OS: Don't Move (Fiza28)

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

beautiful , please continue dont stop just at that kiss😉

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poojdc87

@poojdc87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

So cute!!!!! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nyc .. do continue...

plz PM me..

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow that was lovely...sweet,cute n adorable...:) ariya cting as hubby,wife...awww...

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princess14

@princess14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

that was amazing!!! loved it!

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Faisa

@Faayey

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awwwh that was really cutee...

Arjun and Riya make the perfect couple.. Keep writing more😉

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautiful OS.

I love that underlying tension so visible between the two.

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

continue...nice ending..waiting for the next part

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Ritu

@.Ritu.J

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hey!

It was adorable..loved it :-)

Please do write more OS's!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Gr8 job
I really loved it
Fiza's idea was gr8
And the way you potrayed it was awesome

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