Poosuttral - Fan fiction by giri - Page 7

That was truly a story with a twist at the very end. You had me reading with bated breath, and then you dropped the bombshell, Giri. It is even better than the episode in which Kandhu complained about his ponn paarkal experience! He should be satisfied now. Keep up the good work, Giri.

Giri, TBC pottutu enge poitte???
seekiram vaa.

Part IV – Vellaloor thiruvizha

Rohini receives a call from her mom – "Rohini, nalla irukkiya? Mapillaikkum unakkum ulla prachanai theera Vellaloor Pechi ammannukku paavadai saathalaamnu vendi irukken. Sunday polaam".

Rohini – "Sarimma".

PP had the shock of her life when SKPD introduced Kandhu as his maapillai. Let us go a few minutes back in time. The time Shanthi was talking to Narayanan and Priya fell down on her ilai, SKPD was having a secret discussion with kanakku about disposal of Murugesh and the gold biscuits. But Kandhu had heard this and hit a jackpot, means Chinna Pecchi.

PP was speechless for few seconds before she asked – "Emppa Sankara! Enna sollare.. purinjudaan pesaraiya?"

SKPD – "Aamama, Indha Ramu than en mapillai. Adhula endha maatramum illai."

PP for the first time screams at her son – "ada paavi! 30 varushama kaanadha pona kuzhandai ippo than kidaichirukka. Ava vaazhkaiyai paazh panidadhaiya" finishes with a kenjal.

Abi has a taste of her father's true nature and shudders, "nalla velai naan thappichen".😉 ACD is on the verge of revealing the true identity of Jamuna, but samalichifies at the last minute, " CP en thangai madiri soneengale. Avalukku indha madiri oru kalyanam panradha nalladhe illai".

SKPD –"eh AC , idhu en kudumba vishayam, nee idhula thalaiyidadhe."

All the time Kandhu jollu vittufies.

Now focus on Shanthi – "Narayana.. ithanai solliyum koattai vittuteengale".

Nara- "Shanthima , kavalai padadeenga. Samsonum indha oorukku than vandhu irukkan. Ippo kooda adho andha pandhila utkarndu sapittu irukkan". Shanthi looks at a bearded & mundasu/veshti wearing Sams and panics –"aiyo inge edhavadhu asambavidham nadakka pogudhu".

RK – "vaa Narayana, enna ithanai late? Shanthi nee poi parimaradha inga enna pesikittu irukke? Come on hurry up, hurry up".

Shanthi –"Idho mama"and moves away giving cautious looks at Sams.

Jamuna regains consciousness, but PP nenja pudichittu keezha utkarndu kudam kudama kanneer sindharanga. Jamuna gives a paridhaba look at ACD , who also reciprocates with the same.😃 Priya takes control of her emotions and tells ACD, "ponga konjam elaniyo, nungo kondu vanga. Naan ivangala parthukaren". ACD's parents pendha pendha ellaraiyum parthu muzhichittu irukkanga.

ACD indha idhatha vittu pona podhumnu tender coconut vanga poraru. SKPD and Kandhu leave the group to have further business deals. Charu finishes her food and comes to the thinnai and finds out about the latest turn of events. Avanga appadiye oru erimalaiya maari, kannu padapadakka, nilam adhira adhira SKPD pinnala oda poranga. But she has second thoughts and calls up someone from her mobile and signals to Jamuna to remain calm.

Oru pakkam RK Shanthi, Arjun, Dinesh, Madhan, Narayanan ivangala verattitu irukkaru. Pandhila Sams mundasu, beard adjust pannaradhum, vayathai thadavi parkaradhum, saapidara madiri nadikaradhuma irukkan.

Priya and Jamuna keep looking at Charu with hope. PP is helped by ACD's parents. Charu is looking at the entrance and suddenly smiles. Karthik and KK enter. On seeing KK , Jamuna rush to him and sobs on his shoulders and KK pacifies her. Priya gives a surprised look. PP gives an approving parvai and her aasirvadham. Charu perumidhama parkaranga.

Shanthi is so happy to see Karthik, but Karthik has eyes only for Sams, who starts running immediately. Karthik runs behind him. Sams runs out of the temple and turns around in front of a tree and pulls out a revolver from inside his veshti and points it at Karthik.

-TBC

Giri, your suspense is killing me, and I need the ending fast! Are you trying to give me a heart attack or what? You have a great imagination.

Aiyoh, Giri. Meendum TBC ah? Pray, who is KK? Please finish this story tomorrow. I am going to Paree for 6 days from tomorrow evening and may not have Internet access. My head will burst if I don't find out the ending of this story 😃

awwww Giri, great going - neeyavathu seekiram
mudimma - CR mathiri suthal le vidathe, ok?
ama, athu yaaru KK???

