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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2

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Agli bar chodunga nahi, said Chotu gritting his teeth.


Haan haan dekh lena, Sanjay replied nonchalantly.


He turned towards sanya and was about to apologize, but she interrupted him, It's okay chotu ho jata hain kabhi kabhi, she smiled placing her hand on his shoulder in a reassuring manner.


He felt guilty, mentally promised to punish himself. I'm sorry sanya pehle hi you are unwell, he said regretfully. His fingers automatically curled into fist and nose flared with anger, Upar se who director bhi, he said in a low voice.


Yeh sab toh mera kaam hain chotu..aur director sir bhi toh unka kaam hi kar rahe hain na, she replied in a calm voice.


He looked at her unconvinced.


Right Chotu? She repeated demanding his assent. He nodded in agreement, halfheartedly.


Poor guy she thought, must be feeling really embarrassed. In an attempt to lighten his mood a bit she said, Wasie chotu…..kya step kiya tha tumne. Very impressive! She winked at him. He stared at her and then turned his face away.


Mujhe sikhaoge na, she added turning to his side to face him.


He folded his hand across his chest. Chida rahi ho na mujhe, he replied the same way like a kid does when you tease him.


No really , teach me na! She said grinning.


A smile crept on his lips. She really wants to learn from him, Aww he thought Sanya is such a sweet heart. Okay, dekho pehle right leg, he said placing his right foot forward , aur phir left hand, he started demonstrating the step.


Arrey yahan road pe nahi, she said grabbing his hand. She looked around hoping nobody saw them, thankfully nobody did. Giggling at his antics she said, Ghar jaake sikhana..okay!


Okay, he nodded.


Aga bai! Paath kiti dukhtay! (Oh God, my back is aching so much), he said to himself gently massaging his back. Got inside the car and they left the studio.

****


Next Day

10:30 a.m

Sanya's Home

As he entered the living room, he saw her sitting on the couch, reading a newspaper.


Tum hi din chadhe tumhi din dhale, tum hi ho bandhu sakha tumhi………. Her phone announced its presence.


She grabbed the phone and kept it on speaker.


Hey Appy! She chirped.


*Chotu's POV*

Ai Ga! Not again, he thought. This Appy aka Aparna is such a pest. Everybody has such kind of a friend, the one who is sugar coated outside and bitter in the inside. I must warn Sanya, he thought.

Dedh Shaani(oversmart) kahin ki! He cursed her.

*End of POV*


Hey babez. How are you now? asked a sweet voice.


Better…you tell me..how are you? Sanya replied.


Never been better! Appy replied. Aacha tell me how is the shooting going on? She asked in a curious voice.


Shooting is going fine, Sanya replied..kyu? she added not able to comprehend why is she asking about shooting all of a sudden.


Appy replied with a mischievous hint in her voice, Sanya…woh..


Oh that! Sanya understood where she was getting to. Nothing yaar, she said in an attempt to shut the topic. She paused for a while and replied, you know how Sushant is right!


Don't worry, everything will be fine, Appy replied in a clearly unconcerned voice.


I hope so! Said Sanya.


So , you are coming to the party right? Appy asked in a casual manner .


Party? Which party? Sanya asked rubbing her forehead, trying to remember.


Don't tell me you don't remember about the party. Appy replied in a stern voice.


Yeaaah, I am not coming yaar, Sanya replied feeling completely disinterested.


Whhaaat? Cried Appy. Are you freakin crazy!


It is gonna be "THE PARTY", appy said in crazy voice stressing on each and every word. Why are you not coming by the way?


She didn't waited for her to answer, Come on sanya! You have to come okay!


-Flash Flash- The tiny Led light blinked.


Sanya replied,Okay Okay…Listen I am getting another call I will call you later. Bye and she disconnected the call and switched the line.


Yes? She asked.


It was a call from the production house, Okay..i will be there at 9.Thanks!


Keeping the phone back at its place, she saw his standing near the gate.


Chotu? Kuch kaam hain? She asked.


Haan, he replied. How should I put this now? he thought. Ma'am, actually…


Cutting him in the middle she replied, For the umpteenth time call me Sanya please!


Sorry, Sanya actually, he paused. I was thinking ki……


Haan bolo, she said nodding her head in an encouraging manner.


Can I take a half day, I have to meet a friend, he asked feeling a bit hesitant.


She smiled, Yeah sure!

I'll be back by 5, he added.

Okay, she said and went to her room.


Damn! She looks tensed, he thought.

****


Hope that wasn't boring! 😕

So, did you all like the bond they share? 😆

P.S-Next part is quite action packed 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahahahha!! chotu started dancing lessons in the road itself?? 🤣 he is soo cute!!! i thought sanya will shout at him!! thank god!! she is really sweet to him.. who is the sushant guy?? her bf?? poor chotu!! will b heartbroken!! u shouldnt split chonya...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

hahahahha!! chotu started dancing lessons in the road itself?? 🤣 he is soo cute!!! i thought sanya will shout at him!! thank god!! she is really sweet to him.. who is the sushant guy?? her bf?? poor chotu!! will b heartbroken!! u shouldnt split chonya...😉



😆
yep..Sanya is damn chweet! 😉

Thank you for reading! : )

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's too good... chotu and sanya relation is really sweet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghasingh

it's too good... chotu and sanya relation is really sweet..



