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fasiha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

hey first of all a very big sorrryyy

i couldnt comment on all the parts from 2-5 as i was little busy with college work.

but finally got time to comment.

all the parts were just awesome.

i just cant express in words how beautifully u have written.

cant wait for ur next part 6 fir ariya moments.

eagerly waiting .

do continue soon

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elle..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Aeww...so sweet...shree pulling samara close...hayye...cutttuu moment
Nd precap is superintrstin...update soon

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sneha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

kya baat!kya baat!kya baat!
falling in love with the charactrs 😊
shree-riya,arjun-riya,arjun-samara,samara-shree,samara-riya..all..
samara faints seeing arjun😃
loving it 😊
update soon 😊

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago

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scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

the precap's good! can't wait to read it! please update soon! already looking forward to the next update!

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Lot of things to mention :

Thx for long part

Samara part is gud feeling bad for her

Arjun scold Rathod for Samara 👏

Shree & Samara too gud.👏👏

Bhikari 😆

Arjun & Riya scene

Samara faints & Shree jelous. 😉

Nw waiting for nxt...😊

Thx 4 PM.

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

love the way you depicts the relations between each member...

Samara is such a funny girl, and perfect for Shree😳

N arjun getting more and more close to Riya😳... love it

Please update very soon

N ur crime plot is also very good, one doesnt know what to expect at all😆

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LuckYMAma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Riya dressed his wound..datz so sweet..
Samara z so cute..
Arjun wz lukng hot..!!!
Samara fainted lol...
Awsum part...
Hpe in nxt pt we vl get more ariya moments...
Thanx 4 pm..
Waitn 4 nxt pt..

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836559

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

hey guys, i really wanted to update next two parts now, but its too late and i am a little busy tomorrow, so i will update next two parts at a later time tomorrow. it will be a special update, picnic special, it will have 2 parts..! till then enjoy the promo!

(arjun riya sitting together on a lake side)

arjun(crying a bit)- kyu riya? tumhaare bhagwaan ne mere saath aisa kyu kiya?

(he puts his hands on hers)

arjun- tum kahogi na apne bhagwaan se ki sab kuch theek karr de, mujhe meri roshni vaapas lauta de? kahogi na?

riya- haan sir...mai kahungi, aur mujhe poora yakeen hai ki aapko aapka pyaar vaapas mil jayega!

(arjun and riya fighting with the killer, arjun holding riya in his arms and firing at the killer...)

(after finding the killer and getting him arrested, the ETF team members are lost in the forest (not in each other😆). arjun with riya, samara with shree and rathore with chotu(lol))

Edited by rimss19 - 12 years ago