AlaSmine FF: Shahi Talwaar.. Part 11 updated on page 21 - Page 9

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Shirin, it's a good idea... A jealous aladdin is a treat for all the readers... And it will be exciting to write such a plot.. I will try to put such a part in next part definitely.. 😳

I have tried to put little bit meher track in the the new TS as requested by you... Hope you will like it.. 😳

Do read new AlaSmine TS:Revenge part 1

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

No doubt, Hackathon is a big event...

can I ask you about your profession.. Only if you don't mind revealing it?? 😳

Will try to update today...Stay tuned..

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Shirin, it's a good idea... A jealous aladdin is a treat for all the readers... And it will be exciting to write such a plot.. I will try to put such a part in next part definitely.. 😳

I have tried to put little bit meher track in the the new TS as requested by you... Hope you will like it.. 😳

Do read new AlaSmine TS:Revenge part 1

Originally posted by: Anonymous8

I am an engineering student. What about you?

PS: Seriously loved the update. I could clearly imagine Aladdin and Yasmin while reading this😳. Will be eagerly waiting for the next one <3 .

PPS-Can you please add all the chapters' link on the first page,this will make it quite easy for the new readers to catch up with the story .

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

I read it 👏 it's fab👏

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Hi ...you also want a jealous Aladdin👏in the current track of aladdin yasmine is getting jealous🤢😡..i am fed up of that track

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks dear, Yasmine show feeling of love, care and affection towards Aladdin.. I will try to include scenea of jealous Aladdin in next part..

Originally posted by: AProudBookworm

Hi I have not watched the current track becoz I just started watching the show from start( thank god for youtube) but yes only the girl being jealous is annoying... am sure Ananya will be able to fullfill our wish

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Part 7

After the precious hugging moment.. Ruksaar left the room to bring Aladdin and Sana breakfast to eat...

Aladdin was staring at Yasmine who was dressing his wound with full dedication...

Aladdin - Sana... Vo mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha...

Yasmine felt a shiver went through her spine...

Yasmine (to herself)-yaah allah!! Aladdin ko kya kehna hai mujhse... Kahi vo ishaare mohabbat toh nahi karne wala... Hum aisa nahi hone de sakte...hume abhi apne mansoobo par dhyan dena chahiye...

Aladdin shook Yasmine.. And yasmine was crashed to the real world out of her thoughts

Aladdin - kaha kho gayi thi tum...

Yasmine - vo... Main..

Ruksaar called yasmine to help her with kitchen chores...

Yasmine got a chance to escape

Yasmine - ammi bula rahi hai... Hume chalna chanhiye...

Aladdin - par meri baat toh suno Nachidii!!!!

Yasmine quickly escaped the situation by literally running out of the room..

Aladdin - main jaanta hoon.. Tum meri baat kyu nahi sun rahi par main bhi tumhe mana kar rahunga...

After breakfast

Yasmine was reading a scroll..

Aladdin - Nachidii!!

Yasmine became alert and started talking before he could start his topic..

Yasmine - hum soch rahe the Kalechor ki Soheb Ali bohut hi buddha (old) aur vafadaar pahredaar hai... Toh uska iss tarah achanak aur itni safayi se chori karna kuch ajeeb lag raha hai...

Aladdin - baat toh sahi hai Nachidii!!! Ho sakta hai usne yeh chori kisi se karavaayi ho...

Yasmine - kon ek mamuli pahredaar ke liye yeh sab karega aur kyu??? Mujhe lagta hai ki chor Soheb ka koi apna hai jisne tijori ki nakli chaabi banvaayi.. Aur baad usi chaabi ki madad se mahal mein chori ki???

Aladdin - haan par hume kaise pata chalega ki vo kon hai...

Yasmine smiled at him with a plan ready in her mind... He was almost killed with that killer smile...

At Soheb Ali's house

Yasmine and Aladdin came to ask for a room on rent

Soheb was not at house so a boy with fair complexion, great masculine figure and age almost equal to Aladdin came out...

Boy-ji main Mirza Ali... Main aap jaisi khoobsurat, haseen, jawaan...

