AlaSmine FF: Shahi Talwaar.. Part 11 updated on page 21

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Loved it 👏👏👏
Aladdin should also realize how yasmine have felt when he was romancing meher🤢

Thanks dear, yes the realization is necessary... Hope you like the jealous part.. I tried best to plot Aladdin being jealous of Mirza...

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Posted: 6 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love
Plz Update soon

Will try to update next part ASAP 😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

#93

Finally u made it an ff. I am so happy. I can't tell u how much I love to read it. I want both sidneet read it. Want to msged it to them on insta😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanchita1410
Finally u made it an ff. I am so happy. I can't tell u how much I love to read it. I want both sidneet read it. Want to msged it to them on insta😉

Yes FinallF my first ever FF,😊 Thanks dear, I am happy that you loved reading this part... I too want SidNeet to read it.. It will be like a great achievement if they do so... 😳

Thanks again for reading and appreciating my work...

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Posted: 6 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks dear, yes the realization is necessary... Hope you like the jealous part.. I tried best to plot Aladdin being jealous of Mirza...

I loved it

Hope that aladdin confess his love for yasmine soon and not let her get close to mirza

You are an awesome writer yr😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Yayyy!! U updated it. I really liked jealous Aladdin and Jasmine giving it back to him about Meher
I am really greedy but hope you update the next part soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: AProudBookworm
Yayyy!! U updated it. I really liked jealous Aladdin and Jasmine giving it back to him about Meher
I am really greedy but hope you update the next part soon

Thanks dear for reading and commenting... I am glad that you like the jealous part,I was not sure whether you all will like the part or not but glad to see that you all liked it...

Greedy!!! No way...Will update soon...

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

I loved it
Hope that aladdin confess his love for yasmine soon and not let her get close to mirza
You are an awesome writer yr😳

Ohh!! Nice I am glad that the jealous part was loved by all of you readers... Well I want relish the suspense of turns and twist that's going to come in the story...

Thanks, you made me feel grateful by such huge compliment.😳.

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Ohh!! Nice I am glad that the jealous part was loved by all of you readers... Well I want relish the suspense of turns and twist that's going to come in the story...
Thanks, you made me feel grateful by such huge compliment. 😳.

Eagerly waiting for the next update 👏

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