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Aaliya....

@Aaliya_Fizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

maine apne andar ke writer ko bhaut mana kiya,but wo manta he nahi😆soo ek short OS or SS jo b kaho likh dala🤣pls bardash karlo mere liye😉just thoda scene type hai specially for 'arjun raute ke fans ke liye'jo chahe wo kahe sakte ho😉pasand ayi toh jam ke tareef karna, agar nai aaye toh,mujhe maaf karlo😉pls padlo dil se likha hai bhaut mistakes honge😉dimaag jo use nai kiya😆kuch main samjhaogi aur kuch khud he samjhjana😉
neeche ke post me hai ss,padna pls😆aur ek he part hai..thoda pyar toh banta hai na mere OS ke liye😉

Edited by Aliya_begh - 12 years ago

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Aaliya....

@Aaliya_Fizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

AROUND 10PM eft conference hall

after solving piracy case EFT returned to office..arjun and aisha still completing some paper work related to the case..they are sitting opposite to each other busy with their works..chotu and sree in eft kitchen while having coffee
sree : chotu tere kya khayal hai?
chotu :ghar jaane hai aur kya,aur kya yaha aachar dalega kya sree😆
Sree :chotu tu b na dhakkan hai😆main uss aisha ki bt kar raha tha
chotu [with a teasing smile]
kyu?kahi sreekanth sen ka dil toh nai agaye uspe
angery sree"chotu tu b kuch b bolta hai,ladki thodi hai, jhasi ki rani hai"
chotu: kyu kya kiya unse?
Sree : tune dekha nai kitna akkadti hai,ek under cover operation kya karliye,apne aapku pata nai kya samjhti hai
chotu :
nai yaar itni b buri nai hai
sree :
acha?toh phir teri 11:30 wali ka kya hoga?
chotu with a cute smile :
nai yaar sree mera matlab wo nai tha,wo kaha aur yeh kaha wo
"yeh kya horaha"rathod enters"tum dono ko ghar nai jana hai"agar nai jana hai toh tum log pending cases solve karo sakte ho aj raat"
chotu aur sree ek saat"naahhii"
Chotu: sir wo bus hum jahe rahe the'saying soo they rushed out of rathod's sight
rathod was about to leave he asked arjun whether he coming or not..
Rathode :raute chale?
arjun just nodded at him..hmmm
rathod: aur aisha tum?
AISHA: yes sir..
RATHOD :theek hai tm dono aajana main bahar milta ho...saying that he left from cabin,arjun still doing some work and aisha while packing her bag uski nazar arjun pe padti hai..she thought to her'itni akkad kis baat ki hai inhe,ek sorry toh bolhe sakte hai na,meri itni mahenat paani me chali gayi inki wajah se'she was at bit loud with her thoughts and arjun heard that
ARJUN [giving her his attituted look and ]finally he spoke 'tumne kuch kaha'
AISHA: nahi toh?😆
arjun left from there as he was done with his work...
SUV scene : rathod driving and arjun next to him and aisha sitting in back seat
[deadly silence in SUV🤣 chotu aur sree jo nahi the]
finally rathod breaked it..'aisha tumhara ghar aagaya,..everyone in eft knew that she stays in that house where she hidded siddhart..
aisha stepped out of SUV and she went to front door she said "thank u sir and good nyt" to rathod
RATHOD : good nyt
and when she was about to leave from there "AISHA ruko"arjun called her..Aisha was shock..
arjun removes his seat belt and went to her..he was about to say something but Aisha didn't allow him,before he could speak
aisha said"finally apko laga na ki mujhe sorry bolna chahiye?
arjun : "tumhare keys,crime shot pe gir gaye the"he handed her keys and went back to SUV🤣
aisha words created an awkward silence and she went back with embarrassment...

NOTE: sirf ek part hai..OS ends..aisha expected a sorry,but arjun kyu sorry bole?usse thodi pata tha ki wo ek under cover cop hai..aisha ko pata nai hai na ki siddarth ne rathod aur chotu ko bataya tha ki wo ek UC hai,usse laga arjun ko b pata hoga,isliye she expected a sorry..samjhe ya samjhao

Edited by Aliya_begh - 12 years ago

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

mujhe ese kayon lagta hai ki arj aisha ko sorry bolne hi aaya tha lekin aisha ne uske kahne se pahle hi atitude jo dikha diya tha phir socha hoga ki iski akad ko todne ki koi jaroort nahi hai mujhe, by the way mujhe arj ne hi bataya tha ki meri takkar ki ek ladki aai hai etf me , socha tha sorry boluga par uska attitude dekhkar rah gya
ab tum sochogi ki mujhe arj ne kaise batya, wo kya hai na arj mere best friend hai

hahahahahaa🤣❤️

cong for yr story
apni story ke liye ek party to de do yaar

very nice story koi tumhare sath de ya na de mai tumhara sath jaroor dungi
ab tak sab ariya par hi atke hue hai , chalo ab kuch hatke ho raha hai
tumhari story ke liye 100 me se 110 marks de rahi hu
ese hi lagan se story likhti rahna, kya pata gorky tumhe show me Debashish ka asst. hi bana de

are es nai jodi ka naam to rakh do, phir wahi naam chelega , i think arsha/arjusha is good name.

Edited by piyaliswami88 - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

dear i like d start...
shreetu masti always make us smile or sometimes laugh!!!!
aisha says she want sry frm arjun n arjun glares at her wow hehe..
Aisha ko lga arjun use sry bolenge rofl...
amazing n continue soon...
I loved d title of dis ss
first sorry!!!!!!.
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Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

trigger, itna accha story likhthi ho tum, mujhe pathaa hi nahi tha...

too good yaar

and tum un dono ka jodi banaake hi chodhogi, right?

agar CVs nahi karenge, toh tum khud banaane waali ho kya?

great!!!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice yaar!!

Loved it... loved aisha's 'oops' moment😆...

but hope that Mr Akdu will finally bend his head infront of her n say sorry...(n i love u also)😳...

Do contibue soon

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Aaliya....

@Aaliya_Fizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156
dear i like d start...
shreetu masti always make us smile or sometimes laugh!!!!
aisha says she want sry frm arjun n arjun glares at her wow hehe..
Aisha ko lga arjun use sry bolenge rofl...
amazing n continue soon...
I loved d title of dis ss
first sorry!!!!!!.
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.

khatam hogaya😆thank for liking it.