MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 14

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu has announced her wedding with Anuj publicly on stage. Minutes later Anu whisks him away into the green room backstage for privacy.

It was a beautiful episode indeed. The much-needed private conversation was good as well, peppered with banter while still clarifying misunderstandings. There was no need for me to imagine alternatives at all. But, aadat se majboor ….. here goes a small nugget.

Anu goes on her knees, Anuj is beaming with joy unable to believe his dream has come true. Heaves a sigh of relief to bask in the surreal moment. Then bends down, holds her hands, looks into her eyes raising his brow. Responds in agreement with his signature smile and picks her to help her stand up.

Anu runs into his arms to embrace him. 🤗Moments later, she pulls away from him, stomps her feet throwing a fit and says – ye kya hai?😕 Mukku aur GK ko aap bahut badiya hug dete hai….. mujhe kyun nahi? 🤔😳

Anuj: confused, chuckles at her impishness. Accha! Opens his arms and signals with his hands for her to come to him.🤗❤️

She runs back into his arms and looks up to meet his gaze,nuzzles the tip of her nose at his chin and claims his lips.😳❤️

Moments later, she pulls away and looks into his eyes and raises her eyebrow as if asking if he liked it😳😳

Anuj: His eyes fixed on hers, wipes his lips with his thumb and says “Black cherry?”😉

Anu: kya?😲

Anuj: tumhara lipstick…. Black cherry?😳

Anu: Aapko kaise pata?😳

Anuj: there's a hint of bittersweet after taste.....😳

Anu: is now worried…. aur kya kya pata hai aapko?🤔

Anuj: Aur bhi bahut kuch….. I like couple other..…. raises his hands and says - "You know that – pink waala .. I think it is “Raspberry bite” has a sour aftertaste, aur woh...…"

Anu: aapko ye sab kaise pata? 😡makes a fist and begins to pound on his chest, stomping her feet. 😈🥺

Anuj: Laughs, comes close to grab her hands, gives her a hug,and says… accha baba batata hoon.... Mukku ke bhai jo hoon, ye sab jaankari ussi se mili hai…

Continues… lets get back to black cherry, shall we? and stakes a claim on her lips 😳❤️

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Waiting for new episode is for kids

I toh wait for this gem❤️

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: It is the day of Anu’s dance competition, she is in the green room regretting her behavior towards him the prev night and sorely missing him. She wants to call him, turns on her phone, see his pic and her remorse deepens.

An alternative continuation of the scene from imagination land... 😳

She calls him and turns on the video. She sees him, he’s a tad bit upset, but he manages to throw in a smile.

Anu: Teary eyed, asks “ aap mujhse gussa ho?”😲

Anuj: nahi…nahi.. bass, aisa hi kuch kaam mein ulajh gaya tha…. manages to smile and continues Tum kaho, how are you? Bahut pyaari lag rahi ho …❤️ all set to go on the stage?

Anu: Her guilt worsens seeing him smile despite being hurt. She says – “suri suri suri… mein bahut bahut bahut suri……. ab mein jo bhi kahoongi, woh guzra hua waqt ko nahi badal sakta…., pata nahi mein kya karoon… pats her forehead in remorse.🤔

Anuj: sees her shedding tears in distress and tries to cheer her up for the performance. It is okay Anu!🤗

Anu: mein sab theek kar doongi, aapko kabhi shikayat ka mouka nahi doongi…jab aap wapas ayenge...

Anuj: smiles and then looks far behind her and says – “Jai sri krishna baa… “😊😇

Anu: is scared out of her wits, drops the phone and turns around to see…

that nobody is there…..😲

Anuj: is hysterically laughing at her🤣… chehra… tumhara chehra….

Anu: Irritated with him…. Makes a face at him and starts to yell😈😡

Anuj: aaa haa!…. Abhi toh keh rahi thi ki…who kya keh rahi thi…. I’m suri, it won’t happen again blah, blah blah….

Anu: aapko mazak soojh raha hai? Mein pehle se hi paresaan hoon…..😳

Anuj: achcha baba ,…. I am really sorry! and says… All the best for your performance and chirps a kiss.😳❤️

Anu: Feels shy and says “ thenk you!”😳😳

Anuj: Arey, aise kaise? Tum mujhe kiss nahi dogi? Ek kiss toh banta hai….. please😒

Anu: hesitates, feel shy …finally obliges and about to kiss…she hears baa’s voice (for real this time)

Baa: tum kisse baatien kar rahi ho…. huh?😡

Anu: jumps from her seat… jai sri krishna baa… mein woh sweety se….🤪

Baa: sweety toh hamare saath baithi hai…. Tu kiske saath kuchi koo kar rahi thi?😈 Picks up Anu’s phone, sees AK and rolls her eyes🤔. …. And hangs up the call.😈😈

Anu: is irritated but chooses not to say anything at that moment to avoid any drama. After Baa leaves from there, she texts Anuj - 😘😘😍

Mins later…. She is called upon the stage to perform. She goes on the stage and her eyes widen with joy seeing Anuj in the front row…..😳

she smiles and he winks back at her😉… she starts to blush,😳 but comes back to reality when the song starts playing.

She dances and then goes backstage to the green room. She sits on the chair, heaving a sigh of relief that the competition is over.

She begins to wonder how Anuj was present, was he talking to her on the phone while he was inside auditorium? Was he throwing kisses at her while being surrounded by so many people?🤔

Just when she is lost in thoughts… Anuj walks in, pushing his glasses back and kicks the door close behind him….

Anu: confused, incoherently mouths words... aap … yaha, …. kaise…..kab

Anuj: I'm sure, tumhe hairani hogi mujhe waha audience ke saath, front row mein dekhkar.

I am one of the chief guests for the evening. I wanted to surprise you.😊 Missed me? and opens his arms tempting her for an embrace🤗

Anu: still confused, lekin aapne toh kaha…

Cutting her off mid sentence, he places his lips on hers sweeping her away into oblivion.😉😳❤️

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I feel that the rona dhona, yet another accident, womanhood speech etc is all uncalled for, we have had enough of it. So, wrote my own alternative. Aisa hota toh kaisa hota? Drop your comments to let me know.

Kya dreamy bandi hai yaar tu❤️

A sprinkle of romance, a dash of humour, a whole lot of haq in her question… another delectable nugget, Smitha.

This is cute

Beautifully penned❤️

I like these alternate takes Smitha they show more personality of the characters and enable us to relate. Obviously the wonderful moments depicted are super sweet too. 🥰

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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Hello! Thanks for the tag!! Have been a silent reader on the forum for a few months, and a huge maan fan.. love love love all your scenes.. keep writing ❤

This is the first time I'm commenting, hopefully will be more active here and start interacting with all the wonderful people once my exams get over in two weeks..

Love your work❤

Originally posted by: Kitty584

Hello! Thanks for the tag!! Have been a silent reader on the forum for a few months, and a huge maan fan.. love love love all your scenes.. keep writing ❤

This is the first time I'm commenting, hopefully will be more active here and start interacting with all the wonderful people once my exams get over in two weeks..

Love your work❤

Hey,

Welcome aboard! I am glad my thread prompted you to post!🤗

Originally posted by: Kitty584

Hello! Thanks for the tag!! Have been a silent reader on the forum for a few months, and a huge maan fan.. love love love all your scenes.. keep writing ❤

This is the first time I'm commenting, hopefully will be more active here and start interacting with all the wonderful people once my exams get over in two weeks..

Love your work❤

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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