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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a quite different OS...i do not know if everyone will like it or not :/ This OS is dedicated to my 2 cuiteee writing fans Anna and Renessa!! <3
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Fog covered the window from the outside...it was early morning! A dignified lady was making breakfast in the kitchen! Yes, Anannya she was!

Anannya: Oh! No! Why Natasha not picking up the phone?...ye ladki bhi na, kaun kahega ki ye meri behen hain?

At dining table
'No mom will feed me first, bad mein tu!' 'No No No mom mujhe pehle khilayegi!' 'Jyada jid mat kar mera paratha pehle!' 'Nehi mera milk aur musile pehle!'...
Anannya heard the as usal morning fight had begun!
Anannya: Lo chalu ho gayi meri dono loud speakers!
She headed towards the dining table with breakfasts on a tray!

Anannya: Abony, Adrila?! Tumlog kab ladna chodogi??
Yes the kids were ABONY SALUJA & ADRILA SALUJA! Identical twin daughters of Akash and Anannya!
Abony: Mom aap mujhe pehle paratha khilado, varna thanda ho jayega!
Adrila: No! Please mom mere milk aur musile bhi to pade pade sar jayenge na?
Anannya: *Getting tired of their fight* Uffo! Tum dono dhikneme bilkul ek aur adaat mein bilkul alaag kaise ban gaayi...

'Bilkul apne mom dad ke tarah, haha'- said a strong, manly voice from behind!
Anannya: Oh Akash tum uth gaaye! chalo main tumhare liye chaye banake lati hu!
Akash: Yes please, and so baccho sabki to chutti hain aaj chalogi bahar??
Abony and Adrila were so happy that they jumped on their daddy together screaming YESSS!

Suddenly the door bell rang! Adrila ran to the door and shouted hamari Maan baby aayi hain! Akash and Abony turned around and saw Natasha was standing there with a baby on her lap!
Natasha was the younger sister of Anannya and was married to her boyfriend a succesful business man Rohit Mafatlal! The baby was their 1.5 year old daughter Maan Mafatlal!

Akash: *Taking Maan on his lap* Dekho baccho Natasha masi bhi agayi!
Meanwhile Anannya came out with 3 cups of tea because she already heard her choti had come with Maan baby from the kitchen!
Anannya: *Kissed Maan, Maan smiled* Kiya choti subha se kitni baar phone kiya, kaha thi?
Natasha: *Hugging Anannya* Maat bol Any di! Teri vanji aur uski baap ne mere dimaag ko kharab karke rakkha hua hain!
Akash: Haan tum sab ladkiyon ki to same problem, shadi ke baad pati barbaad!
The two sisters gave a angry 'Oh really?!' look to Akash together!
Anannya: Vaise hain kaha Rohit? Uske bhi to chutti hain na?
Natasha: Woh thoda kam tha use, no worries farmhouse time pe poch jayega Rohit!
Anannya: FARMHOUSE?!!
Natasha: Oho! As usal Akash jeeju gave surprise to Any di haan?
Anannya looked at Akash and Akash gave his naughty smile!
Akash: Maine ek BBQ party plan ki thi hamare farmhouse mein, to Nats aur Rohit ko bhi bula liya!

Abony and Adrila were jumping with joy!
Abony: Chal packing kar lete hain!
Adrila: Haan chal Abo!
Natasha: Wait Abo-Adu, main aur Maan baby bhi ate hain tumhe help karne!
They went inside!

Anannya: Lo abhi nasta kaun khayega...jaisa bap, vaisi betiya!
Akash: *Holds Anannya tightly in his arms* What? Tum unke baap pe hi marti ho yaad rakhna!
Anannya: Kiya kar rahe ho Akash, koyi dekh lega!
Akash: Accha to aur paas ane ke liye bol rahi ho, haan?
Anannya: Kiya?!! Akash tumhari do panch sal ki betiya hain, abhi to sudhar jaao!
Akash: Agar sudhar jata to betiya kaise hoti?
Anannya: Dhet! *hits Akash's chest with her hands fakely while blushing*

Finally they reached at the farmhouse at evening! They wanted to come earlier, but there was a huge traffic on the road due to some political reasons!
Rohit: Oho, finally aaplog aye, maine to socha tha meri biwi ne mujhe kahi dhokha to nehi de diya! Hahaha! *Winking at Nats*
Natasha: *Blushing* Kiya tumbhi!
Anannya: Chalo Abo-Adu mausaji ko namaste karo?
Abo-Adu: Namaste mausaji!
Rohit:Arreh yaar! Abony, Adrila tum dono ko abhitaak mausaji thik se pehchan nehi paate! Kaun Abo ho aur kaun Adu!
Abony: Hahahah! Main hu pink dress mein Abony!
Adrila: Aur main Adrila white dress main!
Rohit Haha! My cutie babies! *He kissed their cheecks hugging them together*
Akash: Chal mere bhai hum pool side main jaate hain aur intezaam dekhle!
Rohit: Haan Akash bhai! Par pehle apni angel ko thoda pyaar karlu! *He took Maan in his arms*
Maan: Papp! *She started eating Rohit's cheecks*
Rohit: Ole meri bacchi, haan papa aagaye! *Kissed Maan's forehead*
Natasha: Abhi mum ke godi me aajayo Maan! Papa aur mausaji thola kam kalle? *Took Maan from Rohit*
Anannya: Chal choti undaar chalte hain, bachho ko lekar fresh hokar ate hain!

