Ariya SS: Der Lagi Lekin.. Chap 4- LAST (05/11)

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR
wow...nice real nice work yaar...
loved it...update soon and pm me!!!!!!!!!

Hey.. thanks.. i'm glad you liked it.. u shud give the others a read as well, if u like.. the index's on my 1st pg.. Hope u like the rest..

P.S.. I looovee your dp.. Rahul and Muskaan.. I loved them!! They were my favs in DMG.. I remember crying buckets when Rahul had left! You brought back all those memories.. 😊

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sneha

@Sneha113

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

i just love your writing 😊
so beautifully written 😊..i too love emotional moments 😊
my poor baby riya is suffering so much 😭..
thank god arjun is there to care her in every moment of her pain }
😊

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

wow avantika another awesome update ...👏

the way arjun was concerned about riya n her wound...that was really touching...❤️ n riya didn't wanted him to go alone ...how sweet...😳

they r lost in a jungle...😆 im loving it...😉

the flashbacks...heart-wrenching...😭 arjun was unable to save his roshni...n the way that poor soul was murdered...ur right sikander killed 2 people that day...

riya's concern for arjun was really heart-warming...❤️ she wanted him to know that she never pitied him ...she wanted to heal him...take his pain away...👏 beautifully described...😳

my weakness is this one, although im a die-hard romantic n love all the lovey-dovey moments, but the best moments in love for me r when two people talk their heart out to each other...just pure feelings n emotions n a convo straight from the heart...👍🏼

lovely update n hope ur back soon as i can't wait for the next chap that long...😆

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simple_dimple93

@simple_dimple93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

loved it, plz pm me when u update

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Aww Roshni's Death Was So Painful Made Me Emotional
Poor Arjun So Much Pain
Aww Ariya Moment Was Jus Awesome Their Hug And How
Arjun Remembered About Riya's Wound Aww
2 Weeks??? Ill Try To Wait That Long
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thanksz x

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Another wonderful update, I won't be able to wait so long but I am sure the wait will be worth it. Take your time with the update.

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

nice! loved the way arjun is actually looking after riya! so nice of him! can't wait to read more! please update soon! eager to read the next update already!

Edited by arul01 - 12 years ago