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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Fables start 👏...
Sree Di you have a rocking start on your 1st Ff...
Shruti great work dear... Loved the promo its full of suspense and it sounds damnn interesting canter wait to read more...

Thnks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
amazing concept...!!!
loving it already as all three girls are there!!!!
wow...!!!
continue soon!!!!
and do pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

It's exiting...
interesting Cs...
Waiting for the Story...

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
@dishu thanks year i hope we can stand upto your expectation.

@sammy & sanchu kan pakadh ke sorry for not let you know before..you peoples motivation means a lot to us..thanks dearies.

@mannu di i hope we can justify all the questions..thanks for liking.

@shru thanks year..your comments means a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
full of suspenses... eagerly waiting...
Riya,Roshni and Aisha together!!!!!

wow... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you guys for liking the cs & promo & thanks to all who comment on it..[>:D<]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
part 1:
Its two week past since
ayesha had joined ETF but she is actualy having problem to mix with all..she is
bold,arrogant ,a brilliant encounter specialist,not realy probably she was the
best encounter specialist in her batch but there too she did not has much friend so
she always preferred to be in her own world.
Its 9 am at morning
Ayesha entered to the office..thank god koi abhi tak nehi aya..otherwise main
seriously un dono se der hone ki gyan sunnke ki mood me nehi hoon..she
murmured. She took her sit & gulped a glass of water when she saw riya
chotu & shree entering the office & laughing hardly. She amused to the
trio that how can people waste time in talking laughing & all!!
Its not that she does
not like them but light talking is not matched to her personality so she finds
no pleasure in anyone's company. The only person she talks since she comes here
is Roshni. She is younger sister of Sameer rathod and a good crime journalist.
she frequently visits ETF office because of case & to meet her friends as
well..yah she has good bonds with riya shree chotu even Arjun also talks with
her casualy. At the first meeting with roshni Ayesha liked her,so she became
the first friend to her in Mumbai.
Riya enters &
nods:hey good morning Ayesha..!! Ayesha nods: aj sab late?? Mujhe laga main hi
der se ayi.
Riya: no its 1st
January na toh har saal iss din hum late ho hi jaate hai after 31st
ki late night party. But rathod sir & arjun sir kabhi late nehi hote,pata
nehi iss saal kyun late hai..!!
At that time Rathod
enters with Roshni.
Rathod: happy new year
team he wished. Arjun kahan hai??
Riya immediately
answered sir who toh aye nehi abb tak while chotu & shree exchanged some
meaningful look with each other.
Roshni hugged the trio:
happy new year guys. I wish bhai se chupke hum aj new year party kar paaye..she
winked.
Chotu makes a serious
face: kya keh rahi ho kaal ki party ke baad aj firse party!!! Sir toh humko
pakka kha jaayenge.
Shree: ha yaar upar se
Arjun sir ki gyaan..hum ETF officers hai yeh majag masti humhe suit nehi
karta..he chuckled while Riya unable to say anything infront of roshni just
shots glare to shree.
Roshni: chill guys bhai
aur Arjun dono ko main handle kar loongi agar pata chalet oh..they laughs together.
Ayesha who was standing
a little far from them and was listening their plan thaughts herself: kaash
main bhi inn sab ki tarah ho paati..she rememberd that incident which turned
her like this & close her eyes.
She came out from
reverie when she heard somebody calling her name. she opens her eye to see
Roshni.
Kya Ayesha humne dosti
ki thi naa aur tum ho ki bhool hi gayi mujhe?? Kya soch rahi hai?? She asked.
Sorry roshni main
dhyaan nehi diya. She hugged her..happy new year.
Toh why don't you come
with us at new year party tonight??
No I don't like to go
in such parties..you people carry on.
Meanwhile Arjun enters
office & surprises seeing roshni there..are tum yahan??
Roshni: ha I was
thinking of wishing all of you happy new year.
Arjun: happy new year
Roshni. He turned to rathod who was already started to read a old case
file..happy new year Sameer.
Rathod wished the
same..and arjun goes to his cabin.
Shree whispered to
chotu & riya: dekha sirf aapne doston ko wish kiya as if hum exist hi nehi
karte..akdu kahinka while riya hit his shoulder.."shree"
Roshni bid bye to all:
okay mujhe bhi office jaana hai & exchanges some meaningful look with trio
about party & went away.
riya cant stop herself wishing him,so silently she goes to arjun's cabin. she koncks the door,he says come in,she goes in,he looks at her and asks her kya huya riya?kuyn aayi ho kuch kehana tha??riya says sirvo mai vo mai...aap ko...wish karne aayi thi...arjun says to karo aur jaayo,she felt sad and says happy new year sir,she says this and goes from there with sad face,shree watches this and asks her kya huya,she says nothing shree kuch nahi huya hai.

Rathod called everybody
to conference room & asked that they havnt any case now so till any case
come they would complete the paperwork.
Ayesha nods her head
disgustingly making face: ah!! Paper work!! The most irritating thing she ever
wish to do.
Rathod understands her
irritation:kya hua Ayesha?? Is there any problem??
Ayesha: sir abhi toh
koi bhi case nehi hai toh can I take half day leave??
Before rathod could
answer arjun sarcastically said kyun tum encounter specialist hot oh iska
matlab yeh hai kya tum paperwork nehi karogi??
Ayesha also shot a
glare to him: maine Rathod sir se poocha hai sir??
Arjun & Ayesha stop
it!!! Rathod shouted. And aysha...before he could complete the phone started
ringing.
HELLO!! Sameer rathod
here..


Precap:
Hotel sunshine!!
Riya: amazing na!!



Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice chap...lovely!!


after ayesha's behaviour im more excited to know about her past!!


roshni seems to d most friendly!!


A new year party...wow!!


will d "serious ones" arrive??!!


arjun n ayesha seems to b quite alike!!


poor riya got a scolding for wishing!!


Seems to be an imp and int case..continue soon
Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
hey very nice start👏...hmmm 3 ladkiya eksaath kuchh toh dhamaal hoga hi😆 plzz pm me next updates n pllzz upd8 sun...haapppyyy new yearrr 🥳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#50



priyu unres karna nul matt jana😆

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