take care of them.
watch man :don't worry...
main building of D.H hospital can be seen on the other side of thick trees nurse goes towards the hospital hiding behind the trees
she knocks on dr.dixit's cabin dr dixit:come in
she enters the cabin dr dixit become concious..u hear
nurse:yes sir ..i think the girl in coma in gaining concious plz come...dr dixit:ok u go i m coming
nurse move out..dr dixit calls some one
man on phone:what happend dixit
dr:krish the girl in coma is gaining concious...so what about next
krish:we will take our second chance..when will u say
dixit:no that girl is still weak.we can't take risk of second experiment otherwise u know the conciquences.boss will shoot us.we have already lost 2 patients out of 7.
krish:ok. and take care she is not a common girl..
dixit:yea i know..we will shift all of them to our bace camp after 3 days their we will do second treatment
krish:ok..by
in the patient's room
she was feeling a current in her body ,her back was paining,and she was feeling dark every where slowly she opens her eyes and try to lift her hand to her head...her headache was incrreasing.then a man come towards her looking like a doctor
dr dixit:how r u feeling miss riya...congratulations u gain concious after two weeks
riya try to remember why is she hear..what happend..slowly she remember every thing how she was on mission with her etf team and how she gulped down those virual capsules.then she noted no one of her team was in the room.
dr dixit saw her and said that her teammates r on a case they visit her every day . riya was feeling so weak that even lifting her head was difficult for her
a nurse came towards her and said her to take rest she will soon recover.
dr dixit gave her some medicines and injuctions.she again drifts into sleep
IN ETF OFFICE
shree and chotu were sitting in confrence room
shree:yar chotu yar aj heroin of the year movie release ho rhe ha movie dakhne chalen...chotu lost some where
shree:yar kia hoa chotu to kider kho gya..chotu: yar riya hote to kitne exited hote..shree han yar us ke jane ke bad us ke importance or bhe ziada feel hote ha
aisha was standing aside she has many times heard about riya.she was known of her death but how shree and chotu talk about her some times she too start thinking about her
arjun was also hearing them from his cabin...he was too thinking about her and her sweet smile and her antics he was known that he too miss her like others but was quiet confused why he miss her so much..
precap:riya in fully concious

i know its quiet booring part. but i will try my best in next part
plz like and comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update..:) so etf is unaware of riya i.e. she is alive...??? continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice chapter... its soo gud to read something like this... always... riya alive n coming back... y cant gorky show something like this!! 😭.. update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice chapter... wow Riya s alive... update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part. But it is too small! Please, next time update long parts. Hope riya escapes from those doctors. Please cont soon. And please pm me when ever u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
great update :) loved it
yayyy riya is alive 😃
hope she gets out of that hospital soon
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc start...!!!😊😊
continue soon..!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
riya woke up in evening.same nurse was sitting on the couch.she came towads riya and asked about her health she was feeling quite well now. nurse gave her medicine and soup.riya asked her about her father and etf . first nurse puzzled but then she hide her exprissions and told her that they came to see her when she was sleeping but they had an important work that's why they went again but they told that they will visit her tonight.riya felt happy to
hear that. she was missing all of them. she waited two hours and was board now.nurse was not in the room.later a sweeper came in the room he cleaned the room asked her if she need any thing.she refused and sweeper went out.
now she was irritated and she noted a very wired thing that none other than these three people came to her room and their is complete scilence not a sound of anyone else contrary to a hospital's enviornment.an etf officer in her start getting negative wibes.she noted that the room was not like a hospital room except those machines and it has a lab type area in its one side where lab instruments were kept.at that time doctor dixit enter her room.
dr dixit:hello..i m doctor dixit..how r u
riya:feeling fine..dr:yea u will be healthy in two days u just need to take rest and instructed nurse about some thing all riya could hear was that some one was coming
IN ETF OFFICE
after solving a case the team was getting back to their homes. aisha sked rathode if he could drop her .rathode:i m going to commisnor office but arjun will drop u.arjun agreed.chotu winked towrds shree.they both try to hide their smiles. arjun and ayesha get into car.
arjun:do u still live their? aiesha:no have shifted from their..i will tell u address. after some time
aiesha:do u remember our training days?..i miss them..and u know u have changed much
arjun:i don't forget any thing...but plz we have moved in our own lives so there is no purpose to remember past days
ayesha:hmmm...(thinking) those days r very important for me..this time i will not let u go away .
arjun: now will u tell me ur address?...ayesha:l(coming back from her dream) yea left from here..that fourth building
arjun drop her infront of her building and before she could thank him he zoomed out the car.
writer's pov: arjun and ayesha were in same baj during their training.ayesha was one of his rare friends. they both were of quiet same nature that's why they shared a strong friendship bond. their fellows spread some romours about them too. arjun was intrested in rosni and ayesha did'nt know about it.but still she had a crush on him which she thought as love .once when she tried to tell arjun about it he become ferious and told ayesha about his intrest in roshni which ayesha thought as her insult and she took arjun's love as challange for her.their training compleated they become busy in their life and lost contact .now after many years when they meet ayesha again made up her mind to win arjun...(more in upcoming parts)
NEXT DAY
in he morning riya was sleeping when she heard some one talking.and what she heard made her frightened and numb.
their were three men talking 1st: we have shifted two patients to our base camp.two more will be shifted today and this girl will be shifted tommorow evening.their we will do our next experiment...2nd man: be carefull..if police will come to know about it we will be in great trouble.
3rd man:don't worry about it every thing is well planed..that doctor and nurse are working for us.
2nd man:and that watchman 1st man: we said him that they r special patients that's why they r kept here..don't worry he will not tell any one and if we feel like that then we have a second way(mean they will kill him)
then they went out of room
precap: riya trys to inform etf about her
more about aiesha and arjun
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really interesting Wt going to happen to riya can't wait come soon with next part dr ...waiting...

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