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LuckYMAma

@LuckYMAma

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#841

Oh no...bt any way one of d best ariya ff...thanx for giving us such a beautiful ff...agn thanx 4 pm...waitn 4 epilog

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#842

OMG??? 😲 WHAT??? 😲 did i read it right??? yadein is end?? Abhi toh Rathod aur aisha ka kuch shuru bhi nehi hua and you are ending it???? kyun?? 😭 😭 😭 please epilogue part me rathod aur aisha ko settle karna pleeeaaaseee 😳 😳 its an earnest request from a reader.

update was fab as always. rathod is realy a understanding person how did he give space to aisha i am realy impressed. sleeping beauty,dostana part & the ending portion realy cracked me up 🤣 🤣 and for first poem it was nice attempt 👍🏼 keep writing them.

i need a fast comeback of you with a dhasu FF..love you dear ❤️

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#843

Dear Kunchu,

I have no complaints. All good things have to come to an end one day, and this one has had a very good run. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.

Shyamala Aunty

hey everyone!!!

CHAPTER 40:

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#844

Di tight wala hug...
me bi senti hogayi update padhkar...
well yadein is always memorable fr me..
cos frm dis ff i find a special relationship wid u...
dis ff give me ur guide n insipiration to write something in my life..
dis ff give me a elder sister lyk u...
ptani me aapke support ke layak hu ya ni..
bt want dis relationship to be cherised in my life forever...!
well back to update
it was awesum as always bt smthing special today as it was end..
Shreetu superb..!!
ayesha to sameer papa wow...!!!!
dostana part cracked me up..!!
arjun to riya shaadi par kisse ?? lolz..
riya h ek akdu hehe
kid part rofling..!
arjun lgta h wo akdu ek sath kanjus bi h again lolz...!!
di dis update had every emotion..
friendship bonding , luv n fun part everything..!!
grt..
outstanding..
fab..
amazing..
lots of claps di..
poetry was heart touching di..!!!!!
i m speechless..
waiting fr dhamekedar epilogue..
superb news a new ff by u thats grt di..
congo shongo!!
A song fr u di..
phoolon ka taaron ka sabka kehna h
ek hazaron me meri behna h...
di i really respect u a lot..
pls if i ever hurt u den sry di...
pls di if ever rude to u den sry di..
keep ur brilliant writing continue di...!!!!!
me running..
wid a song as u knw i m a song freak..
hum rahe ya na rahe kal..
kal yaad ayenge ye pal...
pal ye h pyar ke pal..,
chal aa mere sang chal...!!
di i love u a lot dnt wry no dostana hehe..
regardrt
urs naughty choti..
bye n tc di..!!
keep living..
keep rocking..
cheers!!
N ya dnt forget me ever in ur lyf ab samjhi ya samjhau ??????

Edited by Payal_156 - 13 years ago

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#845

hey...wow tht was really a amazing updare
lovelly ending
waiting for the next part..post a long one if u can
cant wait to read more of ur work
update soon

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#846

hey why r u stoping it...

😭

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#847

superb update...!!👏

sad to knw d stry hs ended bt i guess evry gd thng hs to end..!!😭

waitn fr d epilouge..!!😳

waitin fr ur new stry..!!!😊

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#848

awesome update as usual :) loved it

the way riya was arjun was just superb :)

love how shree instantly woke up when chotu said rathore's name 😆

loved how rathore was concerned for his whole team :) so sweet of him

dostana part was really funny 😆 riya was doubting arjun

i am so sad that you are ending it 😭 oh well all good things come to an end one day but yea want a long epilogue

thanks for the PM :)

can't wait to read the Epilogue

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#849

awesom awesom awesom ,
totaly mind blowing ,
gr8 endinggg

Edited by Piyarani - 13 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#850

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Di tight wala hug...
me bi senti hogayi update padhkar...
well yadein is always memorable fr me..
cos frm dis ff i find a special relationship wid u...
dis ff give me ur guide n insipiration to write something in my life..
dis ff give me a elder sister lyk u...
ptani me aapke support ke layak hu ya ni..
bt want dis relationship to be cherised in my life forever...!
well back to update
it was awesum as always bt smthing special today as it was end..
Shreetu superb..!!
ayesha to sameer papa wow...!!!!
dostana part cracked me up..!!
arjun to riya shaadi par kisse ?? lolz..
riya h ek akdu hehe
kid part rofling..!
arjun lgta h wo akdu ek sath kanjus bi h again lolz...!!
di dis update had every emotion..
friendship bonding , luv n fun part everything..!!
grt..
outstanding..
fab..
amazing..
lots of claps di..
poetry was heart touching di..!!!!!
i m speechless..
waiting fr dhamekedar epilogue..
superb news a new ff by u thats grt di..
congo shongo!!
A song fr u di..
phoolon ka taaron ka sabka kehna h
ek hazaron me meri behna h...
di i really respect u a lot..
pls if i ever hurt u den sry di...
pls di if ever rude to u den sry di..
keep ur brilliant writing continue di...!!!!!
me running..
wid a song as u knw i m a song freak..
hum rahe ya na rahe kal..
kal yaad ayenge ye pal...
pal ye h pyar ke pal..,
chal aa mere sang chal...!!
di i love u a lot dnt wry no dostana hehe..
regardrt
urs naughty choti..
bye n tc di..!!
keep living..
keep rocking..
cheers!!
N ya dnt forget me ever in ur lyf ab samjhi ya samjhau ??????