Hues of love |MaAn Holi SS| Part 3 page 3| 20.03.22 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ok lease continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Now this seems more possible than what we saw on the show. And last scene, I'm so excited for next part.

Love the simplicity and relatability of your os always. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Loved it. No mangni, seedhe shaadi, no need for kazi. I like it. Pls continue.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Hinudi!!!!


Kya mast likhti hai yaar tu! Thoda talent mere se bhi share Kar na? 😉


Loved the twist in the tale with maang bharo and patni bana lo part.


By God, pehli baar kinju pe itna pyaar aa raha hai mujhe, dinner pe jaane ke lie!


Awaiting Mr and Mrs Kapadia ki dinner nite post marriage! ☺️


Next update kab milega?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey hinzuuu ur os is as sweet cute simple n lovely as uhh babe....

Loved sprained back anuj phir tum mujhse shadi krogi na.. Shaadi mubarak...

Love the twist maang bharo sajna...

Love this kinju baby.... Going to mom for few

Days achcha kia yr... I'm glad what will be nxt.. 😃😃😍😍🥰🥰🤩humari saari murade tu os me kr deti hai yr.. As I told uhh before I m ur os fan... From starting se hi.. N one of the reason I'm here is uhh n ur os... .. To chal jaldi se update kra de .. I'm so excited n curious... Plz jldi.... 😃😃😃😃🤩🤩

U kw main tera os pdh rhi thi.. Nd my mamma asked me kya pdh rhi hai.. N maine tera os short me sunaya bcz ... Damn she love it... Bol rhi thi tune kitna achcha likha hai.... Aise cute scene dikhye to kitna achcha lgega... 😀😀 waise ye simple n sweet cute tha isliye sunaya.. Hr os means tharaki os to me mummy nhi bta skti na.. 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Hinu darling....

What an amazing OS... Maja aa gaya....

Yaara u forgot to tag me.. so I missed reading this OS yesterday... please do remember to tag me ... please please please.....

Matlab request se maane to upar ki line padh le...

Varna dhamki samajh ki agli baar se tag karna na bhuliyo...

Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Part 3:


And there she was...standing at his door step, wearing a strikingly radiant glow.


Stunned to see her there, he first thanked Kanhaji for the beautiful surprise and with eyes filled with joy he stepped backwards with his head bowed down to welcome his new bride.


Honoured by the loving welcome she started walking in towards him as their hearts starting racing the fastest ever...


It was was the first time they were together as husband and wife...the feeling was surreal and emotions tangible.


Walking back he hit the edge of the dining table and plopped himself on it conveniently as she came closer until their faces were inches apart.


She looked down shyly and fidgeted with her pallu, not knowing what she was meant to do.


He reached for her hand and placed it on his erratic heart to tell her how nervous he was.


She smiled at his gesture and was relieved to know the feeling was mutual.


He gestured how pretty she looked donning the sindoor and she coyly bent her head forward when he cupped her face with his free hand and planted a gratifying kiss on her forehead.


His quivering lips craved for more and he searched her eyes to ask if she wanted the same. She tugged onto his kurta and pressed her lips on his chest driving him into a mania...


Plucking her face out of his chest gently, he looked at her desirably asking the question again when she moved back closer to take his glasses off.


She caressed his face again like she had done earlier and brushed his dry lips suggestively when he pulled her in by the waist and kissed her fingers sensuously, making her squirm.


Biting his lower lip, with his eyes fixated on her mouth he yanked her closer and rubbed his nose with hers igniting something she hadnt felt before.


She trembled and shut her eyes in anticipation as he claimed her lips with immense desire and sucked on them intensely until their tongues met unravelling a whole new level of intimacy.


They kissed and kissed each other fervently until they were out of breath.



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“Anu, mujhe kuch dena hai tumhe” he said breaking the intimate silence after the kiss...


Indulged in his warm embrace she felt dizzy when she looked up to scan his eyes.


Breaking away from the hug he dragged her towards the bed.


“Anuj?” she asked awkwardly as he sat her down and put himself next to her as she looked on curiously.


Fetching the black beaded ring necklace from the drawer, he turned to her saying “shadi hui hai toh mangalsutr bhi hona chahiye!”


Her eyes welled up as she nodded her yes and leaned towards him excitedly.


Bunching her hair to the side, he stroked her neck as he ran his fingers on her silky smooth skin while tying the sacred beads around it.


Tracing back from the nape to the crevice of her heaving chest, he planted a row of kisses as he travelled down and lodged his face where the ring dangled.


She clutched onto his collar and nibbled on his ear when he slyly

slipped her sleeve down revealing the top half of her tender inviting breasts that he couldnt wait to feast on...


Undoing her blouse in the next instant, he pushed her on the bed for a toe curling assault on her curves that made her body tremble with pleasure she hadnt known of.


Ready for her as she was more than ready for him, he slipped out of his pants and reached to pull his kurta out when he cried “ouch”




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I tried, I honestly did but I suck at writing hot stuff...

guess its best left to the pros on this forum😉

phir bhi tell me if you liked it so far? thank you ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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hinaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤗🤗🤗

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Superb yaar...superb 🔥🔥🔥

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He reached for her hand and placed it on his erratic heart to tell her how nervous he was.


He gestured how pretty she looked donning the sindoor

His quivering lips craved for more and he searched her eyes to ask if she wanted the same.

Biting his lower lip, with his eyes fixated on her mouth he yanked her closer and rubbed his nose with hers igniting something she hadnt felt before.

She trembled and shut her eyes in anticipation as he claimed her lips with immense desire and sucked on them intensely until their tongues met unravelling a whole new level of intimacy.

Bunching her hair to the side, he stroked her neck as he ran his fingers on her silky smooth skin while tying the sacred beads around it.

Tracing back from the nape to the crevice of her heaving chest, he planted a row of kisses as he travelled down and lodged his face where the ring dangled.

She clutched onto his collar and nibbled on his ear when he slyly

slipped her sleeve down revealing the top half of her tender inviting breasts that he couldnt wait to feast on...

Undoing her blouse in the next instant, he pushed her on the bed for a toe curling assault on her curves that made her body tremble with pleasure she hadnt known of.

Ready for her as she was more than ready for him, he slipped out of his pants and reached to pull his kurta out when he cried “ouch”


All these sensuous and dreamy moments you added in your os and saying you can not write HOT os. Why so modest Hina? How sophistically you have added these close moments, This os is one of your best! Offcourse at the same level as chocolate fudge os

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