Alternate MaAn Universe - OS (new scene pg 27) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Peppss

You tagged me twice, now I feel special 🤗🤗🤗🤣🤣🤣😘😘😘

A date, promise ring , heart to heart to convo,all in one🤩🤩🤩🤩and my favorite part is Anu not wanting to go back 😍😍😍 this os just ticked all box in my wish list...

Loved it dear❤️🤗

Of course you are special.. thanks so much for reading and giving your feedback.. 🤗💜❤💖

My fav part too..anu not wanting to go ☺️

Originally posted by: EmeraldStar

Wah! Awesome yaar

Their conversation beautifully penned

I want to see him in beshrami avatar😆

Loved it ❤️🤗

Sooo glad you liked it ❤💖💜🤗.. next part thodi aur besharmi.. on popular demand 😆

Originally posted by: arya212002

Such beautiful conversations dear … such a simple scene yet so endearing… the ring 💍 and Anu not wanting to go back❤️❤️❤️❤️… superb yaar… dil khush kar diya.

Don’t know why writers can’t think of something like this and execute it… this one is so in maryada zone yet meaningful n beautiful 😍😍

Waiting for besharam KapadiaJi 😉☺️

❤❤❤❤❤❤ aryu.. thus is what we wish na.. simple things.. they dont have to do high octane drama every 15 mins..

Thanks for your feedback babe.. so happy you liked it

🤗❤💜💖

Will need to work on the besharmi part harder.. 😆☺️lets see

Originally posted by: Kp26

Gudgudiii❤❤❤ hehehe beautiful one.. yes a friend before a partner is definitely should be there!❤👏🏻

Thank you so much 🤗🤗

Life is better when the husband is a friend too.. nahi? 💜❤💖

Originally posted by: Kitty584

Haayeeeeeee.. uff ufff ufff×1000000000.. this was so amazing and loved Mr. and Mrs. Besharam.. ❤️

Thanks for the tag!

Thank so much for reading and liking it.. so glad ❤💖💜🤗

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Can we get more of Mr and Mrs Besharam pleeej

Bas sabko besharmi chahiye 🤣😆including me ☺️🤪..but its so hard writing intimate scenes.. you must write some ya.. its you forte ❤️

Thanks so much babe 🤗❤💖💜

Originally posted by: tanu90

Hi Rupsii!

Read the first OS and loved it! ❤️Bapuji ki guilt trip ke chakkar me toxic shah house me phasi huyi hai Anu. What an amazing idea to move her out of that shithole! 👍🏼the mix up at the end was cute!

I have a request. Please update the page numbers on the first page as and when you write the one shots. It helps to find them.

Keep writing. And do tag me whenever you write next.

Love,

Noorie

Heyya Noorie, happy happy to know you liked it. 🤗🤗have read your os too. You are mindblowing girl!. ❤💖💜

Thanks for reminding me about an index. Shall keep adding as I write next part. Pakka tag karungi next time.. thanks again

Originally posted by: SAMEERA008

Again nyccc scene dear ....welldone plz continue

Thank you soo much ❤💖💜🤗

Originally posted by: ektag06

Rupsssiiiiii💚💖

Yeh date best hoti 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

Thank youuu ❤💖💜🤗 you speak marathi?

Next part hopefully more besharmi.. you and arthi ka demand ☺️

Originally posted by: name2saakshi

Hey yeh bhi scene ho sakta tha okay last part nahi but baqi toh sab

Thanks a lot .. so glad you liked it🤗❤💖💜