FF... RAABTA UPDATED oct. 8 ch6.b.pg18 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushiroxx

do pm me the next update..:)



thanks mushi for liking... and surely i'll pm u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
wow yaar it is so beautiful
i wish ki riya ka breakup ho jaye
taki woh iss kahani se bahar ho jaye
kunki ye kahani to sifr riya aur arjun ki hai
hai na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
looking good
cont asap and pm me as u update

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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
ohh... soo sweet FF... do continue ... love it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Interesting. Please do continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Interesting plz pm me further parts :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys its me fiza i wrote ch2 megha will update ch 3 thank u all for the comeents it means alot to both of us now here is the chapter do comment and press like

Riya: thanks shree I needed that hug I've been just so stressed you know na

Shree: come on Ri hum dost hai I've know you since college chill oh ri um there is some ice cream on your nose

( she takes her hand towards her nose )Ri: huh nahi tho where shree

Shree: here ( and he takes his ice cream n smears it on her nose and all on her face )

Riya :Shree tum you better run I swear teri tho ( she chases shree around with her ice cream )

Chotu suddenly sees them shree is hiding behind chotu

Riya: chotu move shree just wait ill teach you ( riya is running around the ETF suv with shree when suddenly riya is about get shree she throws her ice cream at him when he ducks and the ice cream hits arjun

Chotu: oye woh tho gaye kaam se

Riya: omg im so sorry sir woh galati se hogeya I didn't mean to

Arjun: galati aur tum riya always why not am not surprised kaam pe concentrate karo bachpana choro tum ek ETF officer ho

Rathore: Raute it was a accident and they are on break cool it

Riya : im sorry sir

Arjun: kitne baar sorry riya im sick hearing it ( he leaves from there Rathore follows him)

Rathore: rako tum Riya se kya problem you stop your rudeness with her

Arjun: rathore tum us ko kyun defend kar re ho pata nahi kaise ETF main aye hai

Rathore: she is just as capable as all of us and you know exactly why im defending her Raute

Arjun : really Rathore and what is that I have no clue

Rathore: Raute we both know she reminds you and me of Roshni

Arjun: Rathore bas iss sab main Roshni ko nahi keencho is main riya roshni kabhi bhi nahi bana sak thi

Rathore: Arjun I have every right to bring her into this if she was your wife lets not forget she was my sister ' meri choti bhen thi aur riya ki har baat reminds me of my chutki and I won't tolerate you treating riya this way 'waise be stay away from riya if you cant be nice its better that way

Arjun: dehko rathore she was my wife I loved roshni and I will gladly stay away from her but what do you mean its better jo bol na hai bol

Rathore: don't make me open my mouth 'jaane do

Arjun: bolo agar himat hai tho

Rathore: theek hai tho suno your responsible for what happened to roshani because of your carelessness sikandar ne

Arjun: bas karo

Arjun grabs rathores collar

Suddenly they hear a commotion and rathore pushes him away

Riya: tanmay please leave we will talk later jaao main duty pe hoon

Tanmay: no you keep ignoring my calls we need to talk now

Arjun: yeh kya drama chal rah hai yahaan?

Rathore looks at Raute

Rathore: riya sab theek hai na?

Riya: ji sir

Riya: tanmay tum na please jaao na

Shree: yaar come on jaane do I promise when she is done she will meet you ab jaao

Tanmay leaves riya walks away all upset shree runs after her

Shree: Ri suno wait

Rathore and arjun notice shree and riya from far

Shree whipes her tears and whispers something to her to make her smile

Arjun gets annoyed and rathore notices arjuns body language

Chotu comes running in sir the forest officials have come so we can investgate

Rathore: ok chotu gather the others and lets go

note: and megha dear your welcome

Edited by Fiza28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
HATS OFF fiza...thanks again for such a beautiful update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow
tht amazing superb plz guys pm me
whenever u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Nice story. Liked it. Jealous arjun...interesting. Please cont soon. And please add me in ur pm list.

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