Before he could utter another word Yasmine introduced herself...

Yasmine - ji main sana aur yeh...

Mirza was least interested in knowing who Aladdin is his main focus was on Yasmine, the queen of beauty...

Aladdin- main Aladdin

Mirza cold heartedly said- ji accha laga aap... Se milke...

Aladdin somehow controlled himself from uttering some bitter words for him and prevent himself from indulging in an unwanted argument

Yasmine analysed his face full of anger and rage... She got a way to stay away from him...

Yasmine - Mirza ji hum..

Yasmine put her hand on Mirza's shoulder

Yasmine - hum yaha kiraye par ghar fekhne aaye hai...

Aladdin noticed the act and turned his face to other side only to avoid seeing both of them together...

Mirza was froze inhumanly after the touch but soon made some movement like a living human..

Mirza- ji hai na... Aap ke liye toh pura ghar khaali hai...

Mirza tried to place hand on Yasmine's waist... But suddenly Aladdin came in between..

Aladdin - aur mia mere liye...

Mirza-hain na kuch gine chune kamre...

Yasmine laughed from behind... Aladdin turned more furious..

Mirza-wah kya muskurahat hai... Mash allah!!

Kya ada hai... Arz kiya hai..

Yasmine - irshad!!

Aladdin (to himself) - yeh kya ho gaya hai Nachidii ko kabhi meri shayari par toh irshaad nahi bola.. Aur aaj iss chapadganju.. Chodo mujhe kyu itna farak pad raha hai..

Mirza- arz kiya hai...

Shokhiya teri adaao ki,

Khushboo teri nigaaho ki...

Shokhiya teri adaao ki,

Khushboo teri nigaaho ki...

Mohabbat ki mahak se khil utha hai tera shabab...

Baate ho rahi ab vafaao ki...

Yasmine - wah wah mirza ji... Ap toh bohat acche shayar nikle...

Mirza - ji shukriya.. Bas aap jaisi haseena ko dekh kar apne aap man mein khayal aur utho par lawz aa jaate hai...

Yasmine pretended to blush a little...

Aladdin - mujhe lagta hai hume ab ghar dekhkar baat pakki karni chahiye...

Aladdin moved ahead.. Yasmine smiled seeing at jealous Aladdin

Mirza took him to upper floor by staircase... Aladdin and Yasmine was carefully observing the house while climbing up...

Suddenly mirza stopped near the door...

Yasmine - kya hua... Mirza ji...

Intentionally ji laid stress on ji...

Mirza-arey!! Maaf kariye ka mohtarma main galat chaabi utha laya... Main abhi gaya aur abhi aaya..

Mirza went down to bring the keys...

Aladdin pulled Yasmine towards her...

Yasmine - kalechor..

Aladdin - sana!!! Tumhe kya ho gaya hai.. Tum uss chipku mirza ko itna bhao kyu de rahi ho...

Yasmine forcly realsed her hand..

Yasmine - tumhe usse kya... Mirza accha insaan hai..

Aladdin laughed - kuch hi der pehle mili ho usse aur vo accha insaan hogaya tumhaare liye itna azeez ho gaya.. Aur main.. Jo tumhaare saathraha humesha...

Aladdin realized he said more than he should

Yasmine - tum mere acche dost ho na.. Kalechor...

Aladdin - sirf dost..

Aladdin was shocked at being friend zoned

Yasmine - haan vaise hi dost jaise main tumhaari thi... Jab tum Shezaadi ke saath mohabbat ki baate kar rahe hote ho...

Yasmine got angry and stepped away from him..

Aladdin knew he did the same thing to her when he was with Meher...

Mirza arrived - Chaliye mohtarma aapko humara aashiyana dikhaate hai..

Yasmine stared at Aladdin like a tigress stare at his prey... And pretend to be happy and went with Mirza..

Aladdin - iss mirza ke bacche ki toh main jaan lelunga...

Hope you like this part... I tried my best to show jealous Aladdin... And this is finally an FF.. At starting I never thought it to be an FF but as the story goes.. I am pretty sure that this is going to take more parts

Do like, comment and tell your opinion about the part...