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Dhani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: nivanthi2
wonderful!!!!!!!😳

thanks sweets 😉

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Dhani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: aroojarain
wow..! lovely update :)

thanks i'm glad you like it 😊

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Dhani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: shrutisweety
hey dear,
arjun consoling riya so gud,
and it was emotional update
contine soon,
send me pm

yeah it was really emtional update

i'll add humour in next one 😳

thanks for reading it

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Dhani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: prava55663
Wow...superb update..
loved the concern they showed..

thanks for pm...so sorry for late reply...

waiting for ariya scenes..

thanks for comeenting *finally* 😆

yeah me to excited for writing ariya scene

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856040

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

hand in hand lovely do update soon

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

poor chotu😭

how hard it must have been for him😭

but our Rathore and Arjun are heroes, they did their best to save her👏

and Riya and Arjun's emotional bonding, that was very sweet😳

please update real soon😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Amazing ff...read it in one go...

Rathod is such a sweet person...loved him...

i liked the case invesigation ...Arjun's concern for Riya is so cute...

ETF team working and interactng as a family...feels good to read it...

cont soon

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Dhani

@Dhani_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: -sree13-
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beauriful update dear 😊
absolutely loved how you protrayrd the soft & caring side of chotu as a brother as well as shree & Riya's unconditional friendship ❤️

Rathod is truly a gurdian for ETF members..Love the way Arjun consolling Riya..the intensity of that scene made me feel so happy 😃..I will not mind if the Ariya story starts to shape up like this 😳

Wonder who is that guy Riya was talking to!!! but Dhani kya urdu likha hai tune..superb 👍🏼 ab samjhi main tujhe kyun brilliant bolti hoon??

update soon yaar..missing your marathi 😉 & thanks for tolerating so much of my bakbak 😆

thanks sree

i personally think there is much potenstial in each charecter

as per chotu he is trying his level best to balance his life

yeah rathore is sweetheart you can't help to adorehim

aww you like ariya scene but i feel this bit weak

no coments about new entry 😉

lol i know urdu very well so just used it a bit in story 😛

me and brillient itni tarif sree thanks

well i will add marathi in update next time

i always love your bakbak thanks

Edited by Charli_ - 13 years ago

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Dhani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Tami_
nice like it

thank you so much 😳

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Nida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Hey ...

That was just amazing ...

I just love the fact that you are actually concentrating on every character ... Just love the way everyone was right there for Chottu when he needed them ... And actually did whatever they could ... Shree donated his blood, Rathod and Arjun also did whatever they could ...

riya is so sweet ... poor thing don't wanna see someone loosing their family member ... N love the small Ariya scene ... Even though it was small it was really good ...

Thnx for the pm ... :)

N plz update soon ... :)

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