Ariya ss: Tum Jo Phir Miley Part9pg22

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello everyone...its my first writing . so plz bear with me. i will try my best to not make u bore...and update it fastly..if u like it.
character sketch
Arjun suryakant rawte
Riya mukherjee
Ayesha
Sameer rathod
Shreekant
Chotu
story line
basiclly this story will be about ariya with some massala.but but but it has a twist that ayesha is their in a little villen type.more in main parts
teaser
docter dixit:(on phone) no that girl is still weak.we can't take risk of second experiment otherwise u know the conciquences.boss will shoot us.we have already lost 2 patients out of 7.
2nd man:ok. and take care she is not a common girl..
ETF office
aiesha:arjun sir COFFEE
arjunp;main coffee nahi peeta..and move out of confrence room
aiesha is just stairing at his back
shree and chotu watching all this
shree to chotu: yar chotu..lagta ha hamare aisha madm bhe arjun sir se impress ho gae han.
chotu:han shree hmare arjun sir han he ase.. they hi fie


part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=3&#73266077
part 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=5 part 3: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=7&#73496181
part 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=9&#73644170
part 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=11 part 6A: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=13&#74254219
part 6B: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=15&#74530625 part 7: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=17&#76146682
part 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=19&#76208023
part9: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=22&#76636448
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Idea is good. But Aayesha ko negetive bana diya! But it seems interesting. Continue soon.
Edited by BDCTG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aisha...Villan???🤢... Yaar woh meri favo thi,,,,

But do continue..
Sounds interesting...!!
. Eagerly waiting to see more..
...šŸ˜‰.!!
Edited by mithu_borkotoky - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aisha villain?? 😈... loved it!! continue soon!!

i hope riya is alive.. safe n sound!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great start plz pm me the updates :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aisha villein omg lol

cont soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting cont dr but riya is alive na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue soon can't wait for the new story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aisha as villain?
Sounds interesting!
Continue! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept. Liked it. Riya is alive! But docs r performing experiments on her?! That's ridiculous! Hope our super cop finds her soon. And aisha, villan? I guess, she is going to come between ariya. That's why she is going to be villan. Please cont as soon as possible. And please add me to ur pm list.

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