Alternate MaAn Universe - OS (new scene pg 27) - Page 7

Rupsii chocolate fudge romance 🤩🤩🤩 loved it 🤗🤗😘😘

Uff uff uff hi hogaya😳

MaAn romance☺️

This is beautiful❤

Ufffff romance. Chocolate fudge and Anuj. Killerrrrrrrr girl 💖💖💖💖💖🔥🔥 waiting for the next part and more besharmiiii🔥🔥

So sorry for not replying individually.. been a busy week and then i got lost in AK/GK yeh banda mujhe nikaama bana diya🤣

Thanks a lot for taking time to read my work.. 🤗🤗❤💖💜

Had written another scene last week, but its still incomplete, so just a wrote a short one to divert my mind from today's crap.. please bear the typos.. hope you like it..

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Probable scene #4

This starts with Anu rushing out of the shop.

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Overwhelmed by his care and love, Anu stormed out of the shop.

Anuj though confused, followed her, only to find her sobbing silently, taking support from the shop veranda railing. Walking up to her, her back to him, he hesitated for a moment, engulfed her in his embrace.

With the support she needed the most from, Anu calmed down a bit.
"I am sorry, I didn't mean to ruin your day by crying..
But even when I try, my past memories crop up and they ruin our special moments"... she sobbed again.

He put a finger on her lips, he tightens his hold with the other hand,

"its okay Anu, main jaanta hu itne saalo ke zakhm asani nahi bhula sakti, lekin main yeh bhi jaanta hu, jab hum saath hain toh yeh zakhm tiknewale nahi.."

Amazed at his patience and love for her, she turned around, keeping her hands on his chest..

"main sach mein bahot khushkismat hu, har ladki."..

before she starts.. he again puts a finger on her lips..

"Kuch maangu tumse?"

"Mera sab kuch aapka. Kya chahiye?"

Sheepishly, he whispers against her ear, "I am going to be a bit selfish today, jab hum dono akele ho toh beech mein kisi ki baat nahi karogi, I know tum har orat ke liye achha sochti ho, but please keep the talks when we are with family."

When she gets wide-eyed, he continues, "please please mana matt karna.. humne pehle hi 26 saal ek dusre ke bagair kaate hain, I don't want to waste even one second with someone else in between us.

Looking at her face intensely, "Filhal desh ki ISS ladki ko pamper karna chahta hu, zindagi bhar. Manzoor?"

She pretends of being angry but the next moment, takes her hands resting on his chest around to embrace him everso lovingly and tightly.. nuzzling against his chest, Anu whispers,

"koshish zaroor karungi Kapadia ji."

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Bas koshish hi karle. Kapadia ji asked her on behalf of whole fandom. Thank u AK

Wowiee if only they had shown this instead of the women empowerment speech... that ruined the scene too much for me... I am going to pretend that after she left the shop this happens and manifest zero bhashan Dear writers if u r lurking here please edit the episode and add this pleeeejjjj... something intimate should be there na😆

I always wanted them to show Anu's emotional trauma and healing but do they really have to have such big empowerment dialogues after each and every scene? His actions should be more than explanatory

The show has awesome actors with awesome chemistry.... but man they have the worst editors rn... they need to hire the editors capturing their reels

This would been appropriate reaction from both of them...but no they had go and insert baashan everywhere 🤦

So nicely written rupsii❤️

Her generalising everything is just so annoying😳 you made anuj stop her🤗🤗🤣

Proud of mr. kapadia.. sahi kiya usne🤣😌❤ aise hee chup karna chahiye tha anu ko😉

Originally posted by: Koms9

Bas koshish hi karle. Kapadia ji asked her on behalf of whole fandom. Thank u AK

Next Anuj will give dhamki, if you start desh ki orat, i will kiss you then and there, wherever we are standing, whoever is with us.. soch ley 🤣