Hues of love |MaAn Holi SS| Part 3 page 3| 20.03.22

Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 1:



The wait to colour each other in the hues of love had finally come to an end...


The moment he saw her all for him, his heart melted...oh how much he loved her and to see his dreams coming true.


Her eyes welled up to see the love in his eyes, the passion and the desire to be her Anuj, all for her and only her.


She trembled with his sensuous touch, he had never touched her like that before, his fingers caressing her cheek sent her into a frenzy and she shut her eyes to cherish the moment forever...


He knew what this was doing to her, his touch she yearned for, his love she craved, it made him the happiest to be sharing this precious moment with her.


He reached to colour the other cheek when she opened her eyes to see if this was real, she wanted him to feel loved, feel special.


She took her hands up to his face, his heart started racing as her gentle touch on his face felt like a million dreams lived.. his stubble tickled her from within, his unwavering gaze teased her insides.


He joined his hand with hers when she went for the other cheek, he wanted to cherish her touch forever...


They played their first Holi, ever so sensuosly.


He couldnt keep away from her, neither could she stop herself from finding a reason to be with him.


Their sizzling desires pulled them close every time.



******


High on bhaang Anuj got up on the tanker and announced his wedding with Anu in front of the entire mohalla and slipped on his way down spraining his back.


Bapuji asked Anu to take him home and Samar helped her carry him to the room while he talked non stop gibberish.


Anu got Samar to look after him until she made a concoction to help with the bhaang, she also got some oil for his back.


Samar got a call from Varun when Anu was in the kitchen and she asked him to go enjoy himself and that she’d be okay to tend to Anuj herself.


The green eyed monster rushed back in when he saw Samar leave and Anu made matters worse by shutting the door on him.



Sitting at the side egde of the bed holding his sprained back, Anuj continued talking of their wedding plans when Anu walked in with a glass of brew to treat his hangover.


“Anu hamari shadi hogi na, woh Vanraj keh raha tha nahi hogi, jhoot bol raha tha na? huh Anu?” he asked, though his speech was slurred his question was quite clear...


“Anuj aap pehle ye peelijiye” she ordered


“phir tum mujhse shadi kar logi?” he said drunkenly


“haan kar loongi” she said and he gulped the drink down in a jiffy.


“shadi mubarak!” he cheered and she couldnt help smile at his happiness.


As she turned around to put the glass on the nightstand, he pulled her by the waist and hugged it tight.


“Anu tum ghar lautogi na?” he mumbled while clinging on to her and she didnt have the heart to pull back from it...


She lovingly caressed his hair and said “ kuch din aur Anuj phir mai sirf aapki Anu ban jaungi”


“sach” he asked lifting his head


“haan” she nodded cupping his face.


“I love you Anu”


“I...love...you...to Anujjjj!” she replied but he could barely hear her amongst the crazy noises in his head.


“chaliye Anuj kurta utariye”



*************



there are two more parts to this, will post them soon, hopefully the next one tonight cause I’ve had it in my drafts for a few days now.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hinu, shuruaat toh kamaal hui hai🤩🤩… ab baaki tu dhamaal machayegi woh bhi pata hai … am waiting



Loved it 🥰 🥰🥰😘😘


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely! ❤️ What if today's episode goes exactly like this? 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinz

Part 1:



The wait to colour each other in the hues of love had finally come to an end...


The moment he saw her all for him, his heart melted...oh how much he loved her and to see his dreams coming true.


Her eyes welled up to see the love in his eyes, the passion and the desire to be her Anuj, all for her and only her.


She trembled with his sensuous touch, he had never touched her like that before, his fingers caressing her cheek sent her into a frenzy and she shut her eyes to cherish the moment forever...


He knew what this was doing to her, his touch she yearned for, his love she craved, it made him the happiest to be sharing this precious moment with her.


He reached to colour the other cheek when she opened her eyes to see if this was real, she wanted him to feel loved, feel special.


She took her hands up to his face, his heart started racing as her gentle touch on his face felt like a million dreams lived.. his stubble tickled her from within, his unwavering gaze teased her insides.


He joined his hand with hers when she went for the other cheek, he wanted to cherish her touch forever...


They played their first Holi, ever so sensuosly.


He couldnt keep away from her, neither could she stop herself from finding a reason to be with him.


Their sizzling desires pulled them close every time.



******


High on bhaang Anuj got up on the tanker and announced his wedding with Anu in front of the entire mohalla and slipped on his way down spraining his back.


Bapuji asked Anu to take him home and Samar helped her carry him to the room while he talked non stop gibberish.


Anu got Samar to look after him until she made a concoction to help with the bhaang, she also got some oil for his back.


Samar got a call from Varun when Anu was in the kitchen and she asked him to go enjoy himself and that she’d be okay to tend to Anuj herself.


The green eyed monster rushed back in when he saw Samar leave and Anu made matters wose by shutting the door on him.



Sitting at the side egde of the bed holding his sprained back, Anuj continued talking of their wedding plans when Anu walked in with a glass of brew to treat his hangover.


“Anu hamari shadi hogi na, woh Vanraj keh raha tha nahi hogi, jhoot bol raha tha na? huh Anu?” he asked, though his speech was slurred his question was quite clear...


