AkYa FF - The Knock of a Smile Last Chapter & Epilogue,PAGE - 45 - Page 7

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-Paulomi- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: akyabiggestfan

Awww!

Muskaan finally called Akash and Ananya as mamma and papa😭😭(yeh khushi ke aasu hai...😆)
It was so touching...and angry young woman Ananya...on the move!
Wah!
Akash mana raha hai...and Muskaan ko kapde bhi pehnaye...how sweet!!!😳
I love this ff...I don't want it to end ever😉

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was extremely beautiful.I don't know why but I have a strange feeling that muskaan is their own daughter❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: akyalove0896

It was extremely beautiful.I don't know why but I have a strange feeling that muskaan is their own daughter❤️

No Muskaan is not their daughter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
I WILL EAT MUSKAAN UP! how can be someone this much cuteee? *_*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sweet n cute updateee.. Heart touchinggg updateee..
Complete family.. Muskan is reallly sooo cutee.. I lov her sooo muchhh... Lovddd it a lottt.. Thnks fr pm ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Awww..
Such a cute family.
Muskaan is so adorable.
Aww...
Mskaan called AkYa as Mumma and Papa...
That was the best moment...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was a heart touching update... Muskaan calling Akya as mamma and papa... amazing!!!! Continue soon and thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER - 3

CHAPTER - 4

When they came outside,Akash moved towards his car.Muskaan immediately shouted,"Na,na,na,papa na!"Akash asked,"Kya hua?"Muskaan said,"Na,na,na booo na!"Akash asked,"Ye booo' kya hai?"Ananya replied,"'Booo' matlab tumhaari car.Vo tumhaari car mein jaana nehi chahti."Akash asked,"To phir kaise jaayenge beta?"Muskaan made a vrrrooom' sound by folding her lips.Akash asked,"Ye kya bol rahi hai Ananya mujhe kuch samajhme nehi aa raha hai?"Muskaan ran to reach his bike.She patted on it and made the same sound.Akash said,"Oh to bike pe jaana hai.Par beta tum to bohot choti ho na?"But Muskaan was too stubborn to listen.Ananya said,"Chalo na Akash bike par chalte hai vaise bhi bohot waqt ho gaya hai hum dono ko bike ride par gaye huye."Akash agreed.After bringing the keys,when Akash started the bike,Ananya picked Muskaan up to make her sit in between her and Akash,but Muskaan didn't agree and said,"Na mamma!"She nodded her head and pointed to the sit before Akash.Akash said,"No Muskaan yaha nehi.Tum peeche betho,to mamma tumhe pakarke bethegi.Papa ko bike chalaani hai na,agar tum saamne bethogi to tumhe kaun pakrega?"Muskaan made a puppy face and made a pleading tone and said,"Papa!"Now Akash felt very sorry for her.He,helplessly said,"Dekho na,Ananya kaise muh bana rahi hai.Ab?"Ananya said,"Main abhi aati hu."Saying,she went inside and returned with a dupatta for her.She picked Muskaan up and made her sit in front of Akash.She then tied both Muskaan and Akash with the dupatta and then said,"Lo ab Muskaan ke geerne ka koi dar nehi hai."Akash,with an applauding tone,said to Muskaan,"Dekha Muskaan papa ke saath rehte rehte mamma bhi kitni intelligent ho gayi hai."Ananya put her hands on her waist and asked,"Kya matlab?"Akash said,"Kuch nehi betho."Ananya sat behind him and hugged him tightly from the back.Akash said,"Aur thora close hokar betho na."Ananya came more close to him and then said,"Ab hawa bhi pass nehi kar sakti."Muskaan,in an angry tone tapped on the bike and said,"Papa!"Akash put the bike on gear and then said,"Ha ha chalo beta chalte hai."He then rode off.In the whole way,Akash didn't ride very fast.Everyone enjoyed the ride very much especially Muskaan.he opened her hands and enjoyed the air which was touching her face and was blowing her hair.She continuously made the vrrrooom' sound by her mouth and Ananya and Akash,after quite a long time,enjoyed their bike ride and of course their bike romance.After sometime,they stopped in front of a restaurant.Muskaan was put down by Akash and after parking the bike,they entered inside and captured a table.

Ananya made Muskaan sit on the chair but the table was too high for Muskaan,so she stood up on the chair and climbed up on the table just like the way she used to do at home.Ananya,on seeing this,said,"Muskaan very bad manners!Ye ghar nehi hai.Yaha agar aise bethogi to sab Muskaan ko bad girl bolenge.Come on neeche utro."Muskaan came down and sat on the chair and made a puppy face and tried to peep over the table and helplessly said,"Mamma!Mmm!"She understood Muskaan's difficulty and made her sit on her lap and asked,"Ab thik hai?"Muskaan gave a big smile.After that they started discussing about what to order.After selecting their one,Ananya said,"Muskaan ke liye oats order kar dete hai."Akash made a face and then said,"Kya Ananya tum bhi na?Hum sab bahaar khaane aaye hai taste change karne ke liye.Hamaare liye continental aur Muskaan ke liye vo gheese peete oats.Ye to vo ghar mein bhi khaati hai,uske liye kuch different order kardo."Ananya said,"Main jaanti hu Akash,par Muskaan ke liye ye sab khaana thik nehi hai.Bachchi hai tabiyat kharaab ho sakti hai."Akash protested,"Par iska matlab ye bilkul bhi nehi hai ke main tumhe is vajah se usey vo sab oats aur cornflakes etc ye sab boaring khaana aaj khilaane dunga."He then looked at Muskaan and asked,"Ha to bolo Muskaan beta kya khaaogi?"Muskaan tapped on the table and said,"Mamma toc!Mamma toc!"Ananya said,"No chocolates Muskaan!Vaise bhi mujhe pata hai ke papa mujhse chupa kar aksar tumhaare liye chocolates laate hai."Muskaan made a sad face and then said,"Papa toc!"Akash said,"Koi chocolate waala item dedo na usko."Ananya said,"Itna chocolate khaayegi na to daat kharaab ho jaayenge iske."Akash said,"Arey aisa kuch order karo jo nutricious bhi ho aur chocolate ka bhi,Problem solve."Ananya thought for a moment and then said,"Ek kaam karti hu chocolate milkshake order kar deti hu Muskaan bhi khush aur main bhi khush."After Akash gave the order,Muskaan rubbed her hands with each other and said,"Mamma!"Ananya said,"Arey vaah!Muskaan to kitni good girl hai usko pata hai ke khaane se pehle haath dhona parta hai.Chalo haath dhokar aate hai."Akash asked,"Haath dhone ki kya zarurat hai?Kaunsa haath se khaayegi?"Ananya replied,"Kuch habits bachpan se hi lagaani chahiye.Samjhe!"Ananya put Muskaan down.Now Muskaan started walking before Ananya.She was walking in such a way as if a duckling had learnt to walk for the first time.She was looking like a puffed duckling and was walking by tapping her shoes,which was making sound like horn,with her two pony tails on both sides of her head swinging continuously with her each step.She was looking damn cute and adorable.She grabbed everyones eyes.All were looking at her.Muskaan got scared.She hid behind Ananya.A young girl came and tried to pamper Muskaan,but she was so scared that she cried out,"Mamma!"Ananya picked her up and the girl pulled her cheeks.Muskaan felt very disturbed and she made a disturbing sound and hugged Ananya by her neck.After that,Ananya washed Muskaan's hands properly and took her back to her seat.They had their dinner and Muskaan happily had her milkshake,though Ananya also gave her a few bites of their food,but it seemed Muskaan was not interested in them.After finishing their dinner,Akash paid the bill and they returned to their home.

[ 1 MONTH LATER ]

Akash,Ananya and Muskaan went to the police station to talk with Karan.While getting down from the bike,Muskaan saw a shop nearby.She pulled Akash's shirt and pointed to the shop and whispered,"Papa toc!"Akash saw the shop and she too whispered,"Ok tum mamma ke saath andar jaao main lekar aata hu."He then said to Ananya,"Ananya tum usko lekar andar jaao main bike park karke aata hu."Ananya said,"Bas ek hi laana."Akash asked,"Kya?"Ananya replied,"Muskaan ka chocolate."Akash widened his eyes and was about to ask the most natural question,but guessing his question,she answered,"Tum dono baap-beti ke rag rag se waakif hu main."Saying,she picked up Muskaan and waited for Akash to park his bike.Karan welcomed them.On seeing Muskaan,he said,"To Muskaan madam chocolate kha rahi hai."Muskaan immediately made an angry face and hid the chocolate and then said,"Mei toc!Mee papa!"Karan raised his hands and said,"Iam so sorry!Ye Muskaan ki hi chocolate hai!"Ananya said,"Karan actually maine aur Akash ne kuch faisla liya hai Muskaan ko lekar jo aapka janna bohot zaruri hai."Karan asked,"Kaisa faisla?"Akash replied,"Vo...humne socha hai ke...agar agle 4 mahine ke andar Muskaan ke parents na mile to hum...To hum Muskaan ko goad le lenge."Karan said,"Arey ye to bohot achchi baat hai.Aap dono ko bhi ek bachcha mil jaayega aur ek bin ma-baap ki bachchi ko bhi ma-baap ka naam aur pyar mil jaayega aur main ye jaanta hu ke aap dono se achche parents Muskaan ko mil hi nehi sakte."Ananya said,"Kisne kaha Muskaan ke paas ma nehi hai,main hu na uski ma.Hai na Muskaan?"Muskaan didn't understand anything but she hugged Ananya by her neck and said,"Mei mamma!"Ananya too hugged her tightly and said,"Mela bachcha!"She then kissed on her forehead.

CHAPTER - 5

Edited by -Paulomi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Diii. . mujhe muskan chahiye. . mujhe is ke gaal khichne hai. . phir mai mai usey kha jsungi.. :D aur bht jor se uske gaal khichungi.. abar ok jore jore chor dibo. . thn kissiey dibo atttooo gulo.. thn ok kheye felbo...

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