RaTri story: Tum bin...jaaun kahan..Last Part on page 17 - Page 3

A very good write up dear... ⭐️👏

Love this one a lot dear...can feel Raghav's situations... He s losing them whom he loved most... It's really surprising that Trisha s going to marry someone else... Raghav slapped Trisha n a drunken state... Very curious to know what had happened with them... Will wait for the next part... Update soon dear...

Even am curious to know what Raghav is set to tel Rajbir. What cud have happen?

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Me first .of to read it .Will be back with my review soon

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome update Manisha. Really loved it soo much .loved to read your story after such a long time .such emotional update. You have written raghav and Trisha emotional s soo wonderfully .really the scene in raghavs house was soo emotional. It really made me cry .you have written that scene so wonderfully. Loves to see trisha and the teams Care for raghav. Hope all becomes fine soon .waiting to see what happened between Raghav and Trisha .thanks a lot for the update. Really loved it soo much

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very emotional update Manisha and loved your way of explaining the inner turmoil of Raghav 👏

Very sincerely you have penned down the emotional flow. Raghav going to his home back to his bad memories and shattered enough to recall that Trsiha is marrying the next day.

Such a pathetic situation, and very intense feelings shown! Raghav going straight to Trsiha and slapping her hardly - this was too much. Yes too much for Trisha, but for himself too.

What had happened in this one month, this is to be revealed. We wanna know it.

Now at his home, Raghav wud only repent his actions towards his love! Has she really got married?

Is there any chance that he will have his love back to him? I wonder.

Nice narrative Manisha, really liked it and loved to see ya posting after such long time. No i won't ask you why so late, cos this is cherishing for me to see you back and posting again, whatever be the reason.

Luv ya sweetie for this very emotional flow and RaTri's cries making me sad too.

Thanks dear ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Originally posted by: babita..

Very nice yet emotional start Manisha di ⭐️

I felt too bad for Raghav going to his home and remembering all the worst days of his childhood. And if this was not good enough, the news shook him that he has to attend Trisha's marriage now.

Oh, he drenched himself in drinks And what a fate, that we all don't know what happened that made them apart. He slapped her ?? 😭 The most killing time for both Raghav and Trisha.

Rajbir is there for him, but who is there for her ??

I felt too sad and the worst thing is that her marriage took place ??

Narration is too beautiful to imagine every scene di 👏👏

And the feelings are truly expressed ! But my heart got hurt to see RaTri hurt. Tirsha is not happy with this marriage it seems, then what happend that she had to have the slap from Raghav ??

Too heart wrenching !

Will wait for the next moves as the title has made it clear that Raghav will be craving for her and saying tum bin jaaun kahan ??

Thanks di, your efforts are too superb with this emotional story and you have done a great job here.

Whatever be the reason, you have written again, it's everything to me, loves and thanks ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Awesome update manisha di ,it was really so emotional .you have written Raghav's state of mind soo wonderfully. Thanks for the wonderful update

Originally posted by: bawaswift

A very good write up dear... ⭐️👏

But its too emotional... felt too bad for both Raghav n Trisha...

Kyun rual rahi hai dono ko... readers are not far behind along with you in this... 😳

Liked but felt sad Raghav visiting his home with all sad memories coming to him n he got shattered...

The worst was yet to come when he was reminded of his attending the marriage of Trisha the next day...

Drunk... drunk... n drunk... going there in that state n did what was not expected.. but his mind did it... ! The slap of the Century.. !

Trisha felt for him... he kind of blame her... n we are unknown to what happened in between them.. that even the team doesnt know...

Wud like to know that now as Raghav has decided to tell Rajbir the truth.. !

Rajbir takiing care of him... but he is full of repenting way... ??/ I doubt..

Looking forward to what will happen next.. Is Trisha really got married.. ?? / Any twist that cud averted it... ??/

You write so well Manisha dear... Keep writing more... 👏

Loved to read your story... though its a sad one... but your narration made it coming n touching straight the hearts of your readers... Keep it up dear... !

God bless... !!!