Thanks meghu! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Looks like not many are interested in this one. Is it that bad? 😕

Dil todh diya mera! 🥺 🤣

Anyways, those who are here's the next update! 😆

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PART 3

11:00 a.m

Friend's Caf

He was waiting for him, glancing at his watch after every minute. Kahan reh gaya yeh, lagta hain koi case aa gaya hoga, he thought. Ya phir shayad uss Samjhe ya Samjhau ne kuch kaam de diya hoga, he chuckled. His eyes became moist, remembering his days in ETF.

A curly haired guy, wearing spectacles approached towards the table.


Chotu! The guy exclaimed with joy.


Shree, he said feeling equally happy. He got up and gave him a bro hug.


The settled down and started their chattar-pattar. It's been a long time they haven't met. One of them used to be busy when the other was free.


Kaisa hain yaar? He asked wiping his watery eyes.


Pagal! Ro raha hain?


Aansu poch! Main bilkul theek hu, shree replied.


Aur bata chotu, sanya kasie hain? Asked shree with a a teasing smile. Mere mention of her name had a strange effect on him, his cheeks turned red.


Oho Blushing haan! Shree giggled, poking him.


Stop teasing me shree, he complained.


Kya yaar chotu, tu bhi na. Us Sanya ke liye ETF chod diya, aur abhi tak use bataya bhi nahi, said shree with disappointment.


He replied with a smile, Shree, tu toh jaanta hain na ki uska boyfriend hain. And I want her to happy that's it, chahe kisi ke sath bhi ho.


Shree can't help but smile at his friend. Aacha baba mat bata, shree said.


Wasie bhi chotu, ladkiyan na train ki tarah hoti hain, ek jaati hain toh dusri aati hain, shree said to boost up his friend's morale. Aur who 10:30 baje wali toh hain hi na! Shree winked at him.

11:30, he corrected him.


Haan haan wohi, shree replied and they both burst out laughing.


Aur bata shree, ETF ke Love birds kasie hain? chotu said giggling.


Arjun sir aur riya, aache hain! Par yaar tere bina Ri chidhane mein maza nahi aata. I miss you yaar chotu, said shree, holding on the tears which welled up in his eyes.


Chotu removed shree's glasses and brushed away his tears and said, I miss you too yaar. And they shared a sweet moment together.


Aacha, rathore sir ko koi mili ki nahi? Chotu asked curiously.


Pata nahi yaar, Rathore sir bhi na kuch ajjeb sa behave karne lage hain, Shree replied.


Hmmm……Investigation karni padhegi, they both said in unison and started laughing again.

****

Dude! A guy shouted.


They turned to see the person. There were 2 young boys, must be in their early 20s were sitting on the opposite table, one of the guy was holding a magazine and pointing towards it.


Boy 1: Dude! Kya super hot lag rahi hain Sanya.

Boy 2:[husky voice] Haan yaar, ekdum sexy!


That was enough for him!

He clenched his jaws and his fingers curled into fist. He got up grabbed the boy's collar and gave him a punch and ended up breaking his jaws. He glared at the other boy, the boy immediately ran away watching him trembling with anger.


Chotu! Shree cried and tried to pacify him.


The boy got up, wiping the dripping blood he said pointing out his finger, Jaanta nahi hain main kaun hu. Choduga nahi tujhe ab. He just glared in return to his threat.


What the ??? The manager shouted and threw all of them out of the caf.


Are you okay? Shree asked. He nodded in return. Aacha chal main nikalta hu, Bye and then they both left.


****

12:00 a.m

Sanya's House

Sanya kahan hain? He asked, the maid.

The maid looked at him and started giggling.

Kahan hain, Sanya? He asked again feeling extremely irritated.

In her room, the maid replied, controlling her laughter.

He stormed towards her room.

He was standing at the door. She was watching television.

*Knock**Knock*

Sanya, he said.

She turned her attention from the television towards him.

Her jaws dropped when she saw him.

****

I know this part didn't have Chotu-Sanya together.

But next(last) part is full of them!( OBVIOUSLY O.o)

P.S

I have two endings in my mind for this OS! 😆

So, what do you want?

A shocker! 😉

OR

A sweet end! 😳

Do tell me!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#37


Ress ki bacchi! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
lovely update!!!

so chotu left etf??😲 shree-chotu part was emotional...😭 so ariya is together😳 ...

if the ending turns out to b shocker.. please give a warning okay??

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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya kre mre family(ress family) very imp for me🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

lovely update!!!

so chotu left etf??😲 shree-chotu part was emotional...😭 so ariya is together😳 ...

if the ending turns out to b shocker.. please give a warning okay??



Thank you! : )

LOL aacha theek hain nahi dungi! 🤣

P.S- You want me to write an ArIYA OS na?
Koi specific demands? Koi scene? Koi gaana? 😉

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