FF: The Devil's Gold- Final Chap Pg25 UPT31st Oct

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Mahi

@_mahi_

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

this sounds a fab dear👏.. i loved it😃 .. oh wow.. this ajay guy sounds so nice😳.. cant seem to hate him even though he is in place of arjun right now 🤣 but would love to see how arjun confesses his love for her😳.. do update soonish beautiful 🤗

Quote

ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

yeah yeah...continue😃
wanna know why arjun stopped them!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was a great start dear.
By the way though I pmed you, didn't ask you ur name, he he.
May I know it :)

Quote

riushibabo

@riushibabo

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

great start

like this new side of arjun

Quote

Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kgmu86
wow loved this side of arjun

yep a protective and possessive Arjun is really a treat nah, kash hamare serial mein bhi aisa ho ek din

Quote

Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Gr8 start!!!

Awesome update!!!

Loved this part a lot!!!

Add me to ur pm list

Quote

836559

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMG i loved it!!!😳

first of all...its such a different concept.😃

very well written⭐️

and i love the way riya nd ajay met and then i loved how arjun came at the end suddenly and stopped all that stuff with his dialog. just love it 😳

now i am very eager to know what happens next ...

plzz pm me when u update...

Quote

scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

that was interesting! why did arjun stop riya? what happen? please update soon... can't wait to know what happen!

Quote

Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

OMG!!! Tina another freat FF! Kya baat hai!
U rock!
So after Vishal its Ajay's turn to act as KABAB MEIN HADDI...
U said it will based on Rheae pov... Then who's the DEVIL?
I mean what Archu did at the end this part seemed like Ajay had some criminal records...
But, via Rhea's pov Arjun's the devil as he is ruining her life...
The gold is Rhea I presume... But plzz... Tell na who's the devil here...!!!
Nice FF! Keep updating ASAP.
Take care, love u... Shuchi.

Quote

Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

@ sonycs001, shrutisweety, Radhika Shah, Leki, priya00147, shah10, sweetdoc,, KiSha13, M.V.Kohli007, ipkknd-fan, grad2011, ehmmbh_luvr, khusho, MjhtFan_Mahima,

Thanks you all loads for appreciating what i have written, its a great encouragement to continue😊

A big kiss and hug to you all😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago