Ariya SS: Der Lagi Lekin.. Chap 4- LAST (05/11)

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

*Edited*

I had missed this story...i wonder how...

read the entire ss in one shot...what can i say?? it was lovely...

both their pasts entwining in the most unique way...leading to their realization...

brilliant indeed...

the visual of the waterfall and the entire scene was just playing in my mind as i read it..

WOW...it was beautiful!!

as i have said before...u definitely are a brilliant writer...best at romance...love it yaaar!!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Awesum di ..👍🏼

i m again in ariya land n m Arjunating

Me Blushing..thinking about Ariya ...☺️

After a long tym Read UR story 👏

n D last line dat u r soon gonna write Adhuri si dua ...OMG i m dead

i was deperately waiting for t...(i m a Greedy Ariya pankha)😆

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Finally you updated the most awaited part of your ss ...

Oh no it ended so soon ... :(

I just loved this ss and it is one of my fav.

It was just magical ...

Love every single line of yours Arjun and riya's emotions were portrayed so beautifully I swear while reading I actually thought that everything is happening right in front of my eyes ...

You rock !!!!

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: tani23
Awesum di ..👍🏼

i m again in ariya land n m Arjunating

Me Blushing..thinking about Ariya ...☺️

After a long tym Read UR story 👏

n D last line dat u r soon gonna write Adhuri si dua ...OMG i m dead

i was deperately waiting for t...(i m a Greedy Ariya pankha)😆

Lol!! i'm glad I could drop you back into Ariyaland! That's where we all belong, don't we??!! 😉😉😆

Oh and Adhoori Si Dua! Yupp, just took some time off that one; needed to sort it out in my head.. Will start drafting it tomorrow..

I know, I'm not supposed to keep favorites, yet, ASD is my fav baby!! 😉😉

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Finally you updated the most awaited part of your ss ...
Oh no it ended so soon ... :(
I just loved this ss and it is one of my fav.
It was just magical ...
Love every single line of yours Arjun and riya's emotions were portrayed so beautifully I swear while reading I actually thought that everything is happening right in front of my eyes ...
You rock !!!!

Hey.. Thanks dear!

Yea, it ended! Well it was supposed to be a short one! But I hope I've done justice to the story! 😊

I'm glad you liked it.. 😊

Ariya is what made it magical!!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

🥳Res,

Shall be back in little while, need to go home and put my feet up and relax to read this.

*Edited*

Avantika another award winning end to a wonderful Ariya story, oh how I wish Riya was still around, the stories that could be made out of those two would be mindblowing.

Needless to say I loved the update, it was a wonderful treat after a long day of work. Thanks so much for giving it a fantastic ending.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by sbp1971 - 12 years ago

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

superb end..loved it so much..thanks for pm di..waiting for your another ss update.

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
*Edited*

I had missed this story...i wonder how...
read the entire ss in one shot...what can i say?? it was lovely...
both their pasts entwining in the most unique way...leading to their realization...
brilliant indeed...
the visual of the waterfall and the entire scene was just playing in my mind as i read it..
WOW...it was beautiful!!
as i have said before...u definitely are a brilliant writer...best at romance...love it yaaar!!

Hey! Thanks sweets!

You'd missed this one?! Chalo koi nahi, ab toh padh li na.. 😃😃

Yupp, I wanted to include something for them to share their pain; coz most of my works have had only Arjun suffering. Hence I thought of adding in a bit of Riya's past as well; for Arjun to realise that she's been through the same turmoil.. And it was this very shared pain, that united them!

Oh well, for the waterfall bit, I came across this picture clicked by one of my friends, and attempted a description! 😉😆😆

You're a great writer, yourself dear.. I'm anxiously waiting for you to update yours! 😃😃

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Awesome... vl read the whole SS again to get the complete feel... u r a wonderful writer evry emotions feelings cn really be felt... great ending... loved this SS...