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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Madmadona, @Sweetdoc: Thanks dear for liking d part ...

i will write sumthing on arjun's reaction soon



@Prava, @Aliya : thanks u so much for liking it ...i m glad u liked it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Purva awesome
sending u anda n joota in below posts
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Samiya : hey i m accepting d gift ...

Shoes branded hain ...to i will wear dem n participate in olympics😆

aur eggs ka main Omlette bana kar kha jaungi🤣

@aptl123 n @honeypanjwani: Thanks dear for liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG.. just wonder how would Arjun react!!
Nice story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks dear...

Many people want to know Arjun's reaction...

working on it ...Will post it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Ariya pankhas,
i never thot that for dis OS i will write a Second part; as it was just a funny idea which came n i putted it up as a OS...but many people want to know Arjun's reaction.
Now if dere is Arjun den dere has to b Ria in it

So here s d second part

i hope u people like it

One thing i kept cursing was chosing Kanishka as d name. It is a nice name, but i have chosen a name Sharmishtha opposite shree in my other work, So i kept on writing Sharmishtha in place of Kanishka Every time. Then i had to change it.


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In arjun's house:

Kanishka went out saying that she was going to meet some friend. Arjun thinking that she will b late, called Ria home. Arjun n ria were dating for some time, and it was a secret from every1 , including , kanishka.

Ria and arjun were sitting on d couch, with ria hugging him sideways. Both of them were enjoying ria's favorite icecream from 1 cup. They had dinner together. Ever since arjun accepted her in his life, ria cherishes each and every moment, she spends with him. Though such moments are rare, mainly because of there schedule, and also because they dun want to disclose d relation at this point.

Ria: arjun , I want to ask 1 thing??

Arjun: Hmmm'bolo kya hua??

Ria: Arjun, i..i wanted to ask about our future'.its high tym'.kab tak aise milenge. I think kanishka should know about this'.she would be very happy.

Arjun: ria I agree with u '.i want to get married par first I m thinking about kanishka's marriage. Most importantly, I want to disclose d big news (winking at her) in a different style. I mean usko jhatka lagna chahiye. (gives a naughty smile)

Ria: Tum dono bhai behen, always try to give each other Surprises or Shock. U people are a unique brother n sis ki Jodi'..love u for dis. (She was happy so she hugs and kisses him on his cheeks.)

Because of her sudden jerk, the icecream cup falls. She makes a face.

Arjun: u threw my icecream'.Now u have to pay for dis'.

And before ria could say anything, he moved dangerously closer to her. He was about to kiss her, when d doorbell rang, disturbing d moment.

Here , Shree and kanishka, were coming to the house. Kanishka thought of giving her bro a JHATKA. So she asked shree to enter her room from the back gate. So that she can play with Arjun. Shree initially declined, obviously wid d fear of messing up with Mr Samjhe ya Samjhyun. But then he had to give up because d girl in front of him was no less den samjhe ya sajhyun.

It was kanishka on the door. Here Arjun thought of hiding ria because, he wanted to disclose it to her , by planning sumthing big. Ria panicked, thinking that she will come to know about them .

Arjun asked ria to calm down. He said:'Ria relax'go straight in the corridor n move in to the room on the left'.dat s my room. '

Ria went inside. Inside she got confused and entered the room to the Right.

Here kanishka entered. Arjun:'Kani 'itna late'kya hian yeh. '

On the other hand, Shree sumhow managed to enter Kanishka's room via Window. He was searching to switch on the lights, when he realized sum1 in the room. It was Ria, who mistakenly entered wrong room. Ria attacked him, thinking that he is a thief. Shree also , being a ETF officer, counter attacked. Ria on top of her voice, "Arjun" .

Here outside, Kanishka was trying to tell about a surprise, Just when they heard a scream coming from Kanishka's room.

In the room, shree switched on d room holding Ria tightly(thinking that it is a thief). As soon as lights are on, Ria says: Shree tum yahan kya kar rhe ho??

Shree (leaving her ):'Sorry I thot ki it s sum thief'.Waise Wat r u doing here??'

(Ria very well knows about kanishka n shree, she initially asked out of shock'.n then keep on dragging to cover up d issue , dat what was she doing dere).

Shree: Ri bata tu kya kar rahi hain???

Ria thinking what to say wen both heard a strong voice. They turned in the direction. Arjun standing with kanishka. Arjun looking for answer from shree, while kanishka shocked to see Ria.