Part V – Vellaloor thiruvizha

KK continues pacifying Jamuna who has wet his shirt with her share of tears😉.

KK –"naan than vanduten illaiya kanne, ini indha kannulerndu aanandha kaneer than varanum".

Jamuna – "idhe madiri dialogue pesina naan ungala vittutu odi poiduven"😡.

KK – "ok ok ambel, chumma sambar Ganesan madiri try pannen".

Jamuna – "neenga enna situation theriyadha comedy panittu irukeenga?"

KK –"indha Kandhukku ellam bayapadhadhe. Avan matter onnu engitta irukku, adha sonna avan un directionukke varamattaan. Idho ippave avan odaradha parka pore".

Within minutes, Kandhu and his men leave in a hurry.

Let us go to Shanthi, who has her heart in her mouth. 'kadavule, kadavule avara kaapathu' appadinu ore vendudhal. Karthik doesn't have any weapon and is wondering how to tackle his edhiri. Abi is looking at Karthik & Shanthi with a wicked smile. RK still has no idea what is happening outside😕. He continues veratifying his other family members with the anna daana work.

Shall we have some flashback of how Karthik is linked with the present ragalai? Arjun had not believed Shanthi regarding Sams. So Shanthi , for the first time in her life had sought her husband's help & had mailed him a picture of Sams, seeing which Karthik had jumped out of his chair sending his chair and laptop crashing down. In his line of duty, he had already known Sams alias Joe alias Yonus alias Praveen as a terrorist. He couldn't contact Shanthi's cell – network problem( hee hee), but had met Narayanan and had come along with him. Enroute he came across KK , his ex-colleague, who had come to Vellalore on another assignment.

Back to Sams – Karthik. Sams is about to pull the trigger when he is knocked down by a rain of coconuts. Karthik and Shanthi look up to see ACD on top of the coconut tree😉. Elani vennumnu Priya kettale. Adha thedi thedi alanchu kidaikaama , ACD coconut tree mela eri porikka poittaru😆.

Kandhu en odi ponaangara vishayam kadaisivarai SKPDkku theriyave theriyadhu. SKPD comes back to see CP and KK arm in arm. PP pidivaadham parthu SKPD agrees for the wedding. But KK has a condition – "veetoda mapillaiya than iruppen".😃 PP readily & SKPD reluctantly agree. PP winks at Charu who is hidden behind a pillar. KK had come to Vellalore tracking 'othaikai' at the instance of Charu. Sari…. Yaaru indha KK? KK is Krishnakumar, the private detective who found out Abi's true identity, but instead gave Jamuna's photo to SKPD. He had felt sorry for Jamuna and had met her during one of her trips to the parlour. But it was love at first sight(hee hee). So what better way to protect and help his wife finish her last police assignment than a veetoda mapillai? After this Jamuna plans to team up with KK in his detective work.

ACD climbs down the tree and handcuffs Joe and calls up JC👏👏👏. Dhideernu 'lubu lubu lubu…..' kulavi sattham.😆 Everyone turns around to see a group of ladies in yellow saree with vepillai kotthu entering the temple. Vera yaaru.. ACD oru case avadhu solve pannavudane vendudhal niraivetha vandha Anandham makkal than. Eljay prepares the payasam👏.

Kosuru:

ACD Priya virkku elani seevi kudikka kuduthu ava kudikara azhagai rasichitte irundharu. Jayakku ore perumai – "en pullaikku marumagala parthittu irukkave neram podhadhu".😃

Shanthi partha kaadhal parvaiyile Karthikku kulir juram vandiducchu.😛

SKPD ippo arrest aagalaina enna? Charu irukkave irukka, othaikai irukkave irukkan.

RKkku anna daanam thavira nadandha endha koothum theriyave illai😃.

Needless to say Abi was fuming- CP veeta vittu viratta mudiyalai, podhadhakuraikku koodave detective vera.😃

Rohini pathi mention pannalaiye. Actuala she is coming only next Sunday😉.

Subham

Giri, I have tears rolling down my cheeks! This is simply wonderful. 🤣 🤣 🤣 Where are you getting these ideas? This is too good for words.

👏
excellent Giri. CR, ithai apdiye copy
panni story ai mudinga ayya, IF crowd will
come to Vellalur and do puliyodharai daanam.

First let me thank Roja akka for making this a sticky topic. She is a great source of inspiration & encouragement 👏. Special thanks to Eljay & Bon😊 - neenga suspense porukka mudiyalai appadinu sonneenga - ennakke 3 rd part pottappuram enna aagapogudunu suspense a irundadhu 😆. Roja akka ACD -Priyavai Tarzan -Jane kanakka konduponadhu bayangara tamazh.😆😆 .

Glad u liked it Dee63 😊.