FF- A Lovely Hatred. Complete. - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar👏
this made me feel better.. 😳
glad to see Arjun beating crap out of that moron😃
and that punch was so ufff terii addaaa 😉😆
and smara is just so adorable😳.. the way she behaves with Arjun is like hayyee..
great continuation hunnie⭐️
do update soon and thanks for the pm beautiful 🤗

Edited by _mahi_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rimss19

Here is something which you all would like to see...he is angad when arjun was beating him up😆...


🤣 arjun ka punch kisi boxing punch se kam nahi hai!!😆samjhe angad ke bacche??? ya samjhaaon????😆

Hahaha this so damn hilarious 😆 Jus imagining Angads face.. "jab Arjun ka hath kissi pe padta hai na to aadmi uthna nahi uthjata hai"😆
Lovely post dear waiting forthe next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated my first comment but somehow it got delayed and now its below this one😕
Edited by muskaan. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

this part is so emotional dear...bechari riya kitana sehan kiya usane...


arjun i love you kya entry mar ke uss villain angad ko bhgaya...



hey dear for only one thing


Thanku so much kaveri...but abb kya hoga jab riya ka character hi ye log khatam karr denge!!!😭 i just want ki riya ka character na mare bcoz i like riya more than sana now!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008




arjun ek aur punch mere tarf se bhi lagana...

arjun mera rocky...

ye le laga diya teri taraf se - ek angad ke liye and ek uss manhoos kismat ke liye jiske kaaran sana is leaving the show!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome!

angad "tumhari hi kami thi" epic dialogue🤣🤣

and he is such a 🤬 , he said "he will not leave her" :o so this means that he will come back :O

and will attack riya...arjun said "call me"

he should have taken her home☺️

arjun saying "miss mukherjee" sounds cuteee😳

awww bracelet scene was so cuteee...my fav😛😳

shree and samara knew about riya, lovely ! 😳

and arjun looking for some clues to save riya's reputation is going to be the awesomest😛

