Alternate MaAn Universe - OS (new scene pg 27)

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Heyya all,

Writing a probable scene that would make a little sense in this idiotic tamaShah the makers are shoving down our throats.

Hope you like it. Shall add the scenes if possible, for later idiotic storylines, because i trust them makers to mess with it 😆

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Anu's mobile rang continuously. It was GK.


"Kya hua kaka?"


"Beta sorry tumhe disturb kar raha hu, yeh Mukku tumhare rented flat mein chali gayi hain, pata nahi dono bhai behen mein kya baat hui. Ho sake toh tum jaogi uske paas?" GK requested.


"Aap chinta nahi kariye, main abhi jakar dekhti hu." Saying thus she asks Samar to drop her at her home.


As she opened the door, Mukku ran to hug her, "I was thinking of calling you and you came without me even asking you.. thats the connection baby"


"Kya hua Mukkudi", Anu asked pampering her.


"Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi, lori sunao na"


Anu - "Samar, tu bhi ruk ja, main iske paas hu. Bapuji ko bata dena hum log yaha hain, nahi toh woh chinta karenge."



She takes Mukku's hand and goes in the bedroom. Unaware of the thumbs up signal Samar and Mukku exchanged.


When Mukku had slept, Anu pondered over today's happenings.


What an eventful day it was.


She knew there would be hindrances for her upcoming marriage, but had not contemplated a literal war between Mr Shah team and her loved ones with her being in between.


As for her Anuj, he had been so understanding as always, she knew he was worried for her. But couldn't go against Bapuji's wish to stay at Shah house until the wedding.


She couldn't sleep so decided to video call Anuj, she knew he would be awake too.


Both asked each other if they were okay. She asked what happened between him n Mukku that she ran away ?


He said we argued over a trivial issue about the wedding expense, thats it. Good thing that she went to Anu home than elsewhere. "Tum tension matt lo, okay?"


She also assured him that she was there for Mukku and bid him goodnight.


It was after seeing him, her nerves had calmed down. "Kanhaji, dhyaan raakhjo" she prayed.


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She woke up a little late than usual. Mukku must be in the living room she thought.


She was about to open the door when she heard voices of Gk, Samar, Mukku and Anuj.


It was their plan to get her out of Shah house. She was flabbergasted that Anuj was a part of this.


Furious, she opened the door, where Mukku and Samar were doing a high five at the success of their plan, while Anuj n GK tried to warn them about her arrival.


Anu suppressed her anger, "aise kaun karta hain? Bandh karo aise bachkani harkat"


Samar - "mummy aap naraz matt ho, waha kuch bhi ho, sab ka ghussa aap apr hi nikalta hain, aapki shaadi hone wali hain, aise happy occasion pe itna stress achha nahi, mujhe achha nahi lagta jab koi aapko bewajah taane mare, isliye maine hi Inn sab se help mangi.

I know aap bapuji ke khilaaf nahi jayengi"


Anu - "lekin Samar, Bapuji?? "


GK interrupts - " dekh Anu, ab tum humari ho, ho na?"


When she nods a yes, he continues, "tere Bapuji ko maine samjhana chaha par woh nahi maan raha."


"Uski zidd ke karan, tumhe har roz kitne taane sunne padenge, sunne padd rahe hain, yeh samjhta hi nahi"

Yeh jo shadi se pehle wala samay hota hain, usko enjoy karna chahiye, naa ke itna stress.

Anuj bhi pareshan tha puri raat. Kya tum chahogi usse takleef ho?"


Anu nodded a negative - "Aap sahi keh rahe hain kaka, jana toh main bhi nahi chahti, par Bapuji ko mana kaise karu?"


"Mana karne kisne kaha beta? Jis din shaadi hain, uss din Shah house chale jana yaha se tayyar hoke, aur Hasmukh waha se teri bidaai kar dega, simple"


"Ab maan jaao beta, inn buddhi haddiyo mein taqat nahi rahi sabko sambhalne ki" GK pretends to act tired.


Mukku - "maan jao na bhabhi,"

Samar - "maan jao na mummy",


They all start shouting, maan jaao please please please..


Anu is about to say okay when,


Mukku - "please maan jaao mummy"

Samar - "please maan jaao bhabhi"


Everyone looks at each other in shock.


They realise the mix up and burst out laughing.


Anu and Anuj exchange looks, Mukku barges in between, "apna romance thode din control kar lo, we have a lot to do" , and takes Anu with her, leaving a smiling Anuj behind.


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Next probable scene index :


Scene #2 - page 4

Scene #3 - page 8

Scene #4 - page 10

Scene #5 - page 12

Scene #6 - page 18

Scene #7 - page 22

Scene #8 - page 24

Scene #9 - page 27


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Forgive the typos and mistakes please

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kaash sach mae aisa kuch hojaye 😭..and ending was the cutest 😆
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Hehe amazing one... yess i dont want her to go to shah house😩😭

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Weird hain I-F, wont let me add tags anymore

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Yeh sab humare universe mein ho hota hai kaash unki universe mein bhi hota...🥲🥲🥲

Loved your writing...❤

Love your dp btw...friends ❤

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Originally posted by: Meghuzz

Yeh sab humare universe mein ho hota hai kaash unki universe mein bhi hota...🥲🥲🥲

Loved your writing...❤

Love your dp btw...friends ❤


Bold : Dil behlane ko Ghalib yeb khayal achha hain 😛 kya kare ab unki universe mein nahi ho raha toh apna alag universe bana ley 🤪


Thanks so much . i heart the show FRIENDS ☺️

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A part of hopeful me is waiting for someone to initiate something like this on the show. But well humare adhoore sapne. Please write more such mann ko khush karne wale OS 💜💜

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Originally posted by: ektag06

A part of hopeful me is waiting for someone to initiate something like this on the show. But well humare adhoore sapne. Please write more such mann ko khush karne wale OS 💜💜


Thank you for liking it🤗 Had to write it today. such inconsistent writing makes me miss MaAn scenes. I mean candy floss romance na dikhao but kuch toh sense ho..thankfully i can write here and imagine a better scenario.

And i am sure the makers will give us a lot of oppurtunities to write alternate fics💜💜

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Ah I wish anuj and GK did something like this in the show

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Originally posted by: rupsii


Bold : Dil behlane ko Ghalib yeb khayal achha hain 😛 kya kare ab unki universe mein nahi ho raha toh apna alag universe bana ley 🤪


Thanks so much . i heart the show FRIENDS ☺️

I love friends too..❤

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