Ariya SS: Der Lagi Lekin.. Chap 4- LAST (05/11) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

I completed the entire fic in one go when i recieved your PM.😆 Well, Thanx for the PM😊.
Now, coming to the fic i dun really need to tell you what a fatanstic writter you r .. Seriously, now Ariya are my favourite too just coz of your Fics.. 😆. You have the great ability to potrait the unspoken feelings, Pain, agony , love , anger , frustration ... through words😊.

I loved all the chapters of this fic👏. I started with the first chapter when i got the Pm. But , i could nt restrain myself from reading further.This shows you r great when comes to writting...😊 . Riya's welled up emotions for her Baba's death😭 and den Arjun's pain and agony for Roshini😭. Both, of them in excruciating pain for the lose of there loved ones😭, But this pain somehow bought them close😳, Sometimes its good to have some pain for beter outcomes.😛😉. I hate sikander , how can someone kill someone so brutely😡. Awww!!! Arjun he must have beeen in so much pain😭 . But, in a positive aspect if this incident would nt have happened he would nt have been close to Riya😳 Again, jo hota hai ache k liye hota hai.. 😆.

Emmm🤔 basically the fic was superb, fantastic,outstanding, out of the world...

Great work.!!!👏
keep it up!!!👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Finally u updated... Loved it dear... It was fabulous... Take a bow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Aww such a beautiful ending
Love how u potrayed their emotions
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
WOW!!! Loved it!!!!
Awesome update!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
That was amazing! Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Avantika di it was just awesome.loved each n every line of the story n cherry on the cake u r going to update adhoori si dua wow am so happy.keep writing for ariya greedy people
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏 beautiful yaar!
yes i know the song is awesome and you did wonders with it!!!!
solid story and a wonderful end!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
awww it waz stupendo fantabulous fantastic juz loved it soo much no wrds

thnx for d pm :) huggiee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear... totally loved it..;.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey svty...hi:)
i never read this ss...so now i would reading frm first chapter:)
as i read all four parts...i'll comment :)
thnx 4 pm:)🤗

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