yayyy then he will insist her to join...then the office romance😆

p.s , that pic of beated angad is so funny😆

p.s.s, precap is supercool...riya will get drunk 😛

but not a long update :(

waiting for the next one, update soon :)
Edited by muskaan. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg! u r brilliant writer dear! 👍🏼 plz plz update soon dear! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi all...i am updating this FF after a looong time, i am really sorry, i forgot that i was writing this as well😆 silly me😆 but thanks to most of u who reminded me to update the FF and here i am with the next part, its a bit short, but i will update the next chapter very soon which wud be a looong one...i promise!😉
CHAPTER-7
He went through all the records and everything possible , but he had to find evidence of some value.
kuch toh chooth raha hai he thought.
The next day, he went to riya's house.
riya- mr rawte aap??
arjun- mai andar aa sakta hoon? kuch zaroori baat karni thi.
riya- ok...
Arjun gets in.
riya- kahiye!
arjun-riya kya tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho?
riya- jee, aisi bohot si cheeze hain jo mai aapse chupa rahi hoon.
arjun- matlab?
riya- ajeeb baat hai. mai aapki kya lagti hoon jo mujhe apna harr secret aapse share karna hoga?
arjun- dekho riya, mai ye kehna chahta hoon ki kya tumne 5 saal pehele jo...jo log kehete hain...vo sach me kiya tha?
riya- huh! aap pichle 5 saalo se mere baare me sun rahe hain na! aapko kya lagta hai maine ye sab kiya hai ya nahi.
arjun- nahi. mujhe nahi lagta tumne ye sab kiya hai!
riya- kyu?
arjun- maine bohot si cheezo pe dhyaan diya hai riya, aur mujhe saaf samajh aa raha hai ki tumne kisi aur ka blame apne upar liya hai!
riya- aap ye kya keh rahe hain? maine jo kiya vo sahi me kiya tha. samjhe aap?
arjun- kya kiya tha riya? tumne actually me kya kiya tha? batao mujhe. i believe you!
riya- maine kaha na...mere sahi me don se contacts the aur main...main ek traitor thi!
arjun- nahi riya
he gets up and holds her by her shoulders.
arjun- tumhaari aankho me dikh raha hai ki tumne kuch nahi kiya tha.
riya- kuch dino pehle tak toh aap mujhse nafrata karte the na? abb kya ho gaya aapko?
arjun- plzz riya...mai galat tha, maine tumhe galat samjha. i am sorry about that.
riya(putting his hands off her shoulder)- plzz aap jaiye yaha se!
arjun- mujhe sach janna hai riya! mai sach jaane bina nahi jaoonga.
riya- sach????? sach toh aisa hai jo sunn ke bhi uspar bharosa nahi karr payenge.! mere bataane ka koi fayda nahi hoga!
arjun- ek baar batao toh sahi. mai bharosa karta hoon tumpar.
riya- no...mai nahi bata sakti...aapko jo karna hai karr lijiye!
arjun- fine! lekin mai jaan ke hi rahoonga ki sach kya hai!
riya- aap khud bhi pata laga lenge na, tobhi vishvaas nahi karr payenge!!
arjun- vo toh baad me pata chalega miss mukharjee!
A furious arjun leaves the place.
He reaches home and he was very angry. why is she behaving this way with me? what have i done? why can't she tell me the truth? he thought.
He suddenly got banged into someone and it was none other than his cute little pari.
pari- oh! mama...are u ok?
An automatic smile crept on his face on seeing her.
arjun- yes my dear! are u ok?
pari- i am super ok! aap itna gussa kyu the?
arjun-tumhe kaise pata chala that i was angry?
pari- aaki sweet si smile toh aapka gussa chupa leti hai mama, but ur eyes speaks better.
arjun(hugging her)- bilkul apni mummy jaisi baate karti ho!😭
pari- well mama, aapko mummy yaad hai, but mummy ka birthday nahi?
arjun- kya??? aaj didi ka birthday hai! oh no! mai kaise bhool gaya!
Shree and Samara come from the back.
samara- leking hum log nahi bhoole, we have planned the party and usme sab aa rahe hain!
arjun- really?
samara-i am so sorry arjun sir, but maine aapse bina pooche riya ko bula liya!
arjun- its ok.
Now its the party night, the pary is at "roohi hotel" which was owned by arjun and it was named after his sister.
Everybody was enjoying the party and arjun was greeting the guests. rathore came in.
arjun-mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...
rathore- kya?
arjun- kya tumhe vijay and ashita ke baare me kuch pata hai? kya unke koi contacts the underworld se?
rathore- tum paagal ho gaye ho kya? tum jaante ho ki underworld se contacts riya mukharjee ke the.
arjun- mujhe nahi lagta rathore, maine saare records check kiye hain. riya kisi aur ki galtiyon ka blame apne upar le rahi hai aaj tak!
rathore- tum kuch bhi bol rahe ho arjun, riya pe poora case chala tha nd it was proved ki riya was a traitor.
arjun- vahi toh mai keh raha hoon, riya ne jaan boojh karr saboot apne khilaaf kiye, vo chahti thi ki use sazaa ho. vo kisi ko bachaana chahti thi and i am damn sure ki it was one of ashita or vijay!
rathore- nahi rathore, aisa nahi ho sakta! ashita aur vijay dono hi aaj ek higher post parr hain, unke iss case me shamil hone ka koi chance nahi hai!
arjun- huh! vo log aaj bhi duniya ko dhokha de rahe hain! aaj bhi vo log system ok chala rahe hain jabki riya ghar pe bina kisi gunaah ke sazaa kaat rahi hai!
rathore- dekho mai...mai kuch nahi jaanta...mai tumhe kya bataoon?
suddenly the whole party went quiet and arjun and rathore turned to look for the reason. it was none other than riya. she wearing a beautiful blue gown.her hairs were done up in a beautiful hairstyle and she had done minimal make-up and still was glowing and looking stunning. every1's eyes were glued to her.
arjun automatically went to her and kissed her hand to welcome her. riya turned red.
arjun- riya tum...
suddenly samara comes from the back.
samara- omg!!! what a dress...kaha se lee???
arjun- samara tum hume akela chhod sakti ho thodi der?
samara- nahi, aap jaake mere bhai se baat karo, tab se toh apne puraane frnd ke saath chipke the, abb meri frnd se matt chipko! jaao.
rathore also meets riya but he still has a bad impression of her.
riya- hello sir.
rathore- hello riya...
rathore takes arjun with him.
rathore- dekho arjun, ye ladki vaise bhi theek nahi hai, iska character...
arjun- plzz rathore, mai uske khilaaf ek shabd bhi nahi sunoonga...!
rathore- lekin saari duniya ye jaanti hai ki...
arjun- duniya se mujhe kuch lena-dena nahi hai,i know that she is innocent and that's enough.
suddenly the party stopped by a sudden loud voice of someone.
voice- darling...you look so beautiful!!!!!
arjun turned around to see that it was none other than angad.
PRECAP:- arjun and angad fight. riya drunk and on the verge of speaking out the truth!
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that's it, i know you all might be excited to see riya drunk, and there is lot more in store for u all😉 plzz tell me how was it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the way Arjun is defending and wants to protect Riya😳
Hmmm your precap sounds very interesting😳, a drunk Riya🤗
lots of things can happen😆
Please continue😊
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol.. Can't believe that you actually forgot you were writing such a lovely Story.. 😆😆😉

So, he's started to trust her now??!! Nice.. I'm looking forward to the truth as well.. Let's see if Arjun can actually dig into the past and prove her innocence!! 😊😊

Well, Angad, phir se pitega bechara!! 😆

Drunk Riya, Whoa!! 😳

Thanks for the PM!

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