FF- A Lovely Hatred. Complete. - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼 continue sooon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
arjun supports riya👏
wish riya speaks out the truth.
cant bear anymore suspense
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update dear👏
loved the entire thing even though it was short hehe😆
i am curious to know the truth now🤓
why Riya keep saying that he won't believe even if she tells him the truth?
and that little moment of pari-rawte was so adorable😛
wanna know more about rawte's sister
and rawte kissed her hand☺️.. hayye soo sweet😳
omg the precap sounds crazy.. fight coming up yeahhh👏
do update soon dear... and thanks for the pm😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
ssuupppeeerrrbb...plz update soon/...lv the fanfics...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...how can you forget to update this FF??😲

i was waiting for this update for so long :(

anyways , Thank God you did it n its cute😳

Riya seems to be scared about the truth :( one can't do this much for his/her friends

is aishta and vijay her relatives or angad pressurized her to do so?

Riya is invited in the party...yayyy

"party went quite as riya entered " was my fav part 😳

please put the pic of that gown riya was wearing...would love to see that😳

how can rathore say that "ye larki theek nai hai" God ! he broke my heart...i thought that he will happy seeing her :(

i hate angad 😡

who invited him😡

n riya is drunk and on the verge of telling the truth...super cool😛

but in front of the whole crowd or when alone witth arjun ?😳

waiting waiting...update soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow rims what a update bt next time i wont take this small update .bada wala update hona chahiye .
Arjun cant hear a single word against her kuch toh choot raha hai dear.arjun wants to know abt riya's truth n this reminds me of a poem
'ab mere sirf mere liye hoke raho
ab mujhe apne dard do
meri banhon mein khud ko behne do
mudaton zakhm sahe apne
ab mere sirf mere hoke raho
husn he husn ho
ishq houn mein muhabt ho tum
tum bas meri amanat ho
boht jee liye dosron ke liye
ab mere liye sirf mere liye jeyo
tum hamesha rahe gamo ke ghere mein
ab toh seeye hove lab khol do
sirf mere liye mere liye
mein dekh nai sakta anso tumhari ankhon mein
bas ek baar muskura do mere liye
sirf mere liye...,
update soon n pm me
sorry 4r late n long comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update

So Arjun all ready to dig the past.

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Posted: 12 years ago
tum isko update krne k bare mei bhul gaii..hawww...mai bhi commnt krna bhul gai..but out of tym k wajah se 😭
riya ki prob kya hai...jab ab arjun uspe trust kr raha hai aur sach janne k lie detrmined hai toh bta de..
aisa kya secret hai jo woh believ ni kr paega 😲
kon involved hga riya k frnz ya angad!!!
woweee riya in blue gown!!mera fav colr 😊
and arjun kissed her hand too ☺️
update soon,jldi jo acha lge choos kro😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heelllooo rims...wen u gonna update this han.??
Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER-8
Arjun was furious, he had no idea what that idiot was doing there, he went straight to him and held his arms tightly.
arjun- what the hell are you doing here?😡
angad- 😆 arre yaar, tum hamesha gusse me hi rehte ho kya young man?
arjun- ye mazaak ka vakt nahi hai...
He yelled at the security guards. they said that angad got inside even when they tried their best to stop him.
angad- chill karo yaar...mai yaha bass...
arjun- you are drunk, bahar chalo...mai yaha tamasha nahi karna chahta...😡
Arjun drags him outiside.
In the party, shree and samara notices that all are tensed.
samara- oho...what happened guyzz?????? aap log kyu apna maza kharaab karr rahe ho? enjoy...common...
All of them get back to whatever they were doing.
shree- i think hume riya ke paas jaana chahiye...
samara- hmm...she is really sad and tensed...vo gadha angad😡
They go to riya
shree- hey gorgeous, kaisi ho? u look stunning dear...😃
Riya's eyes were filled with tears, but her sweet smile couldn't controll itself to come out looking at shree's innocent and cute beaming smile.
riya- 😊 thnku shree...😊
samara- aap yaha akele kya karr rahi ho? chalo, chalke dance karte hain...
riya- no...mai ...mai nai...
samara- plzz riya, u have to...chalo...maine kaha na...chalo...
Riya was forced to go to the dance floor and dance, shree took her hand and started dancing with her.

Outside, arjun was tackling with angad, but angad was too irritating to handle...
arjun- tum yaha kyu aaye ho?😡
angad- arre yaar, tumne hi toh bulaaya tha na mujhe?
arjun- maine?
angad- jab tumne riya ko bulaaya tha toh mujhe toh automatically invite karr hi liya tha na, mai uska pati hoon...
arjun(grabbing his collar)- chup chaap nikal jaao yaha se, vo abb tumhaari patni nahi hai...samjhe ya samjhaaon?
angad- aaj mai tujhe samjhaata hoon.
He tried to hit arjun, but in vain. it was not difficult for arjun to thrown him like a football, but he was in no mood to spoil the party.
Arjun grabbed his arms tightly and twisted it.
arjun- maine kaha na chale jaao...varna...
angad- varna kya karega tu???? haan bol???? sirf bolna hi aata hai kya???? bol na...bol...
arjun- dekho...mai yaha ladai nahi karna chahta, andar kaafi guests hain, they are waiting for me, tum jaate ho ya nahi?
angad- bhaad me jaaye tere guests and bhaad me jaaye teri behen ki party...
That was too much for arjun, he was very angry, he punched angad and started hitting him badly. angad fought back but arjun again overpowered him. finally angad was not in a condition to even stand properly. some security guards reached there and stopped arjun somehow, and took the beaten angad out...
arjun- ise kisi hospital me chhod dena...varna marr jayega...

Saying this, the went inside the party. he saw that riya was dancing with shree, his eyes were glued to riya. she was glowing and her blues dress was looking like a sea and she was the pearl...❤️
He was lost in his thoughts, when suddenly he felt someone shaking him, he found that it was samara...
arjun- uff... kya hua tumhe?😊
samara- uff??? arre uff toh mujhe bolna chahiye!! aap aaj itne jyaada hot kyu lag rahe hain???? haan???😉
arjun- tum bhi na samara...
samara- dekhiye, maine shree ko riya ke saath busy karr diya hai, abhi hi sahi mauka hai, bhaag chaliye mere saath😉
arjun- haan chalo...kaha chalna hai...
samara- arre vah...aap toh maan gaye? chaliye, dance floor pe hi chalte hain.
Arjun agreed with a smile and went to the dance floor with samara, he was dancing with her but looking only at riya, suddenly the partners changed and riya went to arjun's hands, she slipped a bit and arjun grabbed her. riya stared at him and arjun had a soft smile on his face but riya was feeling a little awkward. arjun pulled her up and slowly moved his hands around her waist and tightened his grip. riya was feeling very shy but she soon looked into his eyes and got lost in it. they were not dancing for the first time, but this time there was a different feeling...

The music became slow and the lights got dim, riya slowly rested her head on arjun's chest and arjun grabbed her in a hug, she looked up at arjun and moved her hands around his face, she suddenly realized that he had wounds.
riya-(worried) arjun...ah...ah...i mean, mr rawte, aapko chot aayi hai?
arjun- haan vo...bass...
riya- chaliye mai aapko...
arjun- nahi-nahi, tum ruko yahi mai aata hoo...ok?
riya- are u sure?
arjun- yes...
He smiled and took a key of one of the rooms and went there. riya was worried for him. she as not able to understand why she was feeling so worried...
Samara- kya hua? aap phir akele khadi ho? chalo...chalke kuch paglapanti karte hain...ok?
riya- but kya?
Samara pulled riya with her, they sat on a chair...
samara- accha, abb aap batao, aap kya logi? juice? cold drink?
riya- ah...kuch bhi...
samara- ok...mai abhi coldrink leke aati hoon...
She went to take some cold drinks but by mistake she brought two glasses of some strong alcoholic drink.
samara- ye raha ...
Riya smiled and took a sip, she felt that its taste was weird.
riya- but iska taste toh...
samara- arre ye new flavor hai, maine kal hi try kiya tha, pehle ajeeb laga but phir kamaal ka laga...try toh karo.
just when samara was abt to take the sip, she got a call frm shree and excused herself and went to shree.
Riya drank her glass and she felt so gud that she drank samara's drink also...
After few minutes, samara came back to find riya missing, she saw the two glasses empty, shree was also there with her.
shree- kaha gayi?
samara(smelling the glass)- omg shree😕 maine galti se riya ko alcohol pila di...!!!!!!!😕
shree- what????? OMG!!!!!! tumhe pata bhi hai tumne kya kiya??????
samara- pata hai! abhi cup raho, hume unhe dhoondhna hoga...

Arjun was putting medicine on his wounds when he heard a knock.the hotel room was a big and beautiful one. it took him few seconds to reach the door and he opened it to see riya. she was haivng a childish look on her face. she had a weird smile.
riya(drunk)- aap theek hain arjun...????😕😆
arjun- are u ok riya?
riya- 😆 ye toh mai aapse poochne aayi thi...!!!! aap mere sawaal ko english me translate kyu karr rahe hain?😆
arjun- riya...riya plzz come in...andar aao...
Arjun pulled her in.
arjun- abb dhyaan se suno, tumne party me kuch peeya hai?
riya- (falling on arjun)- hmmm...kuch...piya tha...
arjun(making her sit in the sofa)- its ok, sab theek ho jayega mai abhi tumhaare liye lemon juice ya kuch mangvaata hoon...ok?(he cups her face)
riya- (taking his hands and kissing it)- thnku arjun...u are sooo sweeettt!!!!!!!!!!!
arjun- ok...
As soon as arjun stood up, she held his hands tightly.
riya- plzz...abhi matt jaiye na...mujhe bohot saari baate karni hai aapse...
arjun- ok...ok...batao...
Arjun sat next to her. she kept her head on his shoulder. arjun gently moved his hands through her hairs.
arjun- bolo..mai sun raha hoon...
riya- mai na...pehle bohot khush rehti thi...but...jabse mere saath vo sab kuch hua hai na, tab se...tab se mai kabhi khush reh hi nahi paati...
arjun- kya hua that tumhaare saath?
riya- vahi...jiske kaaran aap bhi mujhse nafrat karte the pehle...
arjun- hmm...karta tha, but now i lo...
Arjun was shocked. 'what the hell was i going to say?' he thought.
riya- aapko pata hai, jab aap mere saath hote ho na, toh i feel like...like...abb mujhe koi kuch nahi bol sakta, abb mujhe koi dukh nahi de sakta...
Arjun smiled.
arjun- haan riya...mai tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga...leking tum mujhe bataati kyui nahi ho sach...
riya- 😆 sach???? mai toh aapko bata deti, lekin...vo...aapko takleef hogi...
arjun- nahi hogi, batao mujhe...
riya- nahi ...😆
Arjun moved away from her and folded her hands in anger...
riya-😆 aap toh bura maan gaye...arjun...look at me na...plzzz...
Riya and Arjun, both were quiet for a while, when suddenly riya started murmuring something.
riya- mere best frnds the sab koi...sab log...lekin...mujhe hamesha se hi 'vo' apni behen jaise pyaar karti thi...i liked being with her...but ek din, i got to know ki vo...(crys)...vo underworld se connection rakhti thi...she was a traitor...mujhe bohot gussa aaya pehle toh...but...but jab maine usse iss baare me baat ki, toh...toh...meri baat sunke usne apni galti maan lee, usne kaha ki usse galti ho gayi and abb vo aisa kabhi nahi karegi...but...tab tak der ho chuki thi, sab ko shak hone laga tha, aur mai nahi chahti thi ki usski zindagi barbaad ho toh maine...maine kuch bhi karke sab kuch apne upar le liya...😭😭
arjun(going close to her and keeping her head gently on her his shoulder)- toh tumne uske liye apni zindagi barbaad karr lee?
riya- kyuki uski zindagi zyaada important thi, uski usi vakt shaadi hui thi...
arjun- kaun thi vo?
Riya was almost collapsing now...she started getting unconscious...
riya- vo...vo...ruhi di...
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thats all guyzz...hope u all liked it...plzz leave ur comments...!😳






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