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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hey ...

Thanks for the part 2 ...

I wanted to know Arjun's reactions after knowing the truth n he did what I expected he accepted kanishka and Shree's relation...

But poor Shree ... He has to deal with 2 Samjhe ya ... Samjhaon's...

N love Ariya's scene ... Omg just love the part where they were eating ice-cream from 1 cup ... But oops the cup fell n even the kiss was interrupted :(

But that's ok ... I'm glad that they got married ... :)

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

What a happy family!!! so cute

loved the climax!!

Riya bhabhi!! wow!!

And i must say, Shree had the courage to speak out in front of Arjun!! bravo Shree!

Awesome dear...

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Thanks for the part 2 ...
I wanted to know Arjun's reactions after knowing the truth n he did what I expected he accepted kanishka and Shree's relation...
But poor Shree ... He has to deal with 2 Samjhe ya ... Samjhaon's...
N love Ariya's scene ... Omg just love the part where they were eating ice-cream from 1 cup ... But oops the cup fell n even the kiss was interrupted :(
But that's ok ... I'm glad that they got married ... :)

Thanks dear for liking d part ...

I never wanted to write it in a Romantic genre...so had to add those elements to give it all a comic touch

thanks again for d precious comments

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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
What a happy family!!! so cute
loved the climax!!
Riya bhabhi!! wow!!
And i must say, Shree had the courage to speak out in front of Arjun!! bravo Shree!

Awesome dear...

Shree finally gathered d courage to speak to him ...yayy

thanks for d precious comments 😊

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

wounderful climax
riya babhi so cute

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Purva first of all I want to say that it is the most difficult to write something in comic sence & to make people laugh..& how you write the comic stuffs not only in this OS but in every writing of yourstories is truly appreciable 👍🏼 you are very very good as a writer..

okay coming to the update..I have a broad smile in my face throughout the update 😃 Riya & shree's fight in dark room was damn funny 😆

Bhai behen dono ek dusre ko jhatka dene ki chakkar me khud 440 volt ka jhatka kha gaye 🤣

love the antics of Shree during the confession & the sudden outcome of Riya's relationship status(would be bhabi 😆) 😉
bravo shree & smart Riya 👍🏼
& last but not the least sweet Purva 😊 thanks for this supercool OS 😃

Edited by -sree13- - 13 years ago