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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Best best best.
Super se uper thha...
Loved it.
Felt bad when i read the last line,"Usse jaane ko kaho".

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

fantastic update :) loved it

feeling so bad for riya :( poor girl is so alone

her parents died 😭 but i am glad arjun was there for her at that time

so arjun loved riya but never told her

loved arjun's conversation with roshni and he thinks that riya hates him

she considered roshni as her sister and even gave arjun to her

flashback was very nice

aww how sweet both of them were eating food from the same plate

roshni pushed riya and she sprained her ankle 😡

loved arjun's concern for riya

the way you explained exchange was superb :) you know really well about exchange programs

i just hate roshni 😡 she is so jealous

can't wait to read more

continue soon

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

so riya loved arjun n arjun loved riya.. roshini beech mein aaya.. n riya sacrificed him...

roshini was a bit cruel to riya.. 😡

loved the flashback part n lamba lamba definition of "EXCHANGE"..

update soon!!

Edited by Queen.Bee - 12 years ago

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Wow...that awesome.finally u update...its really cooolll..the Fb was great...update soon

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Beautifully written... FB ws beautifully potrayed... Roshni jealous of Ariya's closeness... Poor Riya... felt bad for her... update soon... PM me

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

omg misunderstandings ka mountain kab tote ga

i hope arjun ab riya ko dur na jane de

update soon

and pm be plz

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sdhg

@sdhg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Beautifully written
loved the flashback part

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

superb update...
so beautifully written...
present scene where arjun imagines talking to rosh is lovely...
and riya she has gone through so much... :( glad that she is still standing strong...
omg riya in danger... :O fbs were amazing... rosh jealous of the closeness ariya shared...
arjun also loved riya but what happened?? why did he marry rosh?? why did ariya seperate??
the way you defined exchange programme is beautiful...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...