MAAN OS PART 1 & 2 - Page 2

Should i continue writing next part? Do let me know 😊

Originally posted by: rupsii

Should i continue writing next part? Do let me know 😊

Originally posted by: ektag06

jiiiiiii please continue 💙💙

Thank you so much ❤️

Yesss dear, please continue👍🏼🤗

Wow! I liked the twist in tale, Anuj putting up the act and them moving out! I read both parts in one go! ❤️

Hope you write more!🤗

Well written and beautiful it is 🥰🥰🥰🥰

Loved both parts in one go...

Anuj putting up an act to uncover V's act and Anu's concern for her Anuj... beautifully shown... good to have them back at house.. together .. spending some lovely moments....

Amazing

Please continue....

Hi Rupali,

Great follow-up and liked how Anu was not bothered about the statements but more about Anuj's potential injury.

A feedback would be maybe of you could write the punch was light as any physical violence among both genders is not ideal. Or maybe a Trigger warning.

Thanks

Originally posted by: DJ_3

Hi Rupali,

Great follow-up and liked how Anu was not bothered about the statements but more about Anuj's potential injury.

A feedback would be maybe of you could write the punch was light as any physical violence among both genders is not ideal. Or maybe a Trigger warning.

Thanks

Heyy thanks for the feed back.. shall make that change. Sorry about it.. and thanks again for taking time out to read the writeup. 🤗

Originally posted by: snehaz16

Loved both parts in one go...

Anuj putting up an act to uncover V's act and Anu's concern for her Anuj... beautifully shown... good to have them back at house.. together .. spending some lovely moments....

Amazing

Please continue....

Thank you so much. Shall try to post by tonight. 😊