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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: pop77

Rakhi Speed up.😃


hi dear,
I'm little lazy na. i know but hope fully aaj raat tak ,I'll post the next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Next part:-

Reva takes her things but her both hands are full and still one thing have to be taken she looks at yash who saw it but intentionally ignore it.

Reva to her mind dekh ke bhi kaise khare hain dekho, ek baar bola nehi mein tumhara help karu , aab kya karu itne kuch leke kaise chalu mein , mujhe kisis se karma chaiye tha,par iye rehethe hue bhi dekho kaise then she close her eyes and said lowly suniye''

Yash looking here and there and then said aapne hume kuch kaha.

Reva to her mind , iha hum dono ke chor ke koi hain kya,then told yash ha,aapse kehi mein ke mujhe thora madat chaiye aapki.

Yash raised his eyes and told reva kya, aapne kya kaha phir se ek baar kehiye.

Reva:-Hume aapki madat chaiye''

Yash:-oh toh humne sahi suna, thik hain kahiye,kya madat''..

Reva told him to take somethings then they leave the room but after placed thing correctly int heri respective places, reva again told yash aapne madat kya humari isliye sukria par iska galat phayda maat uthana kabhi, hum iha rhenege jarur par.

Yash:-aap hume itna vishwash kar sakte hain''aap ready ho jaiye hume subhaka puja bhi karma hain''

Reva:-ha,

After this reva goes from there but yash still stand there and said to his mind aap hume kab smajhoge, kab samjhoge, humne aapke sath kuch bhi nehi kya, iye toh ,humara majburi hain hum na hi aapko kehe sakte hain hum aapko kitna pyaar karte hain nahi hum aapko kehe sakte hain kaun hain asli gunahgaar,iye kaise majburi ,kyuon humesha mere sath hi '. But yash's chain of thought broke by reva'

Reva:-aap iha kahre kyon ho, jaldi kijiye,aap na aaj kya hua, itna late kar rehe ho?

Yash looks at reva then told her oh baas aise hi, and goes from there.

After some time both Yash and reva doing puja and arti.Reva sing a bhajan.Yash one time more thinks tumhara gaana bhi kitna kjhubsurat hain, kitna [abitra hain , sunte hi lagta hain bhagwan ke paas hum sab baithe hain'..

Here arya still sleeping in his room''

Some villagers and mukhiya jee came there and invite them to attaint he puja.On behalf of Rani ma,Reva, Yash and ayra will go and attain the puja,

Personally yash didn't like the fact that arya will go with them but just for rani ma he stays silent.

Reva understand yash feel uneasy but didn't know the reason'.

At the evening, reva ready to go with Yash but arya man came there and told them, that he also want to go with them'..

Yash didn't like it and reva also.

They attain the puja, Sharad saw them but when he saw yash his anger again rise but Lakhi stops him there.

They enjoy the puja'..here Yash saw bolu and goes to talk with him.Reva saw it and try to go there but some one call her and told her that Lakhi wants to talk with her.

Reva at first didn't know what to do but she goes to meet her mother.

Reva goes there but didn't saw any one there. Reva feared again , she feels some one again try to harm her but she thinks kuwar yash again but'she thinks hard when some one placed hand on her mouth and try to close all the door of her breathe. she feels suffocated and struggle lots but failed.

Here at village, Yash searching reva here and there. He looks tensed and when he found Aryaman also not there. She looks more feared and tensed. She runs form there and asked every one about reva or arya.

A little girl told him that she saw reva didi goes that side.

Yash runs there but that girl told him that Aryaman also go there but yash didn't heard it'..

Here in that khandahar some how reva manged to free herself and then told kuwar jee, aapko saram nehi aata na, itna kuch ho gaya, phir bhi aap phir se,kyuon aur ksi liye, itna kuch kar dia mere sath phir bhi, aap'.mahal mein toh bahut bahut bari bahri baat kar rehe the par aab, kya hua'age maat barna, hum aapko jaan se mar denge,

Here that time Yash reached there and shouts reva, kaha ho aap?

Reva shocked to hear it, she looks at the man who stands in front of her who try to harm her just few moments ago and also ready to do it but if yash is not there then who but that man again came close and try to cover her mouth again here reva also shout kuwar jeeeeeeeeeeeee''

She struggled more to free her self. Here Yash heard the sound and runs behind the sound and saw some one try to kill reva'..

Yash stand for a moment and then shout reva. Here that man heard it and turns him self and saw yash stand there and now runs towards him. Suddenly, that man leave reva nd throw her in the floor and runs from there.

Yash reached there and saw reva unconsciously lay there, uske sar se khoon nikal raha hain,Yash try to wake her up then he tie her head by hand kerchief''..

Then he carried her in his arms and reached at village.

Shard saw it and again try to shout at him he takes reva and lay her on the bed of there home but then try to bit him but that time reva call yash.

But villagers and Sharad think that reva told the name of her gunagar''.

