Alternate MaAn Universe - OS (new scene pg 27) - Page 13

Originally posted by: rupsii

Anupama ki sangat ka asar 🤣 jokes apart.. i feel my writing is just okayish.. and no..not fishing at all.. i have read such beautiful writeups here.. just mindblowing

Dude are you serious... your writings are so beautiful😘😘...I love them❤️❤️... don't ever underestimate yourself...I am sure everyone here would agree with me....

To to able to put your thoughts in such beautiful words in itself is a special talent man...🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Peppss

Dude are you serious... your writings are so beautiful😘😘...I love them❤️❤️... don't ever underestimate yourself...I am sure everyone here would agree with me....

To to able to put your thoughts in such beautiful words in itself is a special talent man...🤗🤗

Bro... I MaAn you ❤🧡💙💜 ☺️

you are too generous.. thank you so much🤗🤗

Originally posted by: rupsii

Bro... I MaAn you ❤🧡💙💜 ☺️

you are too generous.. thank you so much🤗🤗

I Maan you too bro🤗🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: rupsii

Thank youuu ❤💖💜🤗 you speak marathi?

Next part hopefully more besharmi.. you and arthi ka demand ☺️

Aww so sweet of u❤️

Such a lovely writer 🤗

Originally posted by: EmeraldStar

Aww so sweet of u❤️

Such a lovely writer 🤗

🤗🤗 thank youuuu 💜❤

Probable scene #6

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Scene starts with Anu talking with herself. Didn't ponder over after the handkiss moments.. makers ki adat lag gayi .. abruptly jumped to other scene 😆

Ps. Long dialogues.. once again I blame it on Anu.. sangat ka asar you see 🤪🤣

Typos and galtiya maaf pliij

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All through her blabbering to self, Anu sensed her Anuj was nearby, and he was. Worried for her.

Crossing the distance between them, both ask each other, "aap thik hain/tum thik ho?"

Both nod simultaneously.. when she looks at him, he opens his arms. Wincing in the emotional trauma she had just faced, she embraces him.

A few moments later, "Ab thik hu" she said against his chest.

"Main bhi..."

Drawing strength from the other, the soulmates calmed down after what seemed like an eternity.

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Scene cut - (after the hand kiss)

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Anuj waited at the corner of the SH lane when Anu started going inside. He was still very angry with Vanraj and did not trust himself to act normally in SH.

So he waited for Anu to reach the house, at the lane outside. Before entering the gate, Anu made a face for having to go in there.

She muttered to self, "pata nahi itne saal maine iss ghar ko apna kaise liya, roz roz taane, roz roz klesh."

Looking up, "Kanhaji, aapne mujhe himmat di itna saal, uske liye thenkyou. Nahi.. shayad yeh Anuj ka pyaar tha jo aapka aashirwaad banke mujhe himmat deta raha.

Aaj pehli baar mujhe iss ghar mein jaane ka mann nahi kar raha.. shayad yeh bhi mere Anuj ka pyaar hi hain, jo mujhe sahi aur galat ki pehchaan kara raha hain..

thenk you Kanhaji, dhyaan raakhjo ha".

Seeing her loitering near the gate, he called her, "kya hua, tum ab tak andar kyu nahi gayi? Sab thik hain na?"

"Iss ghar mein kuch bhi thiik ho sakta hain Anuuj? she trailed off in anger. "khair.. bas kuch din aur.."

Suddenly she realised how did he know she was at the gate and asked him so.

He says, "right side mudke dekho," she looks at him leaning over a wall, waving and gazing at her.

She gestures "huh? ab tak yahi hain?"

He says, "aadat se majboor mohtarma.." sighs.. "bas kuch din aur.. phir toh main tumhe apni nazro se ek pal ke liye duur naa jaane du.."

She takes a deep breath and asks him to go back home and she starts going inside.

He says, "jab tak tum apne room mein nahi jaati, tab tak phone on hi rehne do please"

"I promise I will go once I know you are in your room."

She knew he was worried for her. The usual mudslinging on her her character will start again.. and she was right.

The moment she put one foot inside the door,

Baa reverberrated.. "tu aur tera woh Kapadia, humari ijjat utarke hi rahoge."

Anu retorts, "Baa andar toh aane dijiye shaanti se."

She forgot her phone call was on with Anuj.

He winced at the shouts and the taunts he heard Baa was showering upon his Anu. How did Anu face this abuse all this years. Now she was not even their DIL. Still she never flinches from doing her nonexistant duties. He clenched his fist when he heard both baa and Vanraj talking crap about Anu's character.

Baa - "besharmi ki bhi hadh hoti hain"

Vanraj - "aur kya dekhna baaki reh gaya ab.."

Anuj chuckled when he heard Anu cut in and repeated his words, "meri besharmi toh abhi aapne dekhi hi kaha hain baa, dikhau?"

"Par chahe jitni bhi besharam ho jau, aap jitni toh kabhi nahi ho sakti Mr Shah."

They continue slandering her one by one.

Though Anu was retorting back to each of them, Anuj could not take it anymore, so he cut the call. In long strides he reached SH.

The room divided with MaAn supporters on one side and the trio on the other side, with Anu standing in between. He winced seeing her hurt face.

Vanraj starts to come near him, Anuj just points his finger towards him in a stern no. Don't even dare.

Without a word, he went straight ahead near Bapuji, folding his hands,

"Main aaj ek bete hone ka haque mangna chahta hu bapuji.

Maaf kijiye, aapko aur Anu, rather sabko shayad adat ho gayi hain inke itne taane sunne ki, lekin mujhse nahi hoga.

Anu shayad kabhi bhi aaps ena kahe, lekin kya aap nahi dekh rahe yeh log uske charitra par itne nishan laga rahr hain. Agar woh aapki beti hain toh aapne samajhna chahiye ke iss ghar mein Anu ko kabhi sukh naa mila hain aur naa hi kabhi milega...

Aaj tak hum sab aapka lihaaz kar rahe hain, par ab main Anu ke khilaaf ek shabd nahi sunn sakta, bas...ab aur NAHI.

Aapse haath jodke vinti karta hu, aaj shaam sagaai hote hi aap Anu ki vidayi kijiye. Please.. Aapko iss bete ki kasam."

Bapuji seems to be shocked and gets lost in thought over what Anuj said.

Anu, flabbergast with his outburst and his worry for her, slowly goes near him, "Anuuj!! Main haar gayi",

(Referring to their convo earlier in the day when he had said, "toh haar jao na..")

They share their usual eyelock..

"Ek aur baat kehni thi.."

When he raises his eyebrow in a question,

"I ..love ..you....Anuuj...."

And she embraces him in front of all..

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Uff Ruppssssss bold bold Anu. 😍😍🥹🥹

Originally posted by: ektag06

Uff Ruppssssss bold bold Anu. 😍😍🥹🥹

This ones for you and Arthi. Uss din apan baat kar rahe the na.. she should hug him infront of shahs ..

Thanks babe🤗❤️ i maan you☺️

Ahhhhh. Logic. Sense. Boldness.

In short, things never seen in the show! 😆

Love this version of MaAn ❤️

Originally posted by: Fighter03

Ahhhhh. Logic. Sense. Boldness.

In short, things never seen in the show! 😆

Love this version of MaAn ❤️

Thats why we have it here Sam.. jo kabhi on screen nahi dikhega 😆

Thank you for liking g 🤗💜