OS:Shree First Date Final PART on pg5 - Page 2

Dear Purva,

I have never been inclined to throw edibles like tomatoes or useful things like chappals at anyone; it is such a waste. This time, what I would like is to send you a large bouquet of whatever is your favourite flower.

This is a delightful fit of fancy, and is hilarious for the most part. I liked the foot in the mouth (Shree's mouth, of course ) passages a lot, and the sudden access of courage for Shree right at the end is spot on. Kanishka seems to be as strong-headed as the Emperor she is named after, and I am sure she can easily manage her 'Hitler brother, ' and her software obsessed fiance as well.

All in all, great fun!👏

Shyamala Aunty

Today sum people including me were discussing about Shree n his Gadget Prem...

That was awesome! Gadgets are my first love (okay, second - food comes first) and I love the way you showed Shree's devotion to them!

And lol, Shree is shaping up to be good husband material - he's helping his wife get equipped for any future jasoosi 😆

I thought she'd be Rathore's sister but being Arjun's brother in law sounds much worse! Can you imagine getting Samjhe ya Samjhaun'd at home as well as work?!

I really like your writing style. Hope to see more of your work around the forum :)

@Radhika , @Deepika : Thanks dear

Originally posted by: -sree13-

I wish to see the expression of Arjun after knowing their relationship...!!! 😉
an earnest request to you Purva if possible please turn it to a ss..i would love to read more about it 😃

great job 👍🏼

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

That was awesome! Gadgets are my first love (okay, second - food comes first) and I love the way you showed Shree's devotion to them!

I really like your writing style. Hope to see more of your work around the forum :)

Shree ka gadget prem to jaanlewa h...
But pllz vo part b.dikhao na wen they tell to arjunnn..pllz pllz

haha so funny
shree s dating arjun's sister kanishka😆
poor guy he didn't get any other girl, only hitler's sis🤣
his gifts r so nice specially his gsp tracker watch
i hope it ll help him in future🤣
w8ing 4 arjun's reaction
pls cont

superb purva...