FF: The Devil's Gold- Final Chap Pg25 UPT31st Oct - Page 3

Originally posted by: purecure

hey dat was awesome dear...

frankly sayig or i must say honestly saying...i got bit angry wen i read riya hooked with some guy called ajay...bt by d end u melted me ..wen arjun enters wid d heroic entry...!!!

i really liked it...n looking forward to read more...plss do continue n pm if u!!!

n u said abt less of ca

ses n mre of ariya...yaar dats all we really want!!!😉

Originally posted by: _mahi_

this sounds a fab dear👏.. i loved it😃 .. oh wow.. this ajay guy sounds so nice😳.. cant seem to hate him even though he is in place of arjun right now 🤣 but would love to see how arjun confesses his love for her😳.. do update soonish beautiful 🤗

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

That was a great start dear.
By the way though I pmed you, didn't ask you ur name, he he.
May I know it :)

Originally posted by: rimss19

OMG i loved it!!!😳

first of all...its such a different concept.😃

very well written⭐️

and i love the way riya nd ajay met and then i loved how arjun came at the end suddenly and stopped all that stuff with his dialog. just love it 😳

now i am very eager to know what happens next ...

plzz pm me when u update...

Originally posted by: arul01

that was interesting! why did arjun stop riya? what happen? please update soon... can't wait to know what happen!

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

OMG!!! Tina another freat FF! Kya baat hai!
U rock!
So after Vishal its Ajay's turn to act as KABAB MEIN HADDI...
U said it will based on Rheae pov... Then who's the DEVIL?
I mean what Archu did at the end this part seemed like Ajay had some criminal records...
But, via Rhea's pov Arjun's the devil as he is ruining her life...
The gold is Rhea I presume... But plzz... Tell na who's the devil here...!!!
Nice FF! Keep updating ASAP.
Take care, love u... Shuchi.

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Hey.. I was fully emotoinal when I wrote that so just wrote whatever came to my mind!
Sorry dear if u were hurt... Plzz.. Dont mind! Sorry again!

Originally posted by: haruhi26

nope i wasnt hurt dear, it takes a very good writing to make people laugh, smile, love and make people cry...So actually its a compliment for me dearN dont be sorry, even me when i finish writing an update for this FF, i feel kinda of emotionally tired and sad with what i wrote

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

aww.. Thanks dear! But u should feel proud too.. U really very good at writing...!