Ariya SS: Der Lagi Lekin.. Chap 4- LAST (05/11)

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sangi1108doon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

👏lovely ending...!!!!!!!!!❤️ Ariya will always b a sweet memory...😊

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AnnieARS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Another beautiful piece of writing!!

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ramishafariha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

truly loved it...the ending was so very sweet just like a fairy tale ending...happily ever after

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Dear Avantika,

i do not know how I missed your Chapter 4, but I did, and I have chanced upon it only now. I am glad I did.

Well. young lady, you have done it in style! Wrapped up a neat little love story with perfect control, never letting any one facet slip into excess, and definitely not excessive sentimentality, and even better, not too much of 'hot' stuff, which I personally feel detracts from the delicacy of the romance.

The result is a delightfully paced narrative, with a very convincing happy ending, which flows smoothly from the earlier parts. It must have left your readers feeling warm and fuzzy inside, which is what all writers of romantic fiction aim for, and not many achieve. Very nicely done, my dear. Congratulations!

Shyamala B. Cowsik

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl
Hey pankhas, here's the next Chapter of DLL..

P.S. : Mush alert** 😉😆

A 🤗 to everyone who's read, liked and commented on this one.. As always, really appreciate your reviews.. Thank you for following Der Lagi Lekin..

Chapter 4

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Dear Avantika,

i do not know how I missed your Chapter 4, but I did, and I have chanced upon it only now. I am glad I did.

Well. young lady, you have done it in style! Wrapped up a neat little love story with perfect control, never letting any one facet slip into excess, and definitely not excessive sentimentality, and even better, not too much of 'hot' stuff, which I personally feel detracts from the delicacy of the romance.

The result is a delightfully paced narrative, with a very convincing happy ending, which flows smoothly from the earlier parts. It must have left your readers feeling warm and fuzzy inside, which is what all writers of romantic fiction aim for, and not many achieve. Very nicely done, my dear. Congratulations!

Shyamala B. Cowsik

Hello, Firstly, here's wishing you a Happy Diwali.. I know I'm late!!

Oh and well, thank you soo much for those words of appreciation.. I'm overwhelmed.. I'm glad I could achieve what I'd been aiming for..

Thanks once again.. 😊

Avantika..

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sneha

@Sneha113

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

firstly very sad that it ended!!!

i loved the way you have beautifully portayed the emotions of both..!!

arjun finally exposed his vunerable side towards riya..

poor soul...saw roshni killed in such a brutal manner

riya too was brought back to her painful past..and could relate arjun's situation with her..

tears brimmed her eyes 😔
and a series of lovely romantic moments ☺️

finally riya persuaded her to start a new life and made him understand the pain hez giving to his loved ones..

arjun proposed her finally!!! ☺️and hot and passionate moments between them 😳

thanx for the pm

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago