MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 2

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

I dont recall if it was Arya or Ali who posted the pic. of an image where Anuj is kneading dough with GK (I guess backfrom sept/oct of last yr)

That pic the culprit for my imagination to this scene,

She is standing at the kitchen counter aboutto start kneading the dough. He comes from behind hugs her ....

Anu goes 🤔😳😳 chodiye, mujhe bahut kaam hai.

Anuj: Mujhe bhi bahut kaam(lust) hai.... 😉 mujhe aata lagana sikhaogi?😳

She unclasps his hands from the hug and brings it forward.... they both knead the dough together. 🤗😳

Mid way she asks - "badle mein mujhe kya milega?" 😳

He leans towards her and plants several kisses all over her face ❤️😉😳

Thats how he get his first lesson in cooking.

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Ever since this, I have not been able to knead dough with a straight face!

Scene: After Anu's B'day, she returns to her apt, the following day he comes to her asking for dahi.

Anuj opens his arms and says“tumhare liye jaan bhi… “ ( don’t recall his exact words)🤗

Anu: Closes her hands over his mouth to stop him from completing the sentence and has her eyes fixed on his.

Anuj kisses her fingers that are still on his lips with a chirp❤️

Anu: Takes his arms that are wide open and brings them towards her neck to enclose them, comes close to his face…. “ mujhe aapki jaan nahi, aap chahiye….”😳

He sees her eyes have welled up. Takes her hand off his comes close and hugs him tightly.🤗

Anuj: kya hua Anu, kyu ro rahiho? What happened?😒

Anu: Kuch nahi… aise hi.

Anuj: aaw! Tightens his grip around her.🤗

Anu: She snuggles her face in his neck.😳

Anuj: peels her back and says– “woh dahi aur shakkar… mujhe der ho…. “😲

Anu: Suri suri… spoon feeds him dahi. Encourages him with her words…“aap jo bhi kaam mann laga kar karenge… ..” yada yada

Anuj: Walks off …. Gets hit with the sofa cushion.Turns around and see her giggling. 😆 Picks up the cushion walks towards her, bit annoyed signals as if to ask, what she is doing…. Ye kya🤔

Anu: Keeps moving back and bumps into a wall.

He comes close to her face and she says “aap kya 1942 mein paidaa hue the daadaji…? 😊welcome to 2022.

Iss zamaane mein good bye aise kehte hai” Places her lips on his and they have a lip lock.❤️😉😳

Scene: Anu & Anuj are heading to Shah house in an Auto. They both steal glances.

Anuj suggestively runs his hands over his lips and hums .. "hothon se choolo mm mm.... " 😳

Anu hums back "mm.... honth tere..." aap ye kya kar rahe..... aise baar baar karne se, aur bigad jaayega... "

ye lijiye..... and fishes out the cocount oil from her bag, hands it to him.

honthon par tel/ghee lagane se shoft hota hai. Ye lagaiye.... jaldi theek ho jayega. Mein sweety ko aise hi lagati thi.😊

Anuj: 🤔

Anuj: "Excuse me! Isski kya zaroorat hai? Mere honth kitne soft hai, tumhe pata hai?"🤔

Anu: 😳🤔 mujhe kaise pata....

Anuj: smiles sarcastically and says- jaanna chahti ho..... ?😉. Comes closer.

Anu: nervously.. Points towards the autodriver and says... 😳Hum akele nahi hai,ye dekh rage hai.....mujhe nahi jaanna hai😳

Anuj: Talks to the auto driver - bhaiyya, Hume thodi der me liye privacy chahiye, aap aankhen bandh kar sakte hai?"🤔

Anu: bhiyya aap inke baaton mein mat aayiye,aap apna kaam kijiye....ye kuch bhi bolte hai

Anu: blushing... 😳scoots closer towards him,inserts her hands in the nook of his elbows, links her fingers with his and tilts her head to rest on his shoulders.🤗😳

Anuj: smiles and leans his head to meet hers.

She drifts off. Anuj looks at her lovingly❤️

They reach the shah house, as she gets off..

.After gharwali dialogue, he says "shaam ko mein tumhe dance academy mein miloonga..."

Eyes towards Shah house and says - tum zyaada stress nahi lena...." and chirps a flying kiss.😉

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In the evening, when they meet, chit chat etc... They get up to go on a date, lights go off.

Anu: ab mujhe date pe nahi jaana hai 😳

Anuj: turns on the flashlight on his phone."Par kyun?..."😲

Anu: subah, rickshaw mein ......woh aap kuchkeh rage the... aapke honth..😳😳😳

Anuj: achcha ji ...mein tumhe jitna bholi samjhta tha...utni bholi toh tum ho nahi.... comes close to her, holds her arms and looks into her eyes... She gets close to him, in anticipation closes her eyes

Their lips almost touches ..... they hear ashriek..." Mummyyy!!!"😈

Kinjal arrives.....

Anu and Anuj: 😒🤔🥺

Coconut oil 🤣🤣 it is so like Anu...

But the other part was not at all like anu...makers should read all these OS and understand that ki hamare man me Maan ko le ke kitni adhuri icchaye hain...

Lovely 😍 alternate route Smitha

Loved all.

Was fantastic.. do write more 💗💗💗

Read it all in one shot....

Hi Smitha

I have read majority of these drabble during thread discussion. But reading it again gives another kind of satisfaction...

They r fun.. they are love..

Keep writing.. love these alternate versions of Maan scenes

What a delightful series of vignettes, Smitha. You've elevated every scene with subtle touches that give more meaning to them ❤️

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

These are so lovely Smitha ... They give all the warm and romantic feels without being overly mushy or passionate ☺️❤️... ( just the right combo for our Sanskaari , mature couple 😉)

I wish we could get a web series with these 2 so that we can get all these soul satisfying moments with their electric chemistry without the restrictions of ITV ( instead we get Anuraj 😡) ... Its just so exasperating to see it go waste esp with all the poor storytelling and the rushed editing of half baked scenes ..😔..Maybe it happens due to the demand of putting out content daily , 6 days a week without hardly any episode bank...

The problem is looking more glaring in case of Anu cz at time of establishing Anuj’s love they did so well ... Now in some scenes it almost looks as if Anu doesn’t care ... 😲

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

I had written this when AK’s promos were going around.

Majority of us felt he looks much younger than Anu. I wondered what if their inital meeting were to go like this –

AK introduces himself...

Anupama - "Anuj, tum bilkul nahi badle..." 😊

Anuj - 😳 "woh toh hai.." run his fingers briskly thru this hair and adds "

tumhe kya hua Anu? kitni pyaari thi.... ab bilkul "aunty" lag rahi hai..."😲

Anupama - "Maa hoon ne...." bhashan begins.

Anuj will start sweating and run away from there! 🤣

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Before confession, Anu and Anuj cooking in his apt.

AK & Anu are in the kitchen (episode scene)...

AK is peeling potatoes; he is insisting on cooking for her.

Anu - woh sab theek hai... par meethe mein kyahai? 😉

AK - nervous becoz he had not thought of making any sweet.

He adds - "mein kuch bazaar se le aata hoon..." takes off his apron and is about to walk past her.🤔

Anu - holds his hand stopping him from going. 😳blushing she manages to say –

"Bazaar se lane ki kya zaroorat hai? " and snuggles against him😳 they both melt away in an embrace, oblivious ofthe surroundings.🤗

Anuj: Anu!

Anu: mmm.....

Anuj: kuch jalne ki badboo…😲

Anu: yikes! Turns around to see the paratha has started burning. Turns off the flame and takes the paratha out.

Anuj: lo! Karlo baat. Mr.Shah ki tarah, ye khana bhi jal gaya hum dono ko aise saath me dekh kar.

Anu: aap bhi ne…taps his chest with her fist pushing him away.😳

Anuj: Toh, where were we? Pehle dessert se shuru kare ?😉😳

Anu: shyly cuddles against him…😳🤗