Ariya ss: Tum Jo Phir Miley Part9pg22

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riushibabo

@riushibabo

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Posted: 13 years ago

hello everyone...its my first writing . so plz bear with me. i will try my best to not make u bore...and update it fastly..if u like it.

character sketch

Arjun suryakant rawte

Riya mukherjee

Ayesha

Sameer rathod

Shreekant

Chotu

story line

basiclly this story will be about ariya with some massala.but but but it has a twist that ayesha is their in a little villen type.more in main parts

teaser

docter dixit:(on phone) no that girl is still weak.we can't take risk of second experiment otherwise u know the conciquences.boss will shoot us.we have already lost 2 patients out of 7.

2nd man:ok. and take care she is not a common girl..

ETF office

aiesha:arjun sir COFFEE

arjunp;main coffee nahi peeta..and move out of confrence room

aiesha is just stairing at his back

shree and chotu watching all this

shree to chotu: yar chotu..lagta ha hamare aisha madm bhe arjun sir se impress ho gae han.

chotu:han shree hmare arjun sir han he ase.. they hi fie

part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=3&#73266077

part 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=5 part 3: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=7&#73496181

part 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=9&#73644170

part 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=11 part 6A: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=13&#74254219

part 6B: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=15&#74530625 part 7: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=17&#76146682

part 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=19&#76208023

part9: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3375221&TPN=22&#76636448

Edited by riushibabo - 13 years ago

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Sabia Khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Idea is good. But Aayesha ko negetive bana diya! But it seems interesting. Continue soon.

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846182

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aisha...Villan???🤢... Yaar woh meri favo thi,,,,

But do continue..

Sounds interesting...!!

. Eagerly waiting to see more..

...😉.!!

Edited by mithu_borkotoky - 13 years ago

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 13 years ago

aisha villain?? 😈... loved it!! continue soon!!

i hope riya is alive.. safe n sound!!

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ipkknd-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great start plz pm me the updates :)

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

aisha villein omg lol

cont soon plz

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 13 years ago

Interesting cont dr but riya is alive na

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iluvrainaarti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Continue soon can't wait for the new story.

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@MriduB

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aisha as villain?
Sounds interesting!
Continue! 😃

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abhi_arshilover

@abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice concept. Liked it. Riya is alive! But docs r performing experiments on her?! That's ridiculous! Hope our super cop finds her soon. And aisha, villan? I guess, she is going to come between ariya. That's why she is going to be villan. Please cont as soon as possible. And please add me to ur pm list.