Short ff of ReVaYaSh update in page 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: halaa

that was very interesting update. i just loved it.plz continue soon.


thanks dear for loving the update.
I'll continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Nice part..Finally Reva think that Yash is innocent.. I like that when Sharad try to bitten YAsh & Reva scream about don't touch my husband.

Waiting for Reva Q..wht she going to ask Yash..

When are U planing to update next part..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
brilliant update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
I'll update soon friends.thanks for loving this ff.
love u all.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

I'll update soon friendsl.



When? Waiting.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: pop77



When? Waiting.😃


oh kya na payal jee, mein na thori lazy hoon😆😉😛 but it
ll post by today night😃😳😊😛😆.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: pop77

Nice part..Finally Reva think that Yash is innocent.. I like that when Sharad try to bitten YAsh & Reva scream about don't touch my husband.

Waiting for Reva Q..wht she going to ask Yash..

When are U planing to update next part..


thanks for loving the part.
yes fianlly reva thinks that yash is innocent,thanks for loving the scenre/
just little time then u'll know the reva's question and yash's ans.
Tonight, after little time I'll update it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: cute-aly

brilliant update 👏

superbbbbbbbbbb


thanks for loving the update😊........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

I'll post it tonight😃.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Next Part:-

Yash enter the room and saw reva sleeping in the sofa. He take her and placed her in the bed and tucked her well with blanket but when he turns to leave reva caught his wrist and told him Kuwar jee.

Yash stops there and turns to see his wife who has tears in her eyes….Yash cannot understand the matters then he understand it. He shocked and cannot react for a moment.

Reva is waiting for Yash's reaction but she saw him stood silently but his eyes tell something, his helpless, his promise, his honesty……..Reva waits for some time but yash cannot break his silence and turns to leave when Reva called him again and told kya aap kuch nehi kehenge.

Yash stops there and just told raat bahut ho gaya hain, so jaiye reva.

Reva shocked and cannot understand about his silence still.

Yash leave the room and reva still sat on the bed and looks confused.

Reva to her mind akhir baat kya hain, kyuon kuwar jee kuch nehi bol rehe hain, kyuon kuwar jee chale gaye bina kuch kehe, akhir baat kya hain….aur mein kaise samajh nehi paayi iye baat, itne din inke sath bhi…..Hey bhagwan,mein iye kya akr diye, unko, mien goli bhi maari, hath uthaya, bina kuch karte hue unhe kitna kuch kaha, kitna sunaya, phir bhi unhone kuch nehi kaha mujhe, mere haaar iljam chulchap suntan raha, mein kyuon aise, hey bhagwan itna baara galati mein kaise kar dia, mein gusse se pagal ho gayi aur sahi galat pehechani bhi nehi…..kyuon ,then reva cover her face with her hands and crying for sometimes when her mind told her that it's yash her kuwar jee who accept the blame in front of whole village then mere kya fault hain humne kya kya, par humne job hi kuch kya,oh bhi toh sahi nehi hain, par unhone kuch kaha kyuon nehi, kuwar jee toh kehe sakte the………..mujhe abhi unse baat karma hain, oh hain kaha.

Reva get up from the bed and came out from the room and searching her hubby Yashvardhan.

Suddenly she remembers something and runs there. Reva reached the garden and saw Yash jhule mein baithe hain chupchap. Reva can feel he is crying silently there.

Reva runs there and stand there but yash feels some one stand behind him and turns and saw reva there.

Yash:-Aap iha kyuon aaye ho?

Reva:-Kuwar jee.

Yash:-Kya baat hain ,here yash can also see Reva's eyes red and swell.

Yash quickly stand up and asked kya hua aapko?aap ro kyuon rehe hain, kisi ne kuch kaha kya aapko?

Reva:-Aap ………….

Yash :-Kya hua kahiye?

Reva:-aap bahut bure ho…………..

Yash shocked to hear it then just smiles and tell mujhe pata hain , humne aapke sath job hi kuch kya hain uske baad.

Suddenly reva hugged him andsaid aap itne acche kyuon ho, kuwar jee,kyuon?

Yash looks confused and told reva, aap iye kya kehe rehe hain ?

Reva weeps her tears and told aap jante nehi hum kis baarein mein bol rehe hain.

Yash just looks at the ground first then oh hum.

Reva:-Kyuon Kuwar jee,kyuon aapne aise kya, kyuon, aapne itna bara jhooth kaha humse sab se, kyuon?

Yash:-Reva oh hum.

Reva:-aapko aapna maan ke baarein mein ek bhi sochna nehi tha kya,jo gunah aapne kya nehi uske liye aap kyuon saja bhugt rehe hain, kyuon aapne aapko aise …………

Yash:-Reva, hum……….

Reva:-kya hum kuwar jee, aapne, aise kyuon kya aapko sach aaj batana hoga..

Yash:-Aap kaunsa sach aur kis baarein mein bol rehe hain hume kuch smajh mein nehi aaraha hain,

Reva:-aap aise kyuon kar rehe hain aapko sab samajh mein araha hain phir bhi aap aise…………

Yash:-sayad kuch baat raaz rehe toh sab ke liye accha hain.

Reva:-nehi accha hain hume aaj sacchai jaana hain ,akhir kyuon aapne aise kya, kyuon, sach kya hain, kaun hain humara asli gunah gar, kaun hain?

Yash:-Reva, zidd mat kariye.

Reva:-Nehi, hume jaana hain aur aap iye baat aap chupa kyuon rehe hain, accha aap iye baat boliye iye toh mein samajh gayi ke aapne iye shaadi humse majburi mein kye hain par kya,shaadi mein oh wada bhi jhooth tha, aapne toh ma aur bapu ke saamne kaha tha ke haar wada jo aapne agni ke saamne lya hain sab sacche maan se lya hain phir,

Yash:-Hum tab bhi sach kehe the aur aaj bhi sach kehe rehe hain.Humne har oh wada jo agni ke saamne lya tha oh hume aaj bhi iyaad hain aur oh sab sach hain.

Reva:-Toh, aur usse ek wade mein iye bhi hain ki,pati patni ek doosre se kuch nehi chupayega, toh aap kyuon chupa rehe hain itna bara sach.

Yash:-Kya karoge aap oh sach janke ,

Reva:-Hume jaana hain kaun hain oh gunah gar jiske liye humne ek acche devta saman pati se,itna galti se bat kya, itna bara gunha kya aapna hath tuhye,unpe goli tak chala dia….

Yash helplessly looks at reva and reva looks at yash to hear truth from him.

Precap:-Kya reva ko iye sach Yash bolega, kya karegi reva iye sach janke.




Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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