“Anuj aap pehle ye peelijiye” she ordered


“phir tum mujhse shadi kar logi?” he said drunkenly


“haan kar loongi” she said and he gulped the drink down in a jiffy.


“shadi mubarak!” he cheered and she couldnt help smile at his happiness.


As she turned around to put the glass on the nightstand, he pulled her by the waist and hugged it tight.


“Anu tum ghar lautogi na?” he mumbled while clinging on to her and she didnt have the heart to pull back from it...


She lovingly caressed his hair and said “ kuch din aur Anuj phir mai sirf aapki Anu ban jaungi”


“sach” he asked lifting his head


“haan” she nodded cupping his face.


“I love you Anu”


“I...love...you...to Anujjjj!” she replied but he could barely hear her amongst the crazy noises in his head.


“chaliye Anuj kurta utariye”



*************



there are two more parts to this, will post them soon, hopefully the next one tonight cause I’ve had it in my drafts for a few days now.


Lovely Hina right on time ...read just before the episode ....

You right beautifully 😍 there is a smooth flow in your writing.

Best part was when Anu shut door on V🤣🤣

Looking forward for the next part

Posted: 3 years ago
#5

Part 2:


“chaliye Anuj kurta utariye”


“kurta? kyu?” he asked between hiccups


“arey phir tel kaise lagaoongi aapki beck par, Samar bhi nahi hai yahan” she fretted and before she could get him to take him to do anything he fell on the bed flat.


She put his feet up on the bed and dozed off beside him.



******



A few hours later they were woken up by loud bangs on the door...which opened to an audience, they werent expecting.


Baa and Vanraj started their mudslinging and accused them of having an illicit relationship before marriage.


Anu didnt take the insults and reminded Vanraj of their anniversary night when she had found Kavya in her bed with him.


Baa continued hurling abuses at Anu for setting a bad example for her daughter and that the society will never accept their relation and Anuj gave it back to her in kind refusing to bear any insults directed at his Anu.


When Baluji saw the the arguments getting heated and out of his control he went and grabbed the sindoor fromthe mandir and asked Anuj to fill Anu’s maang.


Anuj apologised and Anu requested Bapuji to reconsider his decision but Bapuji insisted that they will have a proper wedding later but this was the only way to shut Vanraj and Baa.



He wanted them married right then and there and Anuj filled Anu’s maang in front of Kanhaji’s idol.




********



In the evening after the drama when Anuj had left, Anu gave Kinjal her meds and returned to her room.


Sitting in front of the mirror, she admired the red on her head...how it made her feel complete, how it made her feel belonged.


Replaying the moment in her head she blushed and smiled when her phone rang...and it had to be him on a video call.


She answered the phone but was shy to speak when he said “Anu meri taraf dekho” and she looked up to meet his eyes.


“meri Anu, meri patni Anu” he boasted


“aapne abhi tak kapde kyu nahi badle?” she asked to cut the awkwardness


“ye lo biwi bane hue tumhe kuch ghante hi hue hai aur abhi se orders dene lagi?”


“haan toh biwi hoin toh order bhi doongi”


“toh phir toh mujhe bhi order nahi toh kam se kam request karne ka toh haq hona chahiye?”


“kahiye kya request hai aapki?”


“yehi ke ab shadi toh hamari ho gayi hai par phir bhi tum mere paas nahi ho”


“abhi aajaoon?”


“mai lene aajaoon?”


“sabar kariye Anuj Kapadia ji, sabar ka phal meetha hota hai”


“accha? mujhe toh waise bhi meetha bohot pasand hai...par phir bhi yaar Anu aajaao na, ab toh tumhare bin rehna aur bhi mushkil ho gaya hai”


“mujhse bhi aur intezaar nahi ho raha Anuj, bas kuch din aur” she requested when Kinjal knocked on the door to say that her mom had invited her and Toshu over for Holi dinner and that she will be staying over for a few days.



“kya hua kaun tha darwaze par? he asked and she said “Kinjal thi, Anuj mujhe jaana hai, aap bhi naha lijiye aur so jaayiye, hum kal baat karte hai, goodnight”



And excitedly she said to herself “mai aa rahi hoon Anuj aapke paas”




***********



alright then thats the second part mostly a filler...

will post the final part hopefully by tomorrow evening...

havent re read so please ignore typos

Edited by hinz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ooh, what a lovely setup! I'm waiting for what comes next! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely again...

In this best part was when Kinjal informed that Anu is free for a couple of days😍😍😍😍😍

Thanks for sharing and tagging . Really looking forward for the final part..its better be a long one ok?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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“Anu tum ghar lautogi na?” he mumbled while clinging on to her and she didnt have the heart to pull back from it...


This has my heart❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow Hina I wish it had played out like that in the show 😍😍😍

I really really want a dramatic maang bharo scene now 😂😂

Ye Baa ka torture pata nahi kitne din drag karenge 🙆🏻‍♀️

Eagerly waiting for next part ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Take off ho gya h landing ka wait🥰🥰🥰

Amazingly written with simple words. Hum sabki murad is OS me poori kr degi lagta h 🥰🥰🥰🥰

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