Arjun: Shree tum yahan kya kar rhe ho,,,,

Shree giving strange luks to Kanishka, Arjun and Ria and thinking about answer. Kanishka came to his rescue. Kanishka : pehle yeh batao ria yahan kya kar rhi hian.

Arjun: I asked first'

Kanishka: So what ?? now I m asking??

Shree and ria confused and looking at d duo.

Arjun finally gave up: I called her 'koi problem??

Kanishka: Kyun??

Arjun : Pehle question ka answer karo?? What is Shree doing here in ur room??

Before Kanishka cud have said anything, Shree interrupted, as he knew ki she is scared and s dragging d matter.

Shree: Arjun sir, we want to talk to u about us ?? (looking at kanishka)

Arjun gave a "What d hell is going on" look to shree. Shree was already scared. He closed his eyes, and said: "Main aur kanishka like each other'.infact love each other...Kanishka is even more special to me then my gadgets'.I can let go off my gadgets but not her'So we want to get married."

Saying dis he managed to open his eyes, to check arjun's reaction. He opened his eyes. Arjun was about to shout when he saw Kanishka's eyes, which had so much love for him. She was staring at his innocent face n d way he said all that. Ria was smiling thinking what shree just said. She signaled him to accept it. Arjun knew what d girls wanted. Before arjun could say anything,

Kanishka: Bhai , I made a plan of disclosing d news wid Jhatka , but yeh Shree ne sab easily bata diya'.Still my question is same, What is Ria doing here??

Arjun: Shut up kanishka, shree How dare u ?? Standing in front of me..n '

Before arjun could have said anything, ria interrupted : "Arjun what is this'Shree n kanishka love each other..n dere was truth in his eyes. U better accept it"

Arjun: Ria tum beech mein mat bolo.

Ria: arrey ..y wont I speak'After all I m kanishka ki would b bhabhi'.its my right n more then right its my duty , to guide u Mr Arjun rawte if u r doing sumthing wrong.

Ria said this in 1 breath. Kanishka looking at her, and just then Shree shouted: "Ri tum aur arjun sir,'yeh kab se chal raha hain..Wow I m so happy for u"

Kanishka : acha now I understand 'kab se chal raha hain yeh sab'n If bhabhi would have not told , we would have not come to know about so gud news.

Arjun n ria were happy to hear bhabhi frm kanishka's mouth.

On ria's Long lecture to Arjun , he finally accepted to the proposal of kanishka n Shree.

Finally both d couple got married in sum tym.


PS: waiitng for d comments ...was that upto ur expectations .????..

i thought of writing a very small part initially but wen i started writing , i increased it a bit ...

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx for the 2nd update..but i guess it is th end 😕
riya and arjun preparing for future and on a romantic date 😳
lol...wrong timing of kanishka and shree and even wrong from both sides to give each other surprises..😆
but shree was soo determined to face the truth and wid the help of riya and kanishka managed arjun's yes..
riya too managed to blurt her secret on this way and accepted by kanishka
finally wedding bells 😊
thanx 4 d pm!!
Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear Purva,

Well, you have pulled it off in that this part is even funnier than the previous one, especially Riya and Shree fighting with each other in the dark. Delightful and very neatly wound up. I am decidedly NOT an Ariya pankha, but still I liked this very much, largely because Shree was a main lead for a change, and then it was so comical right thru. Shree's confession to Arjun had me in splits.

Shyamala Aunty

Hey Ariya pankhas,
i never thot that for dis OS i will write a Second part; as it was just a funny idea which came n i putted it up as a OS...but many people want to know Arjun's reaction.
Now if dere is Arjun den dere has to b Ria in it

So here s d second part

i hope u people like it

One thing i kept cursing was chosing Kanishka as d name. It is a nice name, but i have chosen a name Sharmishtha opposite shree in my other work, So i kept on writing Sharmishtha in place of Kanishka Every time. Then i had to change it.


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In arjun's house:


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashashyam


Dear Purva,

Well, you have pulled it off in that this part is even funnier than the previous one, especially Riya and Shree fighting with each other in the dark. Delightful and very neatly wound up. I am decidedly NOT an Ariya pankha, but still I liked this very much, largely because Shree was a main lead for a change, and then it was so comical right thru. Shree's confession to Arjun had me in splits.

Shyamala Aunty


I like d charcater of Shree..bec of his techy things ..Dat s y i chose to write on him

Beside my works have comical things bec i personally like such things

as dey lighten my mood while writing n sumtimes reader's mind ...😆

Thank u so much for liking it

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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