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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi ADHYians...

Here is a short poem...randomly written...on the last sweet simple scene between Vibha... Its penned in hindi but given the translation in Eng)

Ek Lamha... (one Moment)

Pareshan...dhoondne nikla mein...uss beete hue lamhon ka hissab (worried...I went looking for those past collected moments)

Par kadam le aaye aur ruke tere paas (but my footsteps lead me to you)

Tumne palat kar dekha toh mili humari parchaiyaan (You turned around and our shadows met)

Chah kar bhi naa chupa saka tumse meri bechain nazrein (I could not hide from you my restlessness)

Lautaya tumne mere pareshan atith ka kitaab (slowly you gave back the book of my troubled past)

Phir udi teri zulfein iss raat ki hawaon mein aur.... (Then the breezy night blew the wind in your hair and... )

Tumhari dhimi si awaaz...aur ankhon ki narmiyat (the softness of your voice and eyes...

Tumhara ahsanmand hona....aur samajhna....(your gratitude and understanding

Aai Sakhi.. Aai Dil (O friend...Oh Heart...

Tham sa gaya samha.... (Time just stopped...

Hai yeh bas Aaj Ke Kitaab Ka Ek Lamha....bas Ek Lamha...(it is but just One moment...in the Diary of Today...


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dd

P.S. Please let me know your good/bad comments..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey thats beautiful😳
great work👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful poetry👏 perfectly depicts Vikram's situation 👏👏
Loved it😃
Keep writing more😳😊

I got inspired by your lines and here are the ones that i wrote randomly... they may sound immature or meaningless or maybe out of sync (i have never written a poetry before, no knowledge about it😆)
What do you think?

Kyun?
kyun unn yaadon mein pareshan ho tum?
Kyun andar hi rukhe ho tum?

Kis jidh parr ade ho tum? ?
Kyun chahate nahi samajhna tum?

Iss aadat ke sahare, kyun bhoola diya khud ko,
Beeti parchaiyon mein sama liya hai khud ko

Galtiyaan jo tumne kabhi na kii,
Kyun uske khatir sehe rahe ho tum?

Kyun...kyun..
Edited by SuperChillz1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was lovely DD. Makes me sigh and smile. Only a poet could have sensed the magic of the moment and captured it so beautifully for us. Thanks.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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DD strikes again!!!! this is spellbinding..👏.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Beautiful poetry👏 perfectly depicts Vikram's situation 👏👏
Loved it😃
Keep writing more😳😊

I got inspired by your lines and here are the ones that i wrote randomly... they may sound immature or meaningless or maybe out of sync (i have never written a poetry before, no knowledge about it😆)
What do you think?

Kyun?
kyun unn yaadon mein pareshan ho tum?
Kyun andar hi rukha ho tum?

Kis jidh parr ade ho tum? ?
Kyun chahate nahi samajhna tum?

Iss aadat ke sahare, kyun bhoola diya khud ko,
Beeti parchaiyon mein sama liya hai khud ko

Galtiyaan jo tumne kabhi na kii,
Kyun uske khatir sehe rahe ho tum?

Kyun...kyun..

Haye thats amazing May👏 especially that "ghaltiyaan jo tumne kabhi na ki, ku uski khatir sehe rahe ho tum❤️ perfectly suits on shobha's life
u should write more🤗
Edited by Huma.Malik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Dd so sweet & May yours also was wonderful !!
Gives those smiles of joy to see such nice words penned down for two beautiful people Vikram & Shobha!! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's very well written 😛


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Huma.Malik

hey thats beautiful😳

great work👍🏼


Thanks dear...just amateur stuff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Beautiful poetry👏 perfectly depicts Vikram's situation 👏👏
Loved it😃
Keep writing more😳😊

I got inspired by your lines and here are the ones that i wrote randomly... they may sound immature or meaningless or maybe out of sync (i have never written a poetry before, no knowledge about it😆)
What do you think?

Kyun?
kyun unn yaadon mein pareshan ho tum?
Kyun andar hi rukhe ho tum?

Kis jidh parr ade ho tum? ?
Kyun chahate nahi samajhna tum?

Iss aadat ke sahare, kyun bhoola diya khud ko,
Beeti parchaiyon mein sama liya hai khud ko

Galtiyaan jo tumne kabhi na kii,
Kyun uske khatir sehe rahe ho tum?

Kyun...kyun..


Awesome May...this is beautiful...

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