Reva wake up and saw sharad try to bit Yash and she told ruk jaiye sharad bhaiya'.

Sharad told her nehi reva aaj tu mujeh nehi rokegi, iye smajhta kya hain aapne aap ko.mein isse aaj jaan se'

Reva ruk jaiye sharad bhaiya aapko humari kasam'

Sharad stands there but mukhiya jee told reva, beti, tu daar mat, hum rani ma se isse baat ka '

Sharad:-kya hoga, oh kabhi bhi aapne bete ka baarien mein bura nehi sunge, jaise pehele kya iss baar bhi'. Jaise ma waise hi bete'''

Yash:-aap sab ko agar mujhe marna hain, bolna hain toh bola Par humari ma ke baarein mein kuch bhi nehi bolna'

Sharad:-Teri himmat kasie hui aapni muh kholne ke tujhe toh mein.thne he try to slapped yash but reva hold it and said aap aapne gusse mein itna andhe ho agye mere baat ka bhi asar nehi hota. Aur aap sab, kaise soch lya humare pati humara bura change, kya hua, kaise mujhe iye chot lagi, kisine pucha, nehi baas phaisla kar liya, kyuon?aur iye maat bhuliye iye iha ke bare kuwar jee hain ,aap sab ko unke samman deke baat karma chaiye aur aap sab humari rani ma ke baarein aise sochte hain, kaise?itna kuch kya unhone hum sab ke liye aur aap sab.

Sharad:-tu reva chup kar, aur isse hume samal ne de,aur aaj se tu uss mahal mein nehi jayegi.

Reva:-bhaiya, hum aapka samaan karte hain par iska matlab iye nehi humne kisiko bhi humara pati ke baarein mein kisi ko bhi bolne haq dia hain'..hum aapne pati ke sath humara ghar hi wapas jayenge, aur iye jo chot lagi oh mere pair phisalne ke liye hua hain, agar uss samay kuwar jee agar nehi pauchte toh hum, aap sab bina kuch jane baas pahisla kar liya'..

Mukhiya jee:-oh beti humne socha, hum se bahut bari galti ho gayi hume maaf kar dijiye, kuwar jee''

Lakhi :-hume bhi she told sharad to told sorry to kuwar jee but sharad refuse and leave the place'..

Lakhi told sorry on behalf of Sharad but Yash told her that, it's ok, ti's no his or their fault,

After some time they leave the place'..

In the car,Reva try to talk with yash but yash ignore her and before entering the palace just told reva that he call doctor to dress the wound'..

Reva know some how yash sad about many things.

Yash asked one of the servants about Aryaman and he replied that chote kuwar is in his room''

Yash goes there and to meet aryaman''

In aryaman's room, yash enter there and slapped him first then told him last time I warn u from the next time if I see u to near my wife or try to harm her then I'll cross my every limit and forgets everything. Remember this carefully.

Here in the room, reva sit in the sofa .some times ago doctor came and dresses her wound'.

Reva thinks about the incident and some picsture, puzzle clear ho rehi hain but sill some questions will be answer by Yashvardhan her husband''.


Yash enter the room and saw reva sleeping in the sofa.He take her and placed her in the bed and tucked her well with blanket but when he turns to leave reva caught his wrist and told him Kuwar jee.


Precap:-no Precap''..



Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
chalo meine update kar dia😃, aap aab log jaldi se comment karo😉😆😛
i know mein bahut late hoon 😊, kya karu bahut lazy hoon😊😛.
agar aap sab mujhe jor nehi dete update karne mein toh sayad mein bhool jati ....😆😉
love u all😳😊,
waiting for ur lovely comments😊.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
amazing update di......
very nice....the way reva defended yash sounds very nice.....
di plzzz baki ke ff bhi update karo na........
n my favorite one also........u haven't updated it from sooo long...
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz............
thnx for the pm.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Hi Rakhi...

Very nice update...The way Reva defended Yash was very nice... Yash is hurt...very natural... and Arya being slapped by Yash was again amazing...but the best part was Reva holding Yash's hands....

Why no precap...??? Not fair....

Cont soon...

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Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
oh maaaaaaa god loved it

Yash enter the room and saw reva sleeping in the sofa.He take her and placed her in the bed and tucked her well with blanket but when he turns to leave reva caught his wrist and told him Kuwar jee.


i love this aage kya hua bolo na 😳😳😉😆😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
omg...rakhi..fantabulous update jaan
reva is 2 gud
hey..no precap..kyu..n last me itna romantic scene tha..ise complete kyu ni kiya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
I read half part..When i read full i commet ..
I waiting for next part even i don;t finish part yet..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

fantastic update,but why no precap?

Edited by kavita_1987 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
HI RAKHI AWESOOOOOOOOOME UD
LOVED IT TOTALLY
MINDBLOWING
SUPERBBBBBBBBBBB
LOVELYYYYYYYYYY

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DEEPA

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