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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

i have a feeling that their being on "no talking terms" had something to do with Roshni...!! am i right?

Love Arjun's concern!!! Waiting 4 more

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Oh! I missed this one..

Thanks for reminding me..
Ahaa.. another one portraying bechari Roshni as the evil one! But she's dead already.. 😲
Vidzi's bhootni seems to have gripped us all! 😆😉

You had me shocked for a moment there.. Evil behna.. 😲

It was only when the superhero ran to the rescue of the heroine that I could breathe a sigh of relief!

Riya is pushing him away.. We'll see for how long! And what's with Riya's mission? Have I missed something there?

Riya: When you love someone, but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?

Arjun: But if you never try you'll never know
Just what you're worth..

Us: Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I (PC) will try to fix you.. 🤗 (Simply coz I love the song, way too much!) 😉

Precap sounds really intriguing! Awaiting more on this one.. 😳

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DEEPZzzz

@DEEPZzzz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

loving the story. The lasr update was nice... thank u so much for the pm

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

hey finally managed to get hold of another work of yours😛...n its damn interesting yet would request if u could provide me with a link of all yours works...it'll be great!😃
now to the story...it is really really great n captivating... its well thought of😊...what i don't understand is why arjun called his concern for her as pity infront of her...but i presume that u'll clear only with the coming updates!
i felt like strangling that dev to death...jerk😡😡...but thankfully arjun turned up at the right time!
i kind of don't like roshni in this😛
N riya' s panic attack actually made me go panicky😲
the precap seems to be really intresting will be waiting eagerly!
P.S could u PM me the next update?

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

wow! that was a superb update! riya has been through a lot! and poor girl, she seems all lonely... hope she and arjun get back together soon! can't wait for that to happen... arjun was so worried for riya... such a wonderful update... really loved it a lot! please update soon! it's getting more and more interesting! can't wait to read the next update already!

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

awesome update haha!!!!

that jerk dev😡

i hope arjun finds him and complete the work he left...beat him till he becomes blue and black!!!

riya😭

omg she had to go a lot,and didnt even have arjun to support her:(

loved the tendor careness arjun showed riya...beautiful!!!!

what a team!!!

care and concern for each other was damn gud!!!!

once again awesome update👏

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Awesum chapter tahi

idiota dev

Arjun shud have band bajaofyed him

ria 's condition after dat dreadful nightmare was very bad...

d scars of d moment are still dere ...

liked d care he has for her

n team ETF s mindblowing..loved dere concerns for her

Continue soon

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

dr.it is awesm outstanding part
pls update soon
feel bad 4 riya

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Khushboo

@kaybee23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Amazing update!
Aww poor Riya had to go through so much cuz of Dev. Wish Arjun wouldn't have left him.
Love the way he was taking care of Riya!
Can't wait to read the next part! :)