At BBQ party
They were having an awesome time together...everyone had lamb BBQ while Akash and Abony had fish BBQ!
Adrila: Papa why don't you eat red meat?
Akash: Kyunki mujhe woh pasand nehi ata hain na baby!
Abony: Yes i am a daddy's girl *Hugged Akash tightly*
Seeing this Adrila ran to Anannya and hugged her tightly!
Adrila: And i am a mommy's girl!

Akash, Anannya, Natasha, Rohit all of them laughed together seeing this!
It was getting late night, Maan was already sleeping in Rohit's arms and Abo-Adu were sleepy as well! So they decided to go to their rooms! Anannya made Abo-Adu sleep in the kids room and Natasha put the sleeping little Maan on their bed!

Rohit: Nats kiya bolti ho? *Looked at Nats with a romantic look*
Natasha: *Understanding what rohit meant* Maan so rahi hain Rohit!
Rohit: To?? Maan agar uth bhi jayegi to bhi nehi samjhegi ki mum-papa kiya kar rahe hain! *winning smile*
Natasha hugged him blushing as a yes from her side!

Anannya just entered their bedroom and was shocked the whole room was decorated with candles!
Akash: *Hugging Anannya from the behind* So u liked it?
Anannya: *Turned around and hugged Akash* Oh Akash kiya kiya karte ho tum!
Akash: Sirf tumse pyaar! *winked*
Then Akash played the song 'Chal chale apne ghar humsafar' on his phone...and asked Anannya for a dance!
Anannya put her hands on his neck and Akash grabbed her closer by her waist! They were having a beautiful romantic dance! After some time...Akash lifted Anannya in his arms, kissed Anannya's forehead! Anannya blushed and hid her face in his chest! Then Akash started walking towards their bed...


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akyaholic thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Aww it was so lovely <3
I loved the concept of a happy perfect family :D
Okay so their twin daughters wow :)
Natasha being ananya's sister was so surprising after knowing there actual chemistry in the show :p
Akash ufff as usual a perfect husband
Loved the akya moments particularly akash's dialogues :D
A cute family :')
Loved it so much
Thank you my Yudi girl :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
hmmm 😊😊
dats something cute
2 twins daughters :) wow abony & adrila :) love the part when abony said i am daddy's gurl & adrila said i am mommy's girl..dat was amazing
nuts & rohit & maan , so cute :)
Happy family 😊😊😊
very cute story
very nice
well done apu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwwieeehhh... :*
bohut hi cutie pie wala story hai.
Akya has twin daughters and RoSha has one daughter..
Natasha Ananya ki choti sis.. That shocked me a lot..
She is so nice here.
BBQ party chal rahi hai...
Akya and RoSha romanticism at its best...
Loved it a lot.
Akya and RoSha...romantic and hot...
Lovely names of the kids.
Love you a lot,Bubu...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Omg!! This is so adorable OS..
I loveddd it..!!
Wow.. Finally i can see AkYa's future through ur OS warna show mein halat aur bigadte dikh rahe hai..
Natasha ananya's younger sis & married to rohit mafatlal.. Wow.. I wished really her bf was rohit in the show..
At least aakash n ananya ka piccha to chuttha uss natasha se.. Lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superrr ... sorry for the late answer ... but honesly it was such a great one ...Akya's twin daughter one like her dad and the other like her mom... and Natasha Anaya's sister wow what a great idea :p ... I really loved that line when Akash said " Agar sudhar jata to betiya kaise hoti?" lol ...overall awesome :) :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was a lovely OS and whenever you pm me send the link.
I loved Akya's dialogue baazi here😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow what a family romantic.. Now became a matured writer😉... Such a beautiful start with kids ..it's like a fairy tale story... Good job nikhad...i like each and every lines of this OS...so I loved it completely...keep writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwwh! So sweet of you each and everyone! Anna, nidhi, anika, zubiya, neelima, sweetie, renessa, palu di and sara di!

I AM JUST SO MESMERISED BY THE SIGHT OF YOUR COMMEMTS! THIS REVIEWS ALWAYS INPIRES ME AND MAKES ME SO ALIVE! thanks a tooon my lovelies, love u guys a looot :*

and Sara di specially for you awwh i am just so happy and feeling like jumping by the comment now i have become a mature writer :') so happy to get this from you! and i am really happy that u liked the whole story completely <3

Edited by yudigirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was so good yaar...
Aur tu bhi na kabhi nuts ko aakash ki behn bana deti hai aur kabhi ananya ki... :